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The Beauty of The Crow
The character of a crow is a harrier to the most It's scarier for it's terror and very stern in it's prose The evil in it's eyes seem feeble through it's disguise It's equal to an eagle, though lethal throughout it's mind It's soul shadowed by darkness.. cold, shallowed and artless It's heart sparks the harshness where it marks its' target A heartless being seeking a harmless carcass It leaps far aches just to carve n' harvest Poised in position with the choice of it's victim... It's vindictive and depicted with no remorse for inflictions Soaring miles through the clouds, forcing child's into shrouds Morbid, wild and profound is the style of this hound A living mystery... giving misery upon the innocent We've witnessed it's wicked imagery, given it's difference It's lives for bloodlust, you must run when it's choosing who's disposed But it's just the ugly truth about the beauty of the crow... |
I will feed this when I see you hittin up other posts in here with comments...otherwise u gonna find out they dont play that here
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I ain't "playin'" nothing. I'm simply posting my shit. I'll comment when I get around to it. so don't freepost on my pieces if you ain't got feed, that's a waste of my time. I'll feed when I get a chance.
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best lines to me
Poised in position with the choice of it's victim... It's vindictive and depicted with no remorse for inflictions overall much better read then ya other drop...this was more wit' it as far as rhyme schemes an content...pretty solid... HoLLa |
thanks for the feed. respect
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seemed a little loose and choppy in some ends. picked up in a few lines. the cohesion was cool. seemed like a younger version of you wrote some lines and then a more experienced version wrote the other lines. seemed weird reading at times.
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