Vividlyvague vs. Kin - Kin wins
 

Due Monday Midnight Pacific
@Vividlyvague @Kin

checkin in

Catch him at tha ATM, Gloves on, Give him a Shank
so there's no Fresh Printz when I See Vivi-in Banks!

This faggot's a cardigan sporter, pardon the spoiler yo,
but kin's always hard-on his brothers, mountain their backs n going for broke.

Lol. Heads up Kin, that Vivian Banks concept was used a cpl weeks ago when he battled Camp. Fresh Prince/Vivian Banks. Not saying you bit, just wanted to let u know. I'm sure he's probably heard it before at some point and alot of concepts are recycled anyway. Cool flip tho. Nice and succinct. Vivid..it's strange to see a "go for broke" line that isn't necessarily directed at me for a change, LOL.

Going with vivid regardless.

v-vivid

Oh word to camp.....great mindz think alike....

Yeah there's really no way I can give kin the nod when he used a concept we all saw 2 weeks ago
Not that it's his fault or anything

But yeah

Voting vivid

I thought both of these were cool, Fresh Prince/Vivian Banks vs Broke back mountain I thought both concepts were pretty cool and executed well (although Vivid was a wee wordy).

It's really a toss up but I'll have to give this one to Kin... just thought it was a crisper cleaner hit.

Kin: Someone (Camp Bell?) used a vivy nameplay a couple weeks ago. The execution here was better, though. That was a smoothly written line.

Vividlyvague: Your wordplay was tortured and stretched, and your line had nothing to do with your opponent. I prefer at least a nameplay attempt.

This is awkward. Kin used the same nameplay concept that someone used a couple weeks ago, but he did it better. Vividlyvague had a bad line. I'll go with played over bad.

Vote: Kin

I wasn't here two weeks ago so to me that pw and execution was sick

The kin line was cool too but I thought kind was harder

Vote kin

V viv.

Had a dope mountain play.

Viv banks was solid but Used on him already

Kin, your bar at first glance is very simple & straight-forward, but you anchored in some pretty creative wordplay. At first, I was opposed to whole "gangster-appeal" that you kicked for your setup, but the punch created a connected & enjoyable effect. Very well-executed.
Vivid, I've seen a LOT of Brokeback Mountain lines...so that kind of took a lot away for me. However, you did a decent job of flipping it in a new way. Still, I think that if you simplified the punch and made it less wordy, it would've hit harder. Felt it to be a bit forced...


Vote: Kin.

Both bars was cool but I'm leaning towards the Fresh prince bar it had a nice spin on the nameplay to put a edge of extra creativity on the concept imo... v/King

I'm going with Kin here, line was fresh to my eyes at least, though i can imagine its been done at some point

Kin just had his shit worded better imo

I hadn't seen Vivian banks before

v/kin

V. Kin


Used or not, that was a dope flip. I haven't seen it before. Broke back mountain flips are played as well and this one wasn't one of the fresher flips I've seen.

I gotta vote for vivid decent punch an kin used a concept that was just used so kinda takes away from the freshness of it

i used that vivian banks against him already and it was harder.
i aint mad tho. but i cant give kin the nod due to those facts

vote: vivid