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BROKE LESNAR 10-08-2014 09:24 AM

Defiant vs. Packed Graves [Packed Graves Wins]
 
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Packed Graves 10-08-2014 04:47 PM

Sup old dude, going one.

Trying to use old names plays or bad wording?

Packed Graves 10-08-2014 09:41 PM

brain damaging hits, one hook i bet you'll do a backspin
as these fist leave you disabled, bitch- Uh Oh might gain sexual attraction

Defiant 10-13-2014 11:07 PM

im gonna need an ext like an hour at most just gotta do someovertime and this phone fucked my bar before

Packed Graves 10-13-2014 11:32 PM

Go for it.

Defiant 10-14-2014 02:27 AM

Beating big headed faggots like u, ain't much else I adore or rather
So ull only see unmarked graves, when a pregnant bitch finds out your the father

BROKE LESNAR 10-14-2014 11:06 AM

I thought PG took this easily before Defiant posted. He had a solid bar with a relevent concept and witticism. Defiant actually fought for this and stepped his game up. Now, the obv problem with the bar would be "rather/father" lmao. BUT, I know Defiant is either european or australian so I have to take his pronunciation into account. Now I'm unaware of anybody anywhere pronouncing rather like father, but I watched Snatch before and brad pitt was a gypsie who pronounced dog as dag so I won't totally dismiss the bar for that.

v-PG

Packed Graves 10-14-2014 01:14 PM

1-0

Packed Graves 10-15-2014 03:29 PM

This is a fucking joke.

El Muffin 10-15-2014 04:22 PM

Yea I got pg here

Rather n father dnt rhyme at all to me

I understand you have accent but id love to hear how u pronounce either wrd coz im not seeing it

Pg I thought my uhoh line was simplrr but better but urs was enough to win

V. Pg

Tic 10-15-2014 05:19 PM

PG got this. Defiant had the creativity factor despite unmarked graves being used, but father and rather don't rhyme where I'm from. PG worded his weirdly, but I liked the idea of the punch.

PG

Destroyer 10-15-2014 05:25 PM

rather/father?

vote pg

Kin 10-15-2014 05:31 PM

Pg... nice wordin...pretty solid

Def...rhyme itself didnt work for me...punch was ehh


Vote

Pg

theMuzzl3 10-15-2014 05:56 PM

PG first line was dope. The second part of the second line was a bit of a lack of a punch IMO.

Defiant's post was evil. The first line didn't really form a sentence if rather was used as an adverb.


I'm gonna vote against the norm here, and say Defiant's lines were more offensive and attacking. Voting more on content, rather than structure... this time.

/v Defiant


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