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~RustyGunZ~ 06-25-2013 09:47 PM

Allen Knight vs. Sharp Nine {Allen Knight wins}
 


The Summer Classic V
The Premier Text Battling Tournament

@Allen Knight @Sharp Nine

Rules

Due Dates:
  • Verses are due Wednesday,
    July 3rd, 2013 @ 11:59 PM PST.
  • Check Ins are due Sunday, June 30th, 2013 @ 11:59 PM PST
  • Voting ends Sunday, July 7th, 11:59 PM PST.
  • Battles that lack votes may close later.
  • One sided battles may get closed early.
  • Extensions are normally 24 hours
    (unless requested otherwise, that is),
    can be no longer than 48 hours
    and have to be granted by your opponent.


Line Limit:
  • Min. = 10 lines
  • Max. = 16 lines
  • The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both. If no line agreement is made you CANNOT go above 16 lines

General Rules:
  • 1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts.
  • 2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made.
  • Feeding = DQ.
  • Recycling = DQ.
  • Biting = DQ.
  • No freeposting, swaying or bitching.
  • Unless a picture battle is agreed upon,
    linking to your opponent's picture or posting it
    means you will disqualified.
  • A check in IS mandatory.
  • Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in.
  • If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post
    must match the 1st person's line amount.

Allen Knight 06-25-2013 11:20 PM

wattup, how many u tryna go?

Sharp 06-25-2013 11:56 PM

10's always good for me unless you want more

StarFaggot 06-26-2013 08:34 AM

Damn Allen he said you're only worth 10 lines in a Summer Classic. Wow.

Allen Knight 07-03-2013 09:53 PM

went 12

Sharp 07-03-2013 10:50 PM

all this fags posts suckkkk. one glance i nearly get sick
if im sayin Allen's Elite... its cuz hes unwanted as that Undead prick
dude barely beat chyeahh in a cyph. thats like pitiful's definition
we all know Al Po' at text... considering that dude's his main competition
you insulting the site was sad. mighta thought you was sonnin' hoes
but its generous sayin that Diss functions... cuz each line was one a' those
dude cant handle chicks. do girls wanna date him? never
Al Green w/ relationships... and ironically never hears 'lets stay together'
ur league run's pathetic. sayin ur dope is just a charade
u cant stay a float... ure more like a fat tuba player fallin behind the parade
n ya crews a buncha fags. act hard, but theres no terror
shit, a group as gay as the BGs aint been seen since the disco era

Allen Knight 07-03-2013 11:05 PM

al's rippin' up ur girls pussy, feelin' her from thighs to breast
& fuckin till im so deep in the hole it resembles Chris Tuckers debt wit the IRS
no1 wants to be like u faggot, fashion sense is trash u coward
last person that dressed sharp, was his boyfriend after he fucked'em in the ass for hours
ur broke as fuck neva have stacks to touch, faggot i'll rec ya bad
last time u had 2 large in ur palms...u were jerking off acouple of dudes for extra cash
u neva get girls to put out, the creepy type got'em hating men
cuz any bitch sharp nails, is scratchin'em wit those tryna stop him from raping them
aimin' the double barrel at ur temple, poppin at limbs to murk ya
till the point ur brains are split eight ways & he writes a OM on his twins murda
the shit u say on heres a mockery, ur tails are the fuckin wack type
only time i wanna see nine stories, is watching u fall head first from that height

Undead. 07-05-2013 09:55 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sharp Nine (Post 89292)
all this fags posts suckkkk. one glance i nearly get sick
if im sayin Allen's Elite... its cuz hes unwanted as that Undead prick

ur not battling me..but cool flip on my name.

dude barely beat chyeahh in a cyph. thats like pitiful's definition
we all know Al Po' at text... considering that dude's his main competition

this was cool tho

you insulting the site was sad. mighta thought you was sonnin' hoes
but its generous sayin that Diss functions... cuz each line was one a' those

meh diss-functions...an diss-connects type of bars are played bud.

dude cant handle chicks. do girls wanna date him? never
Al Green w/ relationships... and ironically never hears 'lets stay together'

liked this witty tbh.

ur league run's pathetic. sayin ur dope is just a charade
u cant stay a float... ure more like a fat tuba player fallin behind the parade

LOL nice

n ya crews a buncha fags. act hard, but theres no terror
shit, a group as gay as the BGs aint been seen since the disco era

this was a cool lil flip tbh


Quote:

Originally Posted by Allen Knight (Post 89298)
al's rippin' up ur girls pussy, feelin' her from thighs to breast
& fuckin till im so deep in the hole it resembles Chris Tuckers debt wit the IRS

LOL cool

no1 wants to be like u faggot, fashion sense is trash u coward
last person that dressed sharp, was his boyfriend after he fucked'em in the ass for hours

LOL alright thought it was gonna be lame..till the punch came.

ur broke as fuck neva have stacks to touch, faggot i'll rec ya bad
last time u had 2 large in ur palms...u were jerking off acouple of dudes for extra cash

this was LOL but nto harsh by any means kinda played like sharps, diss functions bar

u neva get girls to put out, the creepy type got'em hating men
cuz any bitch sharp nails, is scratchin'em wit those tryna stop him from raping them
LOL ok

aimin' the double barrel at ur temple, poppin at limbs to murk ya
till the point ur brains are split eight ways & he writes a OM on his twins murda

two people ref'd in punches lol be nice in a tag match like Sharps opener.

the shit u say on heres a mockery, ur tails are the fuckin wack type
only time i wanna see nine stories, is watching u fall head first from that
height

cool close


Hmm.. both had a punch ref'n two different peeps sharps opener N allens one bar..not a fan of takin focus off a person. But both were creative so kudos no hate or animosity. Where @Sharp Nine was on the more complex/creative side of formulating a punch, @Allen Knight was more harsh N straight forward with his wording. I like allens wording N name flipping better. But i did like sharps opener better where i liked allens closer better. both had a played/old concept. But allen's wording is better on his, i like allens for sheer LOL's N harshness.

v/allen

Atomic 07-05-2013 10:25 PM

all this fags posts suckkkk. one glance i nearly get sick
if im sayin Allen's Elite... its cuz hes unwanted as that Undead prick
cool, connection isn't that hard hitting though.
dude barely beat chyeahh in a cyph. thats like pitiful's definition
we all know Al Po' at text... considering that dude's his main competition
it's cool but your connections are always too simple/easy to see.
you insulting the site was sad. mighta thought you was sonnin' hoes
but its generous sayin that Diss functions... cuz each line was one a' those
not bad, feelin it.
dude cant handle chicks. do girls wanna date him? never
Al Green w/ relationships... and ironically never hears 'lets stay together'
it's nice but not hard hitting.
ur league run's pathetic. sayin ur dope is just a charade
u cant stay a float... ure more like a fat tuba player fallin behind the parade
okay.
n ya crews a buncha fags. act hard, but theres no terror
shit, a group as gay as the BGs aint been seen since the disco era
nah. ur only miss tho imo.

//

al's rippin' up ur girls pussy, feelin' her from thighs to breast
& fuckin till im so deep in the hole it resembles Chris Tuckers debt wit the IRS
nice.
no1 wants to be like u faggot, fashion sense is trash u coward
last person that dressed sharp, was his boyfriend after he fucked'em in the ass for hours
ROFL.
ur broke as fuck neva have stacks to touch, faggot i'll rec ya bad
last time u had 2 large in ur palms...u were jerking off acouple of dudes for extra cash
cool.
u neva get girls to put out, the creepy type got'em hating men
cuz any bitch sharp nails, is scratchin'em wit those tryna stop him from raping them
wording isn't prime here, but the concept is certainly nice.
aimin' the double barrel at ur temple, poppin at limbs to murk ya
till the point ur brains are split eight ways & he writes a OM on his twins murda
meh
the shit u say on heres a mockery, ur tails are the fuckin wack type
only time i wanna see nine stories, is watching u fall head first from that height
too easy, not bad i guess.

//

good battle, let me say i enjoyed reading both verses. for me, allen had better concepts, & for me, executed them better aswell. sharps verse wasn't bad by any means but his connections are always just a lil too obvious for me. overall allens bars had more of that "ahhh" factor for me & i have him edging this one. good verse tho boys

v/ allen

Maximus 07-06-2013 09:01 AM

SHARP
dude barely beat chyeahh in a cyph. thats like pitiful's definition
we all know Al Po' at text... considering that dude's his main competition
n ya crews a buncha fags. act hard, but theres no terror
shit, a group as gay as the BGs aint been seen since the disco era
vs
ALLEN
al's rippin' up ur girls pussy, feelin' her fromthighs to breast
& fuckin till im so deep in the hole it resembles Chris Tuckers debt wit the IRS
no1 wants to be like u faggot, fashion sense is trash u coward
last person that dressed sharp, was his boyfriend after he fucked'em in the ass for hours
u neva get girls to put out, the creepy type got'em hating men
cuz any bitch sharp nails, is scratchin'em wit those tryna stop him from raping them
.
.
Another dope match up, good shit from both. Sharp was aight for the most part, the two punches i quoted were pretty cool, others werent bad either just felt those most. Allen takes this for be being more complex and consistent with his hits
v/Allen

~RustyGunZ~ 07-06-2013 05:34 PM

all this fags posts suckkkk. one glance i nearly get sick
if im sayin Allen's Elite... its cuz hes unwanted as that Undead prick
dude barely beat chyeahh in a cyph. thats like pitiful's definition
we all know Al Po' at text... considering that dude's his main competition
you insulting the site was sad. mighta thought you was sonnin' hoes
but its generous sayin that Diss functions... cuz each line was one a' those
dude cant handle chicks. do girls wanna date him? never
Al Green w/ relationships... and ironically never hears 'lets stay together'

elite was a cool current event boarding line. al po could be seen as forced on the poor shit but I liked it. diss functions eh, dis lines been done to death but it's relevant to him so i'll give it to you for a weaker quote. al green was a dope flip, seen that nameplay but liked the punch. nah @ float. BGs eh just didn't hit for me it was a cool attempt though.

vs

al's rippin' up ur girls pussy, feelin' her from thighs to breast
& fuckin till im so deep in the hole it resembles Chris Tuckers debt wit the IRS
no1 wants to be like u faggot, fashion sense is trash u coward
last person that dressed sharp, was his boyfriend after he fucked'em in the ass for hours
ur broke as fuck neva have stacks to touch, faggot i'll rec ya bad
last time u had 2 large in ur palms...u were jerking off acouple of dudes for extra cash
u neva get girls to put out, the creepy type got'em hating men
cuz any bitch sharp nails, is scratchin'em wit those tryna stop him from raping them
aimin' the double barrel at ur temple, poppin at limbs to murk ya
till the point ur brains are split eight ways & he writes a OM on his twins murda
the shit u say on heres a mockery, ur tails are the fuckin wack type
only time i wanna see nine stories, is watching u fall head first from that height

deep in the hole was cool nothing to serious. dressed sharp alright nameplay. 2 large lmao. sharp nails was a better nameplay than the first. split eight was cool. nine stories was the best nameplay

lots of nameplays, sharps strongest was al green and als was nine stories. both had a few personals as well. consistency gets it for allen though, sharp ended poorly and it hurt him

v/ak

Alvin Karpis 07-07-2013 04:55 PM

disco

vs

nine stories


close but sharp had a couple played lines which held him back, allen was consistent

v/allen knight

Dominate 07-07-2013 06:08 PM

all this fags posts suckkkk. one glance i nearly get sick
if im sayin Allen's Elite... its cuz hes unwanted as that Undead prick
nah, simple wp needs a harsh punch to work, “you’re unwanted” doesn’t cut it
dude barely beat chyeahh in a cyph. thats like pitiful's definition
we all know Al Po' at text... considering that dude's his main competition
good nameflip & personal
you insulting the site was sad. mighta thought you was sonnin' hoes
but its generous sayin that Diss functions... cuz each line was one a' those
Ehhh… you worded it as a personal which was cool, but “diss-“ wordplays have been done to death
dude cant handle chicks. do girls wanna date him? never
Al Green w/ relationships... and ironically never hears 'lets stay together'
Nice! Good nameplay and flipped well for the punch
ur league run's pathetic. sayin ur dope is just a charade
u cant stay a float... ure more like a fat tuba player fallin behind the parade
Seen “float” wp before… flip was creative but not super harsh
n ya crews a buncha fags. act hard, but theres no terror
shit, a group as gay as the BGs aint been seen since the disco era
LoL cool, decent flip

al's rippin' up ur girls pussy, feelin' her from thighs to breast
& fuckin till im so deep in the hole it resembles Chris Tuckers debt wit the IRS
heh, OK… seen similar wp before but it’s worded well and flipped with recent event is cool
no1 wants to be like u faggot, fashion sense is trash u coward
last person that dressed sharp, was his boyfriend after he fucked'em in the ass for hours
OK. Think I saw a ‘dressed sharp’ nameplay on him before
ur broke as fuck neva have stacks to touch, faggot i'll rec ya bad
last time u had 2 large in ur palms...u were jerking off acouple of dudes for extra cash
LoL, cool
u neva get girls to put out, the creepy type got'em hating men
cuz any bitch sharp nails, is scratchin'em wit those tryna stop him from raping them
OK nameflip
aimin' the double barrel at ur temple, poppin at limbs to murk ya
till the point ur brains are split eight ways & he writes a OM on his twins murda
Dece
the shit u say on heres a mockery, ur tails are the fuckin wack type
only time i wanna see nine stories, is watching u fall head first from that height
Not bad



When I first read it I thought Allen def had it, when I break it down it's closer but Ima still edge it to AK. I thought Sharp's good concepts were better than Allen's, but he had a couple bars I wasn't feeling... wheras Allen's entire verse was cool/OK/decent concepts - very consistent - and he had the funny/harsh wording which I think is the main thing that puts him ahead when I read both verses as a whole... Sharp's wording is fine as far as technicalities but he didn't bring the same level of harsh/funny to his flips as AK did


Cool battle guys


V/ Allen

Cashius 07-07-2013 08:27 PM

Al Green, float

Vs.

Two large, sharp nails

I thought this was close. I've seen both come better. I think Sharps misses were worse. So, I think Allen takes it.

Philly 07-07-2013 10:00 PM

dude cant handle chicks. do girls wanna date him? never
Al Green w/ relationships... and ironically never hears 'lets stay together'
n ya crews a buncha fags. act hard, but theres no terror
shit, a group as gay as the BGs aint been seen since the disco era

vs.

no1 wants to be like u faggot, fashion sense is trash u coward
last person that dressed sharp, was his boyfriend after he fucked'em in the ass for hours
ur broke as fuck neva have stacks to touch, faggot i'll rec ya bad
last time u had 2 large in ur palms...u were jerking off acouple of dudes for extra cash
the shit u say on heres a mockery, ur tails are the fuckin wack type
only time i wanna see nine stories, is watching u fall head first from that height

Allen had a lot of borderline quotables as well. Thought the chris tucker was nice, sharp nails was pretty good too. Only line I didn't fuck wit a lot was split eight but that wasn't bad either.

Sharp's verse was solid, just a few bars that didn't go as hard to me like the opener and diss function.

Good shit though.

V/ Allen

Joe Metts 07-07-2013 10:38 PM

Sharp had al po, al green and disco. Tight verse overall. Sharp went in.

Allen had Irs, sharp nails and split eight. Allen went in too. As expected.

Way closer then i imagined. Sharps misses were worse. Al had lotb with that sharp nails joint. I feel like sharp deserves a vote cause its closer then it seems but allen won i think.

V/Ak

Beyond 07-08-2013 12:38 AM

all this fags posts suckkkk. one glance i nearly get sick
if im sayin Allen's Elite... its cuz hes unwanted as that Undead prick
Not feeling.
dude barely beat chyeahh in a cyph. thats like pitiful's definition
we all know Al Po' at text... considering that dude's his main competition
Good nameplay personal.
you insulting the site was sad. mighta thought you was sonnin' hoes
but its generous sayin that Diss functions... cuz each line was one a' those
Solid wordplay personal, could be flipped better.
dude cant handle chicks. do girls wanna date him? never
Al Green w/ relationships... and ironically never hears 'lets stay together'
Good nameplay.
ur league run's pathetic. sayin ur dope is just a charade
u cant stay a float... ure more like a fat tuba player fallin behind the parade
Old wordplay, flip is alright.
n ya crews a buncha fags. act hard, but theres no terror
shit, a group as gay as the BGs aint been seen since the disco era
Good crew nameplay closer.

vs

al's rippin' up ur girls pussy, feelin' her from thighs to breast
& fuckin till im so deep in the hole it resembles Chris Tuckers debt wit the IRS
Old cliche play, decent current event flip.
no1 wants to be like u faggot, fashion sense is trash u coward
last person that dressed sharp, was his boyfriend after he fucked'em in the ass for hours
Good nameplay.
ur broke as fuck neva have stacks to touch, faggot i'll rec ya bad
last time u had 2 large in ur palms...u were jerking off acouple of dudes for extra cash
Good.
u neva get girls to put out, the creepy type got'em hating men
cuz any bitch sharp nails, is scratchin'em wit those tryna stop him from raping them
Good nameplay, wording could of been better.
aimin' the double barrel at ur temple, poppin at limbs to murk ya
till the point ur brains are split eight ways & he writes a OM on his twins murda
I used a similar line in Fall Brawl, flip is ok. Multies are off and don't like the wording.
the shit u say on heres a mockery, ur tails are the fuckin wack type
only time i wanna see nine stories, is watching u fall head first from that height
Good nameplay closer.


Eh, close battle. Could go either way. Liked about 3 lines from each. Both had an old concept as well as some wording issues. I'll go with AK for having one more concept I really liked, but just not hitting the wording out of the park. I will say this, though... Sharp really surprised me here and was much better than I remembered him. He's definitely one of the best on the site at this point and am sure he'll start champing a bunch of shit real soon. Props to both.

/v allen knight


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