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Dope girl 07-18-2014 10:22 PM

Speical guy poem part one
 
When he stares at your mouth
(kiss him)
When he pushes or hits you like a dumbass
because he think he's stronger than you
(grab him & don't let him go)
When he starts cursing at you trying act all Aggressive
(kiss him & tell him you love him)
When he's silent
(ask him what's wrong)
When he ignores you
(give him your attention)
When he pulls away
(pull back)
When you see him at his worse
(Tell him he's handsome)
When you see him crying
(Just hold him & don't say word)
When you see him walking
(sneak up & hug him from waist behind)
When he's afraid
(protect him)
when he steals your favorite hat
(let him keep it & sleep with it for a night
When he tease you
(tease him back & make him giggle)
When doesn't answer for a long time
(reassure him that everything is okay)
(When he looks at you with a lie
( Lookout for yourself)
When he says that he like you
(he really does more than you could understand)

There's more to this

gitto138 07-19-2014 07:05 AM

IM sorry silver but this was not great, are poems supposed to rhyme

Zen 07-19-2014 12:26 PM

This was amazing. You never cease to amaze me.

Certain 07-19-2014 12:29 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by gitto138 (Post 366058)
IM sorry silver but this was not great, are poems supposed to rhyme

Sometimes they rhyme. Sometimes they don't.

When dealing with a wordsmith like Silver, it's her choice.

Fig 07-19-2014 01:31 PM

An I special guy? Loved it

DexLabb 07-19-2014 01:36 PM

why does everyone pet the ugly puppy? this shit was weird. most these are what a guy should do to a girl

Fig 07-19-2014 01:43 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by DexLabb (Post 366161)
why does everyone pet the ugly puppy? this shit was weird. most these are what a guy should do to a girl

You are the ugly puppy dumbass

Dope girl 07-19-2014 05:32 PM

I agree with Certain & thanks for the feedback guys!

Zen 07-19-2014 06:32 PM

Dg <3's Certain

Vulgar 07-19-2014 09:49 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by gitto138 (Post 366058)
IM sorry silver but this was not great, are poems supposed to rhyme

http://www.faillol.com/wp-content/up...umpfromcar.gif

YDK 07-20-2014 02:37 AM

Every piece I read from you is hof worthy tbh

Malachi 07-20-2014 04:29 AM

Gone

Dope girl 07-20-2014 09:18 PM

thanks loves

Geno 07-22-2014 01:01 PM

Dg da gawdess

Dope girl 07-23-2014 11:02 AM

thanks for reading!


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