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Meth 09-04-2014 04:15 PM

Notebook vs. Muff [Muff Wins]
 
The 1-2 Punch League


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@Notebook @Muff Diggity

Notebook 09-08-2014 02:47 PM

This pussy is sick? It seems the logic in your ploy's bent
..Besides the fact Muff gets checked more than Gynaecologist appointments

El Muffin 09-08-2014 03:27 PM

rly?




I indulge in the ganja. I get the absolute package
I stay smokin on that Sticky, Note..u use to getda "kick me" 1s on ur back u Faggot


ah

w.e

gtg

Camp Bell 09-08-2014 08:37 PM

note

not sure what it is but your punch flowed well, it just didnt
have that much of an impact and lacked creativity.

muff

i liked this, my only gripe would be the use of the word, "faggot"
to complete the rhyme, i thought it wasnt needed or could've been
worded a bit more sharper. good drop tho fellas.

vote: muff

Window Taco 09-08-2014 10:54 PM

I feel Muff won this. His flow and setup were stellar, but the imagery and overall punch combined with the nameplay was the most effective. Note's line was decent, but it lacked the amount of impact and extra that Muff employed. I think had Note flowed better and added a rarer reference for muff then he might've offset Muff loading up his bar with extra elements.

V/Muff

Certain 09-08-2014 11:08 PM

Notebook: Muff-as-pussy jokes are horribly played, but your wording was substantially better here.

Muff Diggity: I liked this concept but not the wording all that much. But it wasn't so bad as to cost you the win.

Vote: Muff Diggity

Meth 09-09-2014 02:36 AM

Muff wins

Simple concept worded decently beats terribly played concept worded poorly

BROKE LESNAR 09-09-2014 03:28 AM

Muff had a much better constructed bar and it was more appealing and entertaining. Note's wasn't bad either, the np was just kind of obvious lol. Other than that it was humorous.

v-Muff

Kin 09-09-2014 09:22 AM

I like notes set up still relating to the punch...I thought it was dope...worded good maybe a lil predictable for a nameplay tho...solid

Muff...U lucky u didnt keep that 1st punch u posted cuz that wasnt touchin his...
But this one was creative...didnt like the rhyming wordz...but the creativity edges the easier nameplays to me

Vote...muff daddy

sral 09-10-2014 09:06 AM

Muff got it. Note not bad, though...

KnowP 09-12-2014 10:07 PM

The muff/pussy hits are mad played n this one was just average. Sticky note was a good flip/word play

Vote muff

Destroyer 09-13-2014 11:18 AM

vote
muff

other dude was just too played

YDK 09-14-2014 09:39 AM

Not a big fin of either but muff had the better punch
vote muff

RudeBoy 09-14-2014 09:40 AM

Muff was better

V/muff


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