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DexLabb 07-07-2014 12:29 PM

ninja turtle theme song
 
Practicing this one to record this week, still have not
got the delivery down how its in my head yet...

BEAT: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UJQqhi-I6ds

(starts almost right away)
[Verse 1: DexLab]

i could take,
a cold heart and burn it to cinders
but am i on the, right course# dessert before dinner
she looked like a, April o Neil, said she was a Leo,
well, i got the khaki shorts, drinks poured n’ rolled Splinters

wo-oahhh,
page forward, its like a tsunami
tried to brainstorm, then came shores washin' up on me,
eeeeeeeyck, and i still get it wet,
cause i gotta wash the sheets, but i didn’t get head

n’ yeah u gotta dream big cause when its overtime
that picture in your head got low exposure time
can’t snap, can’t lose focus, all up in ur girl’s lens u think I’m bogus
when u can’t control it cause u know its MINEEE

i got this red cup filled't way up, turn’t way up
ouu she made a pass at me i’m bout' to do a lay up
mind transformin’, man this the michael bay cut,
never been a good guy, Decepticonnnn, DAY ONE

,i seen a Wraith in my dream one time
far out, now its parked out- sidee,
and i don’t knowwww aaa thing abouttttt this girl at all

but i know, yeah i know that if your wheels are chrome
then your fears are gone, and u feel at home with you.
, i don’t KNOW what tragedy LED me to happily
ever after, but these chapters HAD to be true, so,

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Kin 07-07-2014 12:50 PM

not feelin' the beat...but we'll check how I feel when you record on it

best line for me...

n’ yeah u gotta dream big cause when its overtime
that picture in your head got low exposure time
that shits dope... the rest of it wasn't doin' much for me only cuz' the style of the track....which is understandable cuz of the beat choice tho'

get at me if you eva wanna rock one of my beats...I got plenty in the archives

dead man 07-07-2014 01:40 PM

its a good beat. def drake ish

if you deliver the verse right it could be dope. i see you incorporating different musical elements into the writing. its songwriting, not rap writing. different in a few key ways.

thanks G

DexLabb 07-07-2014 02:00 PM

kin, might have to browse ur beats some time do u got soundclick?

and Black, thanks for comin thru bro. Can't believe the big homie came through...

Seymour BUTTS 07-07-2014 02:26 PM

TEENAGE MUTANT NINJA TURTLES KOWABAWA ACTION NINJA POWER

DexLabb 07-07-2014 02:51 PM

^ http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nNa2Fr6CA0E

Geno 07-11-2014 01:57 PM

beats dope as fuck imo. i could fuckin blast that shit. lyrics were horrible though. didnt like this one at all

DexLabb 07-11-2014 02:16 PM

cause ur a fuck up dude

oats 07-11-2014 04:49 PM

I fucks wit it

Alpha Male Jim Sanchez 07-11-2014 05:25 PM

It's pretty good, not bad.

6/10 on the Alpha scale, 8/10 with great lyrics.

DexLabb 07-11-2014 05:40 PM

I appreciate that @oats im glad to see you here man

Jim Sanchez bro... Alpha scale should be a new requirement when leaving feedback, we need to standardize that shit

Geno 07-11-2014 06:41 PM

really? there aint a thing in this game you can do better than me. so whos really fucked up here?

wack fagit. and thats puting it mildly. no one likes this fucking retarded ass shit you wrote in here man, trust me. it dont make sense and hardly has a fucking thing to do with tmnt. not to mention you think your drake or something but your just fucking wack trash irl. stfu

saying i didnt like it was being kind. i think its fucking shit

DexLabb 07-11-2014 07:09 PM

that anger will destroy you bud

gitto138 07-11-2014 07:22 PM

Victory will be claimed geno,
Ur a bit of a hot head like wat do think ur the bomb man im jus postin up shit
T get a bit a feed bk for a confidence booster an u diss me straight up, ive never even txt battled before never mind a vocal, give me space and ill grow:|

DexLabb 07-11-2014 07:27 PM

his perception of the fuckin industry is like if the early mc hammer was teleported to 2014 and got addicted to huffing gasoline and coffee beans. look at his profile pic, he dosent understand the world

Geno 07-11-2014 09:43 PM

neither one of you have a single brain cell, clearly.

Vulgar 07-11-2014 09:46 PM

Stop trying to be Drake.

Illume 07-11-2014 09:48 PM

These raps are fuckin terrible. It's like Kanye West went and smashed his head off a kerb, ended up in a coma and his dumb-ass wife translated his farts into a rhyme. Anyone else sick of this guy yet?

DexLabb 07-11-2014 09:50 PM

if it wasnt for drake music like this could not exist. he took hip hop and rap and opened the door for shit like this. i love drake beats, kayne shit, some jay, wayne... if you dont like this style of writing then sorry for ur bad taste

DexLabb 07-11-2014 09:52 PM

they dont put chino XL's poison pen on in the Walmart. and i think you fucking retards think they do


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