Netcees - With the Homies

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I sit and wonder if you saying shit about me aiming clips
to clip some danes no sane so pain shooting bold and leave 1 remaining bitch
We both should be a shamed but damn your dead and as i think about it i vomit
cause your conscience being blown out is on my conscience.
Apart from relapsing and moving far, far away i would see stars
and realize it's all good, I'm with the homies.......

Your brother owes me lets see if a visit will remind the whining bitch
that I'm a human tranna get rich he's declining shit!
But get this, after your death, he's been acting strange
this is no laughing game but school has been a drag but passed with grades
out of this earth in fact insane! But he quit school,
wanted to learn jujitsu so i told told'em it didn't fit you.
He laughed and replied.. I'm with the homies.......

Hood swag... Try getting more metaphorical cause this would be cool on audio but text we ain't really catching the style so get Grundy with more internals rhyme schemes to show diversity of creative wit with the ink fam... Props on the drop tho

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Originally Posted by Storyteller (Post 95213)

ha thanks ST. I was hella bored to the point i should drop something here. I'll add more pieces in the future. I wouldn't say this is how i would write them out though lmao. Thanks for the feed though.