Pyro vs Storyteller - STORYTELLER WINS 4-0
 

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@Pyro


G'Luck fammo



I'm a boss..

All it takes is one call to get rid of this flamers stare,
Light work- push buttons to call in smokey the bear.
If he say his stif-lers bitches across nations? them I'm deadin' the lies,
like him in the movie only thing he fucked was grandma's and an American py.
If he say he Roll up deep, he Gettin' squeezed on till the clip drops smoking,
If I told him I Roll up deep, he thinkin' US in a dim room W/ him gagging and choking.
How's he scorchin'? Your bars are a huge sign of abuse,
There MOS DEFinetly a forced image like him W/ those vile tubes.
Your second to greats your whole persona S'retired,
The only time you brought hot shit PHA-RELL was like him W/ "Light yo ass on fire".

You've Transmitted your Lifetime you have 7 Dark Seconds like a Night Vine
till I Grab Knives & Write Lines across your Jaw and tell you to Recite Mines!
The Nice Guys he call his friends were Touching Story about Pyro
cause he's Shady but only gets him far as Gripping on M-80's!
Hey Back Stabber! No doubt your All-American and got Jack's Swagger
your NetCEES BEST? No Tie Son i Got Ritter ya cause your a MuFuckin Reject!
I'ts Duck Season so he's Bad with Actually posting on time so I'm Passed Just Mad See
It's either post against this Double Barrel or you take that Path with Daffy!
Propped up and treated my Bars Strong but my Weakness will Doctor ya Fag
This Chicken bitch have no chance of winning so i give'em an extra leg like a Sicilian Mafia Flag


Many won't know that Tyson Ritter is in All American Reject XD

Dopeness fam...
@Sharp Nine you know I'm good for links

@Sharpnine typo fix please on think... For the American Pie bar it should be "Thing"

Up for votes and for someone to make this open for votes please

Story teller had a better battle verse, pyro, when u need to explain ur punches something's wrong, didn't like any of ur lines, u should try the set up/ punch technique

I got story winning pretty easy

All it takes is one call to get rid of this flamers stare,
Light work- push buttons to call in smokey the bear.
If he say his stif-lers bitches across nations? them I'm deadin' the lies,
like him in the movie only thing he fucked was grandma's and an American py.

Vs

Propped up and treated my Bars Strong but my Weakness will Doctor ya Fag
This Chicken bitch have no chance of winning so i give'em an extra leg like a Sicilian Mafia Flag

V/storyteller, wasnt feelin alot in this battle pyro didnt really have any hard hittin punches story was decent overall had 2 better lines to 1. story got it here.

V/ Storyteller, smokey the bear line made me chuckle a little bit, but wasn't worded that good. american pie was ok....it was enough for him to take the battle..

From pyros side, i felt his were too lengthy taking away from his set ups/punches..jack swagger line was almost an ok line but something was off about it. i also felt you werent as direct/ didnt have as many personals. storytellers punchlines were harder by a bit overall.

VS

One quote each - wernt even brilliant quotes no offence boys - Storyteller had a much better grip of this and seemed to have come a bit rushed as I have seen better - he had the better misses by a mile. pyro would be better formulating his bars the same as his close in future.

Vote Storyteller

@Sharp Nine 4-0 close please

@Storyteller good job my nigga

Same to you fam @Pyro stick around