theMuzzl3 Writes, Daily
 

theMuzzl3 writes, daily.
The page in which he writes about himself shall end, maybe.
In hopes that we're mutual friends, I'd hope you'd reflect how I pray for the.
Dumbass theMuzzl3, he tries to right his wrongs, depending strictly on his own safety.
Gravity hits the situation -- theMuzzl3 mask pulls him down, but his chin begins to rise and you glimpse his frown.
Then, his face becomes clear. You reply, "oh, God, oh dear, why must you appear?"
This is like the inbox of my diary, flying upward while all else is pulled too far down to see.
From this view point, theMuzzl3's mask looks tiny; but we're surprised to see that he who wore it is still up with us.
The drop point is still the drop, and the mask is awaiting its recipient.
May you not go through the same torture of being muted;
nor ever shall you be reputed to have diluted transmutations.
Remain a student, because the master is forever ascended upon.
Tears fall, and the master must catch them and explain a ton of information.
Modular synthesis of organic material must remain analog.
Dialog is to sustain its simplistic nature and go on being complicated, in the tongue.
Discrimination, moderation, powers that be… can be synonymous, monopolized.
Or, moderators can perform the powers that 'be' at their fingertips, and be anonymously
performing their duties, righteously, and without regret of others' harmful
production of alienated extracts of virtual dust that may spontaneously combust;
and robustly shatter random souls into nonexistence, once again.
This is my stance: don't say any words, and you'll be safe: from the plan.

187 persons were Muzzled -- lol.

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First half felt like an attempt at storytelling and was a good effort. Subject matter was hard for me to get into because round about ways of talking about getting hated on a message board doesn't hold much interest for me or anybody who has had sex in their lifetime... BUT switch the subject to tits, dick, and poop jokes and I would be all over that shit so you should do more of that.

The second half seemed like you wanted to try to flex some more technical skills but it ended up killing the story progression for me. Much of the content in this part felt like semi coherent gibberish to me. I see glimpses of an interesting structure here but falls flat at a lot of spots as well. More tits and dick jokes would bring it together better in my opinion.

I think shortening your schemes and syllables per line a bit would make it look and read smoother. Forget about making a complicated scheme especially if it you have a message to tell, not being absolutely clear and relatable to a casual listener is a bigger crime to me than not rhyming a string of big words. Get the basics down first before you start doing advanced stuff. Many great classics in all forms of art are in fact the mastery of the simple and basic and it is the those that are most enduring and long living in culture. Netcees is just a strange little contrarian sub set of online society that confuses you about what is wrong or right. Also add more poop jokes.

Exactly like that

No poop jokes muzzle plz.

Hes trolling I hope.

Other than the poop/dick shit

Great feed andy

I felt as if I learned something.

Fukq topical tho :)

I am no by means an expert, but here is my lowly advice...
Muzzle your grasp of the manipulation of language is splendidly improving. My suggestion is to hone your rhymes. By rhymes I am specifying internal rhymes, as well as more advanced schematics, such as multi-syllables. Start slow, one does not have to do the 4-6 syllables that are the average mean in this forum. Even two will suffice as you undertake the quest of mastery. But again I applaud the progress you have made. The sentences you have crafted are more refined. The language is more noble. Unfortunately some of the lines are a bit drawn out without any well executed internal rhyme scheme to keep it flowing.
When building a structure remember that the foundation is paramount, especially if you are deciding on reaching the high heavens. One must be grounded before becoming a medium of that which is above. In other words, one must be well rooted before touching the stars.
Also I am elated that you are writing daily, this will lead to steadfast results where flourishing as a wordsmith is the only possibility. Do not get lazy, keep learning, and practicing as if your hair was on fire. Those that make it seem effortless only are able to do so because they have put a lot of effort, and spare time in order to be effortless.

Thank you.

Fuqkin A, Thanks bro. I do want to talk about poop a lot though... not so much with the dicks. By you saying "I felt as if I learned something", it gives me a spark of life to live on within netcees; which most people probably ignorantly hate.




Thank you for your constructive criticism. I do know of what you speak, as far as the last part about people who have put a lot of time into constructing rhymes, breaking them down, and spitting them back out (I'm not ignorant to Hip Hop, I'm just a dumb white man). My main focus right now is to pace myself, and to learn slowly, and not post very often... unless its needed... then my hit list will be executed.

Wack as fuck

Garbage.

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