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MKG 08-28-2014 10:45 PM

Dagels goodbye letter to RB. (Poem)
 
The Leaving
Last Piece By: Ghost Element


Leaving no note or a suitable sign
of exiting the house. Creeping through
the rooms like the sneaking of a modern
day mouse. Seizing to say goodbye to my
spouse, opening the door slowly to be sure
that this is what I want. Thinking to myself
like a note to self whether or not I am truly
done. Realizing that there is always a time
where you just have to run. Turning the handle
counterclockwise, tightly closing my heavy eyes.
Taking a quick look back at the family that raised
me, then wiping away the tears before they stick
and dry. This is the start of a new life, and I must
be strong and stay loyal to my own decision. For
if I stopped to listen, I'd know that I am not one
to be the person that would be worth missing. As
I take my first step out of the house, the atmosphere
falls down on me heavier then ever expected. But
this is the new life I’ve selected, so this is the decision
that must be respected. Packing my clothes and belongings
in two bags, one on my back and another in my free hand.
Now I stand here alone, standing as a fourteen year old
and a free man. I know for a fact that no body will remember
my name, I never made an accomplishment. Causing nothing
but trouble so I grant myself a punishment. By leaving the one
place where I could speak free and moving on too a world where
I have to earn the right too even eat. Maybe I am wrong about
this choice ..but this is my leaving.

Goodbye Rap battles.

Diode 08-28-2014 10:46 PM

formatting something like this when it makes no sense to format it like this is stupid.

Ghost1 08-28-2014 10:52 PM

To his credit im sure he was an emotional wreck when he wrote this

MKG 08-28-2014 11:01 PM

I'm pretty sure he still is everytime he writes something tbh. Prolly as a result of the heavy atmosphere hitting him when he steps outside

Certain 08-28-2014 11:09 PM

@Dagel, I'm willing to change your user name to Modern Day Mouse, if you'd prefer.

~RustyGunZ~ 08-28-2014 11:12 PM

fuck he is terrible

Certain 08-28-2014 11:13 PM

@Split thinks this is good writing.

Diode 08-28-2014 11:25 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Certain (Post 392046)
@Split thinks this is good writing.

and @witty

MKG 08-28-2014 11:29 PM

Yeah I heard witty and split nominated it for HOF

Diode 08-28-2014 11:29 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Bags (Post 392023)
To his credit im sure he was an emotional wreck when he wrote this

i chortled bags

out loud, irl

because i know it is true

Split 08-28-2014 11:32 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by MKG (Post 392070)
Yeah I heard witty and split nominated it for HOF

good 1 m8

Witty 08-29-2014 02:52 AM

@MKG - you have not earned the right to say my name, don't make me destroy you.
@Certain @Diode - This was written in like 2006, he would have been like 14 or some shit.

And yes, I do think he is a good writer.

MKG 08-29-2014 02:56 AM

I thought you were nice

Witty 08-29-2014 03:02 AM

I am nice :D

<3

MKG 08-29-2014 03:06 AM

Plz be my friend plz

Witty 08-29-2014 03:10 AM

Nope.

MKG 08-29-2014 03:38 AM

:( why no why

sral 08-29-2014 05:16 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Bags (Post 392023)
To his credit im sure he was an emotional wreck when he wrote this

word

didnt his best friend fuck his girlfriend behind his back then come online to boast about smashing that snagglepuss?

i wouldnt personally, but i can imagine a lesser man catching feels over a sloot

MKG 08-29-2014 06:13 AM

You're kidding me right

Orc 08-29-2014 06:21 AM

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