hand dryers arent as cool as me
 

equalize step to real minds stop the snail lines of slow
inhale the highs and lows frail slimes get towed
it's limo service where i go less sleep less food more deep
real evil real rude american dreams are homeless
i eat real food seeds pop when the sunlight hits the soulless

fall out my space nikka we all out of place fallen
all out of space ballin circumference of the embryo
fungus belive in no gods yet won't say it in public
bullhorns bug lift the persian rug illusion
taking mescaline analogs in public observe my confusion of words
layed out tightly to make subconscious lives say superb

on the curb facing south your shadows graying flowers
looseing your mind slowly at a pace of 13 saints a hour
I turn vinegar to good wine grow grapes on hood vines
drying in the yard the shape of your spine
a song keeps the cobra charmed revaling your cards being scarred
the pain of being born of agent orange vitamin c
hand dryers aren't as cool as me

Theres a lot of nice multies in here. I see what you mean when you say your style is sloppy. I find that more the case with your content. Flow is great, but i find youre all over the place with the subject matter. Id like to read a topical piece of yours if you write like that.

I'll feed your pieces after I see you feed someone else's. till then you get a head nod

on the curb facing south your shadows graying flowers
looseing your mind slowly at a pace of 13 saints a hour
I turn vinegar to good wine grow grapes on hood vines
drying in the yard the shape of your spine

^ that's what I'm talking about

im glad I read cos, like why ways:

that was nice.

the rest...choppy, boring intro opener...liked the cadence and the stutter...

thanks for the read everyone nogood (god) i can right topicals but i don't like to complain one will come to mind im sure