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~RustyGunZ~ 07-07-2014 05:26 PM

jilti vs. Dominate {Dominate wins 13-0}
 
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Dominate 07-07-2014 05:55 PM

Hi

jilti 07-07-2014 05:57 PM

Death.

jilti 07-07-2014 09:42 PM

Dominos my scope'll put dots on him like those pieces
so when i "break bones", it wont be a slang term in most regions

Dominate 07-08-2014 06:28 AM

Ur cancer to swag. Far as women ur standards are baddd
Only girls Jack n Jill off look like Adam Sandler in drag

BROKE LESNAR 07-08-2014 01:57 PM

Jil's bar had potential but the wording totally collapsed the structure. Usually with np's the the execution is used mid closer with a witty finisher to deliver the impact. In Jil's case he opened with his np. In fact he swapped his closer for where the opener should be and his opener for where the closer should be, lol. Dominate's was pretty hilarious with no discernable flaws.

v-Dominate

Doug Funny 07-08-2014 06:27 PM

I like both but I think the kangaroo guy had the more stinging blow

e11even 07-09-2014 03:21 AM

Jilti came off jilted with not much in the way of a convicting delivery. Dominate, however, got a chuckle outta me and his hit was conventional, yet pretty sharp. Good job guise.

Dominate.

Sharp 07-09-2014 07:58 AM

Jil had an okay idea but dominos been done on Dom. I liked the added 'break bones' idea but the punch felt awkward. Dom was funny and cleanly executed

V/ dom

Adonis 07-09-2014 10:25 PM

Vote dom. His name play was less forced and flowed better. Although I did like breaking bones reference as I'm an avid bones player. Good stuff to both, but one was simply better.

Window Taco 07-09-2014 10:33 PM

I felt Jilt had An okay concept and it landed but Dom had a more stinging insult in both the first half of his bar and the metaphorical punch 'Adam sandler' line in the second half which was funny, hit harder, fresher, and stronger IMO.

Vote; Dominate.

Amen 07-10-2014 08:25 AM

Ok'ish concept that lacked a harsher execution vs a humorous attempt with a decent execution.



I think if this Jilt, jit, jitli w/e the hell your name is or means, had a better and more harsher execution on his concept, he could have taken this. Dom's concept was ok, not harsh either but did provide a humor factor which is cool, so with that being said....

v/Dom

Blanco Bishop 07-10-2014 10:18 PM

Dom executed cleanly. Comedy wise n scheme wise it was pretty solid.
J was ok but not crisp enoigh with the execution totake it.

V dom

Greed 07-11-2014 01:33 PM

V dom

Sharp nines explanation

Malachi 07-13-2014 03:33 AM

Dom play was nice and was a clear hit .
Didnt think Jitl hit that hard but it was ight

V/Dom

King Ra. 07-13-2014 11:30 AM

jilti, you could have had this because your concept was much better than Dominate's, but the execution did not connect well to me. Definitely a wording issue. Dom, you had the more smoother punch here, though, the idea itself didn't attract me much, but you executed cleanly in comparison to your opponent.

MVGT: Dominate. Good job by both competitors.

Destroyer 07-13-2014 04:41 PM

I got dom here. the other one was aight, but wording could have been a lot better on it

v/dom

Paradigm 07-13-2014 08:56 PM

Dominoes has been done on Dom before with similar flip also so i'm kinda biased. It was cool bar though. Dominates bar was lols and a good nameplay.

Vote - Dominate

Swerve 07-15-2014 11:16 PM

Punch-setup style? It was interesting, but I wasn't feeling it. Dom's bar was really slick really enjoyed it.

V/ Dominate

~RustyGunZ~ 07-16-2014 04:23 PM

13-0 Dominate wins


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