the muzzle
 

You had a great verse in the awol this week.

Really insightful and well written.

Good job bro.

Fuck bags.

Greed was looki ng good

Then sumthing happened

It went paragraph styke for two lines

Then sum over the top internal rhyme lol

dude muzzle actually dropped a good verse. I can't hate on that.

What u can hate on is the fact greed is prolly gonna loose.

@Greed

Wtf man?

lol tag game is on point.

Do you honestly think Muzzle's verse was good or are having a giggle right now?

Muzzle was rhyming in parables like sun tsu on fkn peyote

It was ok. Better than greed.

I used to read ESPN magazine when I shit...Now I chat with you guys

Honestly, I care what you guys think as writers. But, I don't care what you think of me.

Thank you Innovator for liking my verse. It was a little over the top in the straying and hard to put 1 + 2 together. I'll work on advice I received from Adonis.

The thing that strikes me as strange is, its AOWL, meaning ARTistic integrity. However, I will attempt to make my shit more readable and less drawn out. I refused to write in the format of:

(16 syllables) / 16 syllables / 16 syllables / 16 syllables

and make words slightly rhyme at the end of each quarter note. In battle, I'd take time to do that... but in AOWL, look at ex-champ Frank. Does he write to a format? Hell no, he just makes it fuckin awesome and thats it.

Lines I found in my phones notepad. Put stuff around it to create the theme of contemplation.

Ya'll gay for stories. I was not about to write that much.

Word. If that's the stance you take then expect people to see through your ish not really connecting well. It caused you a loss against someone you otherwise would have beaten if you had put a little bit more work in it. You get a topic for a reason.

My nig greed was like

Sweat in my pores..poseidon on the ocean floor close to earths core wielding a sword like gimme some moar

Killin it

Yall cantfuk with greed

Hes like canibus no notebook

Lol joins a topical league.

But hates writing stories.

All my shit came straight from my head. I take plagiarism very seriously. Good battle though -- I feel you would have won if you had more time on your hands.

IMO, you'd be better with battles.

Stfu muzzle.