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veritas 07-13-2014 12:51 AM

CANIMUS SURDIS
 
{AS WE’RE NEARING THE CLEARING, THE ZERO THEOREM’S HERO’S APPEARING…… }



The mitochondrial symbiosis of cognitive elucidation began,

as the ancient acropolis dropped its anchor on dry land...

the ground shook, the unearthly metalloids reflected gazes

time slowed, the signs showed the prime modes of mazes

the fish began to fly, as new cells divide their kinds inside the brain

they acted as water, form fitting dendritic genesis, providing flame

the crowd that had gathered became despondent:

Their neural capabilities were instantly eclipsed from too much space allotted

In simply contemplating the vessel which now resided in their optics

The door opened and out stepped the being, who spoke… hear the synopsis:



The entities refused to change because their meanings were contingent upon other entities’ meanings which also happened to be changed due to the refusal of others to change their meanings. this refusal changed their meaning regardless, and so the others as well. This is your new mental math.



Minds blown. The ALL of everything is irrelevant to the mind bound by dimensions

Rhymes shone clearly a dream, prevalent in the kind found through ascensions.

Dreams hidden in dreams, content intertwined in the memory gospel

So your codes are hacked by your own, in fact, the enemy’s hostile.

The pedigree of the farthest skies are not bound to this DÉJÀ VU

Perpetual soul searching, slow lurching, and remembering he gained a clue.



The ship ascended up, not to return upon this awareness.

The moral of the story: never be careless.

The moral of that moral: ever see where’s this?

Zombie 07-13-2014 01:19 PM

The ending didnt sit well. The overall content mingled around. Very intense

DexLabb 07-13-2014 01:28 PM

this is the shit im talking about, what the fuck is this community on?

veritas 07-13-2014 03:00 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Zombie (Post 362652)
The ending didnt sit well. The overall content mingled around. Very intense

thank you buddy.

THE REAL CAPTAIN OBVIOUS 07-16-2014 04:14 PM

Quote:

The entities refused to change because their meanings were contingent upon other entities’ meanings which also happened to be changed due to the refusal of others to change their meanings. this refusal changed their meaning regardless, and so the others as well. This is your new mental math.
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UnbornBuddha 07-18-2014 02:48 PM

Wow very dramatic. And I liked the last verse quite a bit. I've always been a fan in ending with riddles, that lead to contemplative introspection. What the being spoke as the so called mental math could have had more meaning. And no that wasn't a pun. This implies that yes I understood what you meant. But you executed it in a way where the paradox of interconnection and inevitable change failed to deliver a change on the reader himself, even if he refused the perspective. I don't know if I'm making it clear. But anyways the rest was most excellent.

By the way I like your final fantasy end of the world logo.

veritas 07-18-2014 10:46 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by UnbornBuddha (Post 365709)
Wow very dramatic. And I liked the last verse quite a bit. I've always been a fan in ending with riddles, that lead to contemplative introspection. What the being spoke as the so called mental math could have had more meaning. And no that wasn't a pun. This implies that yes I understood what you meant. But you executed it in a way where the paradox of interconnection and inevitable change failed to deliver a change on the reader himself, even if he refused the perspective. I don't know if I'm making it clear. But anyways the rest was most excellent.

By the way I like your final fantasy end of the world logo.

Watching you.


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