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Blanco Bishop 10-07-2014 01:28 AM

blanco bishop vs defiant Defiant wins
 
@Defiant


Ten. Due Thursday.

Defiant 10-07-2014 02:32 AM

Yeh sure

Blanco Bishop 10-10-2014 09:58 AM

vets give my style the Nod..say i have the beast within
only thing u getting Signed Off is the cast imma leave u in.
u winning is a long shot, for me it's point blank range b
you'd need cia, fbi, AND kgb training to even graze me.
I'm climbing ranks, making quick work of sloppy newbies
I'm slowly taking the BA over..u were just assigned modding duties.
skill set is of a peasant. u know it in ur heart so ur hurting
NEVER b a match for this Titan..when u can't do that to your wording.
my hoes love to experiment. when I'm done they swallow clean
admittedly your girl's a Freak too..w/ a face just in time for Halloween.

Blanco Bishop 10-13-2014 09:31 AM

@Defiant. U going to take a couple weeks with this or......?

Defiant 10-14-2014 06:24 AM

ugly as fuck, asking a chick out is instant rejection
Only person ever saying 'you wanna fuk bb' is that troll in the discussion section
names in a crossword , I'm top 5 n u wouldn't take long to seal see
if we're askin to fill in the blanc, it's bad wording, horrible flow and got raped by Jilti
tryna get him a win, pathetic how easy your head'll rattle
ironic I gave you murda sho, when that describes the last 10 of your battles
His record w/ chicks is nill, ull never see there hurl end
His whole style isnt just imperfection, he'd consider one as his girlfriend
lost to camp, jil, unfuckwitable, n don't think that that's all
Ya record is so Pathetic close up, muffys tryna use it for a pic battle

Defiant 10-15-2014 05:09 AM

Links

En Sabah nur vs windu
Muff vs woosah


2 links @Blanco Bishop

En Sabah Nur 10-16-2014 05:56 AM

vets give my style the Nod..say i have the beast within
only thing u getting Signed Off is the cast imma leave u in.
I'm climbing ranks, making quick work of sloppy newbies
I'm slowly taking the BA over..u were just assigned modding duties.
skill set is of a peasant. u know it in ur heart so ur hurting
NEVER b a match for this Titan..when u can't do that to your wording.
my hoes love to experiment. when I'm done they swallow clean
admittedly your girl's a Freak too..w/ a face just in time for Halloween.

vs

ugly as fuck, asking a chick out is instant rejection
Only person ever saying 'you wanna fuk bb' is that troll in the discussion section
tryna get him a win, pathetic how easy your head'll rattle
ironic I gave you murda sho, when that describes the last 10 of your battles
His record w/ chicks is nill, ull never see there hurl end
His whole style isnt just imperfection, he'd consider one as his girlfriend


entertaining battle. havent seen blanco so polished. dont change your style. keep this format, this exact format and dont revert back to your previous one. this one is much better. defiant made it close, could of had a haymaker with his last bar but the wording negated it. good shit by both.

mvgt bishop blanco

El Muffin 10-16-2014 11:55 AM

Blanco

Signed off
Modding duties

The last two were played as fuck.

Especially Titan. Because I can link you to a match in rm where I used that wordplay back in 08(hall of champ thread. Its there just saw it) . Your version was better imo. But its something ive personally done sooo nope

Defiant
Opener
Fill in the blanc
Murda sho

That closer was wack tho. N Im usually inclined to like with lines w/ my name in em lol


V/ defiant for one more quote n less played shit that I dint come up with 6-7 yrs ago

I agree tho that style chng shows promise. Jus think u came played . U were unaware tho.

Defiant 10-28-2014 12:13 AM

1-1 uppin

jilti 10-28-2014 03:41 PM

vets give my style the Nod..say i have the beast within
only thing u getting Signed Off is the cast imma leave u in.
cool
u winning is a long shot, for me it's point blank range b
you'd need cia, fbi, AND kgb training to even graze me.
miss
I'm climbing ranks, making quick work of sloppy newbies
I'm slowly taking the BA over..u were just assigned modding duties.
lol dope
skill set is of a peasant. u know it in ur heart so ur hurting
NEVER b a match for this Titan..when u can't do that to your wording.
liked it
my hoes love to experiment. when I'm done they swallow clean
admittedly your girl's a Freak too..w/ a face just in time for Halloween.
haha and its almost halloween, perfect


Vs

ugly as fuck, asking a chick out is instant rejection
Only person ever saying 'you wanna fuk bb' is that troll in the discussion section
lmao nice
names in a crossword , I'm top 5 n u wouldn't take long to seal see
if we're askin to fill in the blanc, it's bad wording, horrible flow and got raped by Jilti
lol nice
tryna get him a win, pathetic how easy your head'll rattle
ironic I gave you murda sho, when that describes the last 10 of your battles
nah. could either be a diss or compliment
His record w/ chicks is nill, ull never see there hurl end
His whole style isnt just imperfection, he'd consider one as his girlfriend
miss
lost to camp, jil, unfuckwitable, n don't think that that's all
Ya record is so Pathetic close up, muffys tryna use it for a pic battle
ok

good battle
LOTB was either assigned modies duties or wanna fuk bb
Vote Blanco

Sharp 10-31-2014 12:19 AM

vets give my style the Nod..say i have the beast within
only thing u getting Signed Off is the cast imma leave u in.
ok
u winning is a long shot, for me it's point blank range b
you'd need cia, fbi, AND kgb training to even graze me.
not really feeling this
I'm climbing ranks, making quick work of sloppy newbies
I'm slowly taking the BA over..u were just assigned modding duties.
nice
skill set is of a peasant. u know it in ur heart so ur hurting
NEVER b a match for this Titan..when u can't do that to your wording.
cool
my hoes love to experiment. when I'm done they swallow clean
admittedly your girl's a Freak too..w/ a face just in time for Halloween.
Alright


ugly as fuck, asking a chick out is instant rejection
Only person ever saying 'you wanna fuk bb' is that troll in the discussion section
lol nice
names in a crossword , I'm top 5 n u wouldn't take long to seal see
if we're askin to fill in the blanc, it's bad wording, horrible flow and got raped by Jilti
cool
tryna get him a win, pathetic how easy your head'll rattle
ironic I gave you murda sho, when that describes the last 10 of your battles
ok
His record w/ chicks is nill, ull never see there hurl end
His whole style isnt just imperfection, he'd consider one as his girlfriend
eh
lost to camp, jil, unfuckwitable, n don't think that that's all
Ya record is so Pathetic close up, muffys tryna use it for a pic battle
okish



Cloooose battle. Reread it but I think defs first two hit the hardest so he gets the edge for me. But Blanco's taking the ba over line was dope

V/Defiant

~RustyGunZ~ 11-04-2014 12:11 PM

vets give my style the Nod..say i have the beast within
only thing u getting Signed Off is the cast imma leave u in.
I'm climbing ranks, making quick work of sloppy newbies
I'm slowly taking the BA over..u were just assigned modding duties.

those were the only okay ones, still not great. rest was played/weak

vs

ugly as fuck, asking a chick out is instant rejection
Only person ever saying 'you wanna fuk bb' is that troll in the discussion section
names in a crossword , I'm top 5 n u wouldn't take long to seal see
if we're askin to fill in the blanc, it's bad wording, horrible flow and got raped by Jilti
lost to camp, jil, unfuckwitable, n don't think that that's all
Ya record is so Pathetic close up, muffys tryna use it for a pic battle

all better than his but still eh. bad wording. bb in butt was cool

v/def

Verbal 11-04-2014 01:15 PM

Blanco Bishop

Quote:

vets give my style the Nod..say i have the beast within
only thing u getting Signed Off is the cast imma leave u in.
Signed off/cast is a good punchline though the couplet does not seem to go together to well. Like it doesn't transition from the 1st to 2nd really. But the 2nd line itself is cool.

Quote:

u winning is a long shot, for me it's point blank range b
you'd need cia, fbi, AND kgb training to even graze me.
Not quite as creative as the signed off/cast punch. Feels like it's just a self hype type of line. Kind of filler.

Quote:

I'm climbing ranks, making quick work of sloppy newbies
I'm slowly taking the BA over..u were just assigned modding duties.
Haha, I like it. This couplet fits together the best. It is a funny put down.

Quote:

skill set is of a peasant. u know it in ur heart so ur hurting
NEVER b a match for this Titan..when u can't do that to your wording.
Not the most creative but good personal to Defiant.

Quote:

my hoes love to experiment. when I'm done they swallow clean
admittedly your girl's a Freak too..w/ a face just in time for Halloween.
Current and relevant. Doesn't hit as hard as it could but the couplet fits together nice.


Defiant

Quote:

ugly as fuck, asking a chick out is instant rejection
Only person ever saying 'you wanna fuk bb' is that troll in the discussion section
Did Bishop ever say that? I don't remember. Good couplet.

Quote:

names in a crossword , I'm top 5 n u wouldn't take long to seal see
if we're askin to fill in the blanc, it's bad wording, horrible flow and got raped by Jilti

Ah I see what you did there. I think.

Quote:

tryna get him a win, pathetic how easy your head'll rattle
ironic I gave you murda sho, when that describes the last 10 of your battles
Not that hard of a punch. That's all I can say.

Quote:

His record w/ chicks is nill, ull never see there hurl end
His whole style isnt just imperfection, he'd consider one as his girlfriend
Good personal.

Quote:

lost to camp, jil, unfuckwitable, n don't think that that's all
Ya record is so Pathetic close up, muffys tryna use it for a pic battle
Haha I like it the record/muffy pic battle line. This is good.


I vote for Defiant. He has the best lines.

Defiant 11-05-2014 01:17 AM

4-2 up

Certain 11-05-2014 01:30 AM

Blanco Bishop: Nothing here was at all original. I think you may be burning out because of how often you battle. The actual punch concepts (cast signed, Titan and Halloween) were played as hell. The personal even was pretty played because it's be used against so many moderators. And the CIA, FBI and KGB line didn't go anywhere.

Defiant: You went heavy on personals, which was enough to win. But the personals weren't well-executed. The opener was good enough, and the closer was a decent concept. But the jilti line was a complete flop, and the murda sho line didn't make sense as worded.

Vote: Defiant


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