Who am I
 

What am I? A corrupt kid, lone and perturbed
Only a lost soul that's roaming the earth
I chose to be left alone but I'm only disturbed
With my choices and these voices.. holding me cursed
What do I deserve? Happiness, compassion at heart
A boost in life to help me and come back to this art
Music is an escape, I break through it and change
It's joy, my voice, and helps me move through the day
When I listen, it takes me to a beautiful place
I'm satisfied with life as it feels soothing with grace
But it's a fantasy, I'm trapped, loathing living this way
I feel detached, reality is drifting away...
Who can I reach out to to vent?
What can I change to be blessed?
What do I have to accept in order to pass through the stress?
I've climbed miles of mountains, ain't seen the last of it yet
I feel I've met my only success in gasping for breath...

Mercy has returned! I dig this a lot bro. Cool rhyme scheme too. Also I relate to your themes, I feel much the same sometimes. What I think really does it for me is that you use a nice steady conversational tone of voice, like most of my favorite rappers. So many people here think they are Aesop Rock or some shit, so it's cool to see someone who aspires to connect to the soul rather than a bunch of mental masturbation just for the sake of it. Moar.

Thanks yo

cool.

Who you is.

I liked it, especially the music distraction part, and the climbing of the mountain... never to reach the top; only to grasp for breath along your stride. Good piece.