neighbor: you never told me you were a registered sex offender! i HAVE KIDS! me: omfg im so sorry i forgot to register again i never renewed lmao woops! neighbor: im calling the police! me: but im not registered
 

tired of the emotions, fatigued by the waste
exhaustion from being broken, its like feeding fire to the hate
IF!! emotions were sentient beings, the intent would be freeing
would see me as an infectious deceiving son of a gun
tried to make someones day better, do i get points if its null?
pretending my hands a gun when i point to my skull?????
smoking cigarettes is out of the question, but i dream that I do
crushing a camel under my steel toe, drinking coffee with cream in light of the hue
i could feel the humps in my foot, but the camel wasnt an animal
wouldnt handle the concussive conundrums.
modern day circus freak. everything im jugglings' flammable
despite being a brute. i’m under the sheets, my souls going off in a binge
set the overpass on fire by being the troll under the bridge
cause if demons are here, they’re just cheering me on
i’m their leader. the gauge millimeter inoculating fear in their heart
an addiction to harm bringing. harbinger consultant
so when you hear the saying blood boils, that’s really the witch with her cauldron

This was way downbeat from what I'm used to reading by you, more like something Zombie or Void might write. There was a bit of Netcees parody in that sad tone, but that doesn't make it any less genuine-feeling. There were some things that didn't work for me, like the humps line and occasional wording slips. This was my favorite part:

Was this the pancake diss? If so it was quite clever. If not, it was quite wack. The title was interesting. Irregardlessly Neighbor would shoot you to death with Mack's 10 through 50.

I don't think he meant Zack, but just some random neighbor he lives next door to in this fantasy world of a title.

These words you strung together to form sentences was sucky... btw.

@dull boy

oing to edit it, to be less sucky. @david stern razor burns yeah it is, bb edit l8r tho cuz better than dull boy

I write better than that

This is shite

Lol hue

Pancake spits that dope text son.

why so macabre? you're normally really good at transitions (conceptually/rhythmically) but the arrangement wasn't so... i guess it didn't really read like you - what i'm used to seeing from you, at least, because i don't know you at all personally. idk. felt off.

add. read the comments above me and apparently you're apeing panface. i suppose i get it better, now.