Vividlyvague vs. Camp Bell - Camp Bell wins
 

Due Monday Midnight Pacific

@Vividlyvague @Camp Bell

hi.

...yup.

This bitch jocking the fresh prince like he's getting paid
but a botched robbery the only time we'll see vivian banks

Campus never for higher learning... he don't even get knowledge from hoes his wallet carries.
This win couldn't be saved by the Bell if this black Zach wifed it like the chick that he married.

Vividly was way to stretched for my liking . If ur gonna stretch a bar that much to for te concept it really needs to pop

Camp had a nice simple direct name play that was a solid hot


V/ camp

Camp Bell: Your strong point is swag-and-flow writing. Yet here, you have a very clever punchline but don't rhyme.

Vividlyvague: It's good to know that even your 1-2 punchlines are way too wordy. You tried to do too much here, and your lack of cadence meant you didn't really take advantage of Camp Bell's busted rhyme.

Vote: Camp Bell

CB took this, better connection with his punch & Vividlyvague had very bad wording especially on that setup

V/ CB

V/camp
Better of the two nameplays

I have Camp. That was his best bar so far this season. Vivid, don't use a np in the setup, especially the very first word, unless u have something really witty to follow it up with. It took the excitement out of ur bar.

V-Camp

I was feeling where viv was going but his punch hit stretchy n used a played bar. Camp came played as well, but his punch landed slightly. It was forced but still better.


V. Camp