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[BA S&F] Orc [VS] Camp Bell [Orc Wins]
BA Swag and Flow Tournament @Orc @Camp Bell Rules Due Dates:
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The boy
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...yup.
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I take a Barbarian Selfie,
Ur manner is soft: when the Hammer is wrought, know the carrions plenty Danaerys man will get offed... #NodisrespecttoBarristanSelmy I'm Bombing so stay where da range is; this meth head'll be left black It's common to have the Clay make u famous. I'm talking Celebrity Deathmatch We know Ozil. I'm so real that when I type hymens move, it's light shit too U vs Bison moves: U couldn't be Klose to a legend & I score more times than dude The poll shows u nice w/ the Mentions? we'll see when the Wessons clear U'll take a slide ina second. Now ya girl be Raiden the legend & we ain't talkn Metal Gear U often a Stan. Im on that boss shit, a man. Get offed if you stand I have the awesomest hands. They're so pretty they stroll down Catwalks in Milan I show up to show out. U show up to get blown out. Im Ravishing Rick Rude Let's establish shit, fool: u got the fangs of a Shitzu Your idea of a Zoning Out is escaping the Friend one w/ an Average Six, dude |
I want ya soul to harbor depression after this wholehearted confession im taking my dub w/an upset and calling it a total sluaghter connection this total slaughter corrected, im leaving son suffering on stage like... i go hard in my lectures, ya productions sus and substance is day light snuffed w/a bane right, I'm not feeling the kid, ya mental sicker than this? dont start, i'll put the GOAT's heart on postcards then give them as gifts cold bars from orc? nah, watch his temperature dip once my flow hawk my viciousness?? indiscriminate, you got trolled and then it snowballed fit em for the ditch im digging...then meet me at the funeral for roll call i scripted this on a winter trip to switzerland, while strolling in a snowfall bro washed, we texting specialist an he no longer meet the requirements find a dope spot to look for gold pots wit leprechauns, seeking retirement |
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I liked campbells shit. Best parts were the snowballs n switzerland shit. The rest was decent but i felt orc was more consistent n smoother. Also, orc hadmany references that made his verse feel liver with theimagery. Bell wasnt bad at all but orc was too consistent bar per bar.
V orc |
Orc: I thought you showed a good grasp of what you were doing but could use a smoother cadence. There was a little too much in the way of attacking. But there were a few standout lines, too. I liked the Milan line.
Camp Bell: This was an unremarkable effort. Work on more unique images and punch lines to make your verses more distinct. All the elements were here, and you probably had a smoother cadence than Orc. But it wasn't as interesting. Vote: Orc |
This was a great lil snippet of what's to come. Disappointed in CB because I think with a little more content with a bit more imagery this would be a pretty great verse. Orc came as orc did, and delivered consistent little liners here and there that got stronger as the verse went on. Seemed to be on an even keel but It was tough to choose, but I'll go with my gut and the verse that demonstrated a rank of interest and everything that embodies sf seemed to be orc here, though a highly contested matchup. Great read,thanks.
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Vote - Orc |
Camp Bell
snuffed w/a bane right, I'm not feeling the kid, ya mental sicker than this? dont start, i'll put the GOAT's heart on postcards then give them as gifts cold bars from orc? nah, watch his temperature dip once my flow hawk my viciousness?? indiscriminate, you got trolled and then it snowballed these 2 bars were nice. over u coulda put more complexity into the vocab and wordplay Orc We know Ozil. I'm so real that when I type hymens move, it's light shit too U vs Bison moves: U couldn't be Klose to a legend & I score more times than dude U often a Stan. Im on that boss shit, a man. Get offed if you stand I have the awesomest hands. They're so pretty they stroll down Catwalks in Milan lotb Camp Bell coulda took this with better rhyme schemes because Orc dropped ok but nothing crazy V/Orc |
Orc, a solid swag and flow verse as expected, though I know you definitely can bring much more heat than what is shown. You were fairly consistent, particularly in lines where you threw in some cool references. Camp bell, you had almost everything going for you, and the only thing you lacked really was content/references. I believe you take this with a couple of those in your verse. That's not to say you didn't have any solid lines, because you did, but some content would have pushed you over the top. With Orc dropping out, you get another shot and I feel you can definitely be a darkhorse if you put it all together. In this match, Orc got it.
MVGT: Orc. Good job by both competitors. |
Orc wins 6-0
Orc: (0)+0opp +5W -2links +10ORW -4ORL= +9 Camp Bell:(0)-0opp -0L* -2links* +0OR=0 |
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