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Dominate vs. ill nik-A {Dominate wins}
The Summer Classic V The Premier Text Battling Tournament @Dominate @ill nik-A Rules Due Dates:
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General Rules:
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check, g/l
16? |
16
Welcome! |
Dang Nika said welcome like this is his house. Dom I know you're not gonna let that slide.
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16 SENT TO @Knucklehead @Dominate
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Need a small ext, wont be more than a few hours over
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You shouldn’t believe the mag. I guarantee you’ll need a casket
How’s this an Uphill battle when your only Inclination is to be a faggot? Plus ur 40 w/ zero assets - your Crib Size is woeful as shit g I haven’t seen such Embarrassing Footage since Delicious Girl posted a strip tease U dying this Round, I’ll be living Quarters then taking over this.. Ur Living Quarters is a 1 bed studio filled w/ the stench of shame and loneliness Ur life’s depressing. U a recluse who went from fat to super size.. Gave up keeping ur Home Straight.. & are now on that Path to suicide Honestly you’re enormous, & you’d stay whining over diets son Any time u ain’t eating Pork u Pine & ur cholesterol’s had more Spikes than one Plus u known to bitch when losing, u always complaining & moaning kid Idk what’s worse; that u Blubber over votes or that ur body’s mainly composed of it & dawg, ya mom’s BEEN a maid. She ain’t in the States the legal way - If she gotta Pledge Allegiance it’s cuz that’s her Favourite Cleaning Spray Keep seething lame. Close battles don’t close quick, forreal its curious But u won’t see Dom n Nik Drag… the votes’ll come Fast & he’ll get Furious |
u’re either good or bad; I constantly murk peeps
There’s no middle ground… & only people that buy ur mediocrity are getting it dirt cheap fuck ur work geek, ur pay sucks & cant ever achieve respect u’re struggling to adopt a style... since none of ur students can be bribed to be teacher's pet I got that leader rep, makin boss decisions plus rules for thugs if u’re wired for critical thinking… ur brain is on the machine & I’ma pull the plug this fool’s a scrub, I've fucked many hoes & ur girl likes my dick If all little things add up... it'd take all the males in ur family tree to satisfy your chick I’m the shit, plus original & too clever so u’ll never win bro I’m well recognized while u have that it looks familiar but worded better syndrome This isn’t a comedy movie no one’s believing u fakers Who made u Bad Guys? I mean most of yall just Marks I’d chop up & feed to a Gator I have a buzz for winning see these here are cash lines My name has that ring to it… urs goes to Jared, proposes and gets a no on the Jumbotron durin halftime I got experience beating the best & mastered the work while the little u know... has just inspired a worldwide amber alert |
UPP
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feelin about half the lines from both, half wack, edge dom
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You shouldn’t believe the mag. I guarantee you’ll need a casket
How’s this an Uphill battle when your only Inclination is to be a faggot? this is nice. Plus ur 40 w/ zero assets - your Crib Size is woeful as shit g I haven’t seen such Embarrassing Footage since Delicious Girl posted a strip tease haha, simple but nice. U dying this Round, I’ll be living Quarters then taking over this.. Ur Living Quarters is a 1 bed studio filled w/ the stench of shame and loneliness simple but rofl. Ur life’s depressing. U a recluse who went from fat to super size.. Gave up keeping ur Home Straight.. & are now on that Path to suicide meh. Honestly you’re enormous, & you’d stay whining over diets son Any time u ain’t eating Pork u Pine & ur cholesterol’s had more Spikes than one this is fucking dopeee wtf, lotb Plus u known to bitch when losing, u always complaining & moaning kid Idk what’s worse; that u Blubber over votes or that ur body’s mainly composed of it fresh. & dawg, ya mom’s BEEN a maid. She ain’t in the States the legal way - If she gotta Pledge Allegiance it’s cuz that’s her Favourite Cleaning Spray meh, wording made this hit less. ok. Keep seething lame. Close battles don’t close quick, forreal its curious But u won’t see Dom n Nik Drag… the votes’ll come Fast & he’ll get Furious ehhh, meh closer // u’re either good or bad; I constantly murk peeps There’s no middle ground… & only people that buy ur mediocrity are getting it dirt cheap haha, cool flip on a played concept. fuck ur work geek, ur pay sucks & cant ever achieve respect u’re struggling to adopt a style... since none of ur students can be bribed to be teacher's pet ehh, ok I got that leader rep, makin boss decisions plus rules for thugs if u’re wired for critical thinking… ur brain is on the machine & I’ma pull the plug meh, okay this fool’s a scrub, I've fucked many hoes & ur girl likes my dick If all little things add up... it'd take all the males in ur family tree to satisfy your chick LMAO I’m the shit, plus original & too clever so u’ll never win bro I’m well recognized while u have that it looks familiar but worded better syndrome rofl, cool This isn’t a comedy movie no one’s believing u fakers Who made u Bad Guys? I mean most of yall just Marks I’d chop up & feed to a Gator heh, k I have a buzz for winning see these here are cash lines My name has that ring to it… urs goes to Jared, proposes and gets a no on the Jumbotron durin halftime roflll, dece I got experience beating the best & mastered the work while the little u know... has just inspired a worldwide amber alert meh dope fucking battle. can't believe its getting slept on. overall, gonna edge this to dom & that pork u pine line was fire. close as fuck, both i feel doms quotes hit harder & i'm gonna edge him the battle. v/ dom |
opener, cleaning spray, closer
vs add up, well recognized and jareds nikas look familiar but better worded line was fire, lotb. really hard battle to call but i felt dom edged it. both had misses dom's were better it seemed v/dominate |
Good shit in here.
Thought both came pretty evenly. Wasn't diggin doms as much as everyone seemms to be in comparison to niks tho. Nika had two punches that leaned me. Going against the grain here. V/nika |
Inclination, footage, porcupine, pledge
Vs. Little things, ring, little you know This was dope. But to me, Dom had the best verse of the round. Nik was good but I got Dom here. |
You shouldn’t believe the mag. I guarantee you’ll need a casket
How’s this an Uphill battle when your only Inclination is to be a faggot? Honestly you’re enormous, & you’d stay whining over diets son Any time u ain’t eating Pork u Pine & ur cholesterol’s had more Spikes than one Plus u known to bitch when losing, u always complaining & moaning kid Idk what’s worse; that u Blubber over votes or that ur body’s mainly composed of it & dawg, ya mom’s BEEN a maid. She ain’t in the States the legal way - If she gotta Pledge Allegiance it’s cuz that’s her Favourite Cleaning Spray Keep seething lame. Close battles don’t close quick, forreal its curious But u won’t see Dom n Nik Drag… the votes’ll come Fast & he’ll get Furious this fool’s a scrub, I've fucked many hoes & ur girl likes my dick If all little things add up... it'd take all the males in ur family tree to satisfy your chick I’m the shit, plus original & too clever so u’ll never win bro I’m well recognized while u have that it looks familiar but worded better syndrome This isn’t a comedy movie no one’s believing u fakers Who made u Bad Guys? I mean most of yall just Marks I’d chop up & feed to a Gator I have a buzz for winning see these here are cash lines My name has that ring to it… urs goes to Jared, proposes and gets a no on the Jumbotron durin halftime I got experience beating the best & mastered the work while the little u know... has just inspired a worldwide amber alert nice battle. could go either way but i thought dom had the slighest edge with hitting a little harder. good shit v/dom |
cool battle. .nik stole my swag with the jumbotron line
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Dom had pork and dg lines.
Nik had opener, little things and jumbotron. Nik had best verse of the round to me. Dom came good. Nik edged him. V/nik |
You shouldn’t believe the mag. I guarantee you’ll need a casket
How’s this an Uphill battle when your only Inclination is to be a faggot? Plus ur 40 w/ zero assets - your Crib Size is woeful as shit g I haven’t seen such Embarrassing Footage since Delicious Girl posted a strip tease U dying this Round, I’ll be living Quarters then taking over this.. Ur Living Quarters is a 1 bed studio filled w/ the stench of shame and loneliness Honestly you’re enormous, & you’d stay whining over diets son Any time u ain’t eating Pork u Pine & ur cholesterol’s had more Spikes than one & dawg, ya mom’s BEEN a maid. She ain’t in the States the legal way - If she gotta Pledge Allegiance it’s cuz that’s her Favourite Cleaning Spray vs. u’re either good or bad; I constantly murk peeps There’s no middle ground… & only people that buy ur mediocrity are getting it dirt cheap I’m the shit, plus original & too clever so u’ll never win bro I’m well recognized while u have that it looks familiar but worded better syndrome I have a buzz for winning see these here are cash lines My name has that ring to it… urs goes to Jared, proposes and gets a no on the Jumbotron durin halftime I dunno....to me, Nik was really good....but Dom just killed it. I was really feeling most of his verse. Wordplay was really on point and fresh. The jumbotron and familiar feeling lines from nik were haaarsh, but Dom just came with more punches of a higher calibre. Vote - Dominate |
You shouldn’t believe the mag. I guarantee you’ll need a casket
How’s this an Uphill battle when your only Inclination is to be a faggot? Good personal wordplay opener, fresh. Plus ur 40 w/ zero assets - your Crib Size is woeful as shit g I haven’t seen such Embarrassing Footage since Delicious Girl posted a strip tease Cool current event follow-up. U dying this Round, I’ll be living Quarters then taking over this.. Ur Living Quarters is a 1 bed studio filled w/ the stench of shame and loneliness Good concept, felt you could of flipped it better, though. Ur life’s depressing. U a recluse who went from fat to super size.. Gave up keeping ur Home Straight.. & are now on that Path to suicide Good, same type of line as your Whisker Away ish last round. Vintage. Honestly you’re enormous, & you’d stay whining over diets son Any time u ain’t eating Pork u Pine & ur cholesterol’s had more Spikes than one Pretty nice. Wordplay personal followed by a strong punchline connection. Plus u known to bitch when losing, u always complaining & moaning kid Idk what’s worse; that u Blubber over votes or that ur body’s mainly composed of it Good personal and strong wording. & dawg, ya mom’s BEEN a maid. She ain’t in the States the legal way - If she gotta Pledge Allegiance it’s cuz that’s her Favourite Cleaning Spray Pretty good personal, fresh shit. Keep seething lame. Close battles don’t close quick, forreal its curious But u won’t see Dom n Nik Drag… the votes’ll come Fast & he’ll get Furious Great self-nameplay and nameplay mix with strong punchline. vs u’re either good or bad; I constantly murk peeps There’s no middle ground… & only people that buy ur mediocrity are getting it dirt cheap Good opener. fuck ur work geek, ur pay sucks & cant ever achieve respect u’re struggling to adopt a style... since none of ur students can be bribed to be teacher's pet Decent follow-up. I got that leader rep, makin boss decisions plus rules for thugs if u’re wired for critical thinking… ur brain is on the machine & I’ma pull the plug Good shit. this fool’s a scrub, I've fucked many hoes & ur girl likes my dick If all little things add up... it'd take all the males in ur family tree to satisfy your chick Good and funny. I’m the shit, plus original & too clever so u’ll never win bro I’m well recognized while u have that it looks familiar but worded better syndrome Fresh. This isn’t a comedy movie no one’s believing u fakers Who made u Bad Guys? I mean most of yall just Marks I’d chop up & feed to a Gator Solid. I have a buzz for winning see these here are cash lines My name has that ring to it… urs goes to Jared, proposes and gets a no on the Jumbotron durin halftime Really long line, but I'm definitely diggin' the creativity. I got experience beating the best & mastered the work while the little u know... has just inspired a worldwide amber alert Alright closer. This was a dope battle. Close. I have to agree with Cashius, though. I also think Dom had verse of the round after reading his verse a second time. Opener was fresh. Follow-up, too. Living Quarters I did feel could of been better, but good concept either way. Fresh. Home Straight was vintage Dom and also fresh. Porkupine was nasty. Blubber had strong wording. Cleaning spray was a great line. Closer was excellent, too. nik had middle ground which was good. Adopt a style needed a better connection, IMO. Critical thinking was good. Little things was funny. Well recognized was good, too. Bad Guys was solid. Ring to it was stretched, but good. Closer needed a little more. Overall nik came like he always does, dope as fuck. He came with that same trademark style and did his thing here. Dom did as well, though. Dom was more consistent here and just had a fire verse this round. Not really any bad lines. A lot of originality and creativity as well as strong wording. When Dom's at his best, he's as good as anyone who's ever done it. Both legends either way, IMO. Props to both. /v dominate |
You shouldn’t believe the mag. I guarantee you’ll need a casket
How’s this an Uphill battle when your only Inclination is to be a faggot? Plus ur 40 w/ zero assets - your Crib Size is woeful as shit g I haven’t seen such Embarrassing Footage since Delicious Girl posted a strip tease Ur life’s depressing. U a recluse who went from fat to super size.. Gave up keeping ur Home Straight.. & are now on that Path to suicide & dawg, ya mom’s BEEN a maid. She ain’t in the States the legal way - If she gotta Pledge Allegiance it’s cuz that’s her Favourite Cleaning Spray vs this fool’s a scrub, I've fucked many hoes & ur girl likes my dick If all little things add up... it'd take all the males in ur family tree to satisfy your chick I’m the shit, plus original & too clever so u’ll never win bro I’m well recognized while u have that it looks familiar but worded better syndrome I have a buzz for winning see these here are cash lines My name has that ring to it… urs goes to Jared, proposes and gets a no on the Jumbotron durin halftime Close in quotes to me, real tough to decide. Living quarters, pork u pine, and Dom's closer were all pretty good as well. I thought Nik's first 2 bars weren't on point with the rest, cuz then he had fire. Family tree and Jared lines were probably the best two bars to me. But Dom was more consistent throughout...didn't have anything that wasn't decent. Probably for Dom, VOHL. Close as fuck. I liked Nik's style better but Dom had the stronger overall verse. Please don't vote against me in retaliation for this Nika :( v/ Dom |
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