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brokenhal0 10-01-2014 04:32 AM

red roses
 
red roses hood love masked as animosity to polars
we shifting in emotional oceans smell like coco jojoba
gets colder with gray skies act wise beyond the ears
control my 8 eyes see beyond ya fears smartass
you prey upon my prayers but gods holy i forgive all
judgement is painless understand sickles make skin crawl
sitting in your cousins living room listenin to miley cyrus
eating goat cheese call me saturns favorite virus black rosarys
tested by high entity's sacred gland apex I process thought
without memory a complex course caused convexed cubes
to compress upon density concepts flawed in energy
lemme symbolize a child's smile chase ya bitch ass
rottweiler style fierce ferociousness light the bath salts
sharpening knifes on asphalt cats eye marbles open wide
when i blast off my hook give a glass jaw titanium pride
flick the ash off the fires form the carbon
you had war on ya side eyes of a martian to slimey
cant hide the missing option i live what rowdys pipers watchin
the triune trident split spitting spider webs at the sun
magic circles of spectacular fun call me a spider kid
peter pan i never grow up since i begun
just grow love third eye cyclops jean gray needs some vicodin
when my vibes hit the cerebellum your brain look like a viper pit
raise the ashes compassion past ask the future
for a crash landing your fails make da computers laugh
electric humor a sense of change to a lesser gloomer
i would never ruin you consumers of death understand
i once was all and in the end all is what i got left
in the range its strange im the man whos name
relates to a mess of rumors a tumor forming in cosmic cells
avoid those cancers the truth renews your life
spin closer watch the opposites meld given hell
i rock well destructer sharp like king koopas bite
karma cuts the stone i build my ruins at night
landscapes surreal ideas is focused mind engraved in steel
this shit forreal like watching your parents at there lowest
hopeless as the world turns don't lose your focus

Wise Wiggles 10-01-2014 09:37 AM

Nothing. But. That. Raw. Shit..

big baby 10-01-2014 10:46 AM

idk if cuz I reading wrong but u sound FUCKA stoned?

big baby 10-01-2014 01:39 PM

THAT BEING SAID. This has insane amount of tangents. The thought process is cool to see and I enjoyed it. The random, not so random randomness is intense. I love random thoughts you had and enjoyed them as tiny couplets

sharping knifes on asphalt cats eye marbles open wide
when i blast off my hook give a glass jaw titanium pride

i think sharpening? not sharping. seems to be like in some form of space thought and then what you're seeing immediately and how you connect those things through writing

brokenhal0 10-01-2014 03:09 PM

Quote:

big baby;411532
sharping knifes on asphalt cats eye marbles open wide
when i blast off my hook give a glass jaw titanium pride

i think sharpening? not sharping. seems to be like in some form of space thought and then what you're seeing immediately and how you connect those things through writing


lol thanks for the edit man i was thinking to fast ..thanks for the feedback fellaz


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