blanco bishop vs k huntsman [Blanco Bishop WINS]
 

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@K Huntsman

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father forgive me, lord knows lately I've been goin too hard
but the real sin is that outta 3 sites STILL nobody knows who you are
i battle vets n use you as target practice son, just chill
battlin bishop ain't just a short stop - it's a home run right down left field
if it comes to it you'll catch a upper cut cos we can always slug it out
n catch so many hooks to the body - the blue print could re route a slaughterhouse
i swing gats fella, you wouldn't be caught usin a tool any time of day
cos if you see BB gun me down, then you know it's nothin but child's play
yur a slob, a joke...fact is faggot you could go for a weight loss
i come to parties hype w/ a six pack - yur ashame to take ya shirt off

@Blanco Bishop you're up

I'm a better textcee, n in all other facets, ur hoe knows this man's bigger.
So i don't trip when she says your name..cuz it's "k hun"to every order n command i give' er.
Your lil team with know p is called double k, right geek?
That's fitting. Cuz after i put the third k to u...you'll lie under white sheets.
U can find me...in the club passin bottles 'round with hoes much finer
then them rats passin a Hunts bottle......at the local diner.
This fag knows I'll fire off the sawed off n it'll put more then a few in'im.
U could say when i blaze the gauge..imma put k through 12.. like the public school system.
The best want to teach me n perfect my art n game
if anyone Coach K...well it's not u.....it's that dude that had a player snap his leg.

K Hunts..


father forgive me, lord knows lately I've been goin too hard
but the real sin is that outta 3 sites STILL nobody knows who you are
ok
i battle vets n use you as target practice son, just chill
battlin bishop ain't just a short stop - it's a home run right down left field
cool
if it comes to it you'll catch a upper cut cos we can always slug it out
n catch so many hooks to the body - the blue print could re route a slaughterhouse
this bar had so much potential but was worded awkwardly. nonetheless it was a good concept. ok execution
i swing gats fella, you wouldn't be caught usin a tool any time of day
cos if you see BB gun me down, then you know it's nothin but child's play
simple, straight to the point. Liked this punch
yur a slob, a joke...fact is faggot you could go for a weight loss
i come to parties hype w/ a six pack - yur ashame to take ya shirt off
miss


Blanco..


I'm a better textcee, n in all other facets, ur hoe knows this man's bigger.
So i don't trip when she says your name..cuz it's "k hun"to every order n command i give' er.
dope, clever nameplay
Your lil team with know p is called double k, right geek?
That's fitting. Cuz after i put the third k to u...you'll lie under white sheets.
lotb
U can find me...in the club passin bottles 'round with hoes much finer
then them rats passin a Hunts bottle......at the local diner.
meh ok, kinda played nameplay on Hunt
This fag knows I'll fire off the sawed off n it'll put more then a few in'im.
U could say when i blaze the gauge..imma put k through 12.. like the public school system.
i was gonna use a k through 12 line on KnowP, bastard!! solid line tho. Hate u!
The best want to teach me n perfect my art n game
if anyone Coach K...well it's not u.....it's that dude that had a player snap his leg.
miss


Conclusion: Hunts had jabs throughout, Blanc had a couple haymakers
Vote-Bishop for harder hitting punches

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3rd K
k-12

Cool battle

Both had the same amount of quotes

Both also had a few that Almost hit and one that I thought was just bad

Idk. I think I for blanco for better misses

Cool battle though keep it up

wasnt feeling hunts verse at all. just seemed like generic punches
with no creativity. blanco, had some cool lines, the "K hun" line was
fire. the k through 12 line had mad potential but missed due to wording


vote: blanco

father forgive me, lord knows lately I've been goin too hard
but the real sin is that outta 3 sites STILL nobody knows who you are

Think you could have did more w/ this personal, tbh. Not sure how someone unable to being identified is a sin, as well? So that confused me a tad bit.

i battle vets n use you as target practice son, just chill
battlin bishop ain't just a short stop - it's a home run right down left field

I like the concept, I just think you could have referenced it better. Rather then taking your approach, I think try and tie in a play on words as to some one who actually played that position. Would have made this more creative and less cliche.

if it comes to it you'll catch a upper cut cos we can always slug it out
n catch so many hooks to the body - the blue print could re route a slaughterhouse

This had potential to be dope and land effectively, had it had more of a wittier concept tied in with it. But your best bar, yet.

i swing gats fella, you wouldn't be caught usin a tool any time of day
cos if you see BB gun me down, then you know it's nothin but child's play

I've seen a lot of BB gun concepts used on him. This also had potential, tbh but your execution lacked harshness and came off kind of soft.

yur a slob, a joke...fact is faggot you could go for a weight loss
i come to parties hype w/ a six pack - yur ashame to take ya shirt off

Wasn't feeling this one too much. I think you could of tied in the set up a little more. You come to parties with a 6 pack? Abs or beer? I assumed abs considering you stated he was ashamed to take his shirt off, see whaty I'm saying? Your set up implies WEIGHT but your concept an punch kind of throws the reader off, like are you talkin about beer or abs?

vs

I'm a better textcee, n in all other facets, ur hoe knows this man's bigger.
So i don't trip when she says your name..cuz it's "k hun"to every order n command i give' er.

Didn't like this. Wordin was all over the place and very stretched and choppy.

Your lil team with know p is called double k, right geek?
That's fitting. Cuz after i put the third k to u...you'll lie under white sheets.

I've seen a lot of KKK references but IMO, this one was dope.

U can find me...in the club passin bottles 'round with hoes much finer
then them rats passin a Hunts bottle......at the local diner.

Didn't like this one, either.

This fag knows I'll fire off the sawed off n it'll put more then a few in'im.
U could say when i blaze the gauge..imma put k through 12.. like the public school system.

Stretched a bit and wording hurt you here. What do you mean by your going to put K through 12? Wouldn't is be your going to give the 12 to K? Considering you are talkin about blazing a gauge? I see where you tried to go but your wording was horrible and logically it make no sense, tbh. Dope concept/reference but this doesn't work.

The best want to teach me n perfect my art n game
if anyone Coach K...well it's not u.....it's that dude that had a player snap his leg.

Again, stretched and wording was rough but ok.

OVERALL: I've seen Hunts come a lot better then this. Not sure if this was rushed or w/e but I've definitely seen better from him. I think his punches were more of throwing hands with padded fist rather then tossing some haymakers to knock Blanco's block off. Blanco had some cool/dope concepts but his wording was terrible. His best line which the wording was still rough on was the KKK reference. I got Hunts with the Slaughter House and Bishop with the KKK bar, and IMO the KKK bar was just better and landed more effectively, IMO. So with that being said...

v/Bishop - Cool battle, guys.

Blanco Bishop wins.

+7pts