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Press Off....
Lost the will to talk to people. I'll dodge & weave you
Your logic's see through. This for the awkward & lethal. The costumes, the evils. This the cave. You found calligraphy This sounds like shit to me. Heavens up there. But on the ground it's misery And my worries still keep me alive Life's a bitch and it's so easy to die I don't even want release. It's calm. In reach We share a common leaf? I just want to play in the autumn sheets Do drugs to distance myself. It is a hell. Burn it. It's linen, a shell.. I forget everything good. Just focus on bad I'm being eaten. I love the locusts of sad Hope is a drag.. Just drags on to oblivion You're sexy. Swap saliva with tonic and vinegar I mean, what's worth it? Shit's perfect til it's not Then it rots and falls off. Gosh. Just mosh Call me Tosh point Ways. I want to be your hot, moist glaze I just want to blotch your coin phrase The truth is overrated. It's stupid Booty. Sober. Naked. It's all a movie A motion, sacred.. Like what's strange? You tough? Slave. Used to want to touch pain The cuts, flames. Too much change. This? Yeah. Heart just dripped down the love drain Seriously. Lets talk. Having some trouble. Bed's gone Later sleep. Read the blood that lays beneath this red chalk Just chicken scratch. Running circles w/my head off Time to press off. You've never been dead. Scoff Think I give a fuck? Luck missed me, hella The white hot. Fire just gets me wetter |
I like the blunt style you've been using lately. It's real.
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This was smooth as hell
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Cool flow...simple but affective. Kinda melodramatic in a way with some cool multis. Maybe just a touch too depressing lol. Good shit man
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thought the first quarter was opretty dope. then it seemed to go off on some wierd rhyming words... probably was your point -but thought it slacked because of it. you seemed so much more focussed before. glad your more consistent now though. hopefully we can smash a collab out sooner than later
This the cave. You found calligraphy This sounds like shit to me. Heavens up there. But on the ground it's misery And my worries still keep me alive Life's a bitch and it's so easy to die 1 |
Lost the will to talk to people. I'll dodge & weave you
:/ Hope is a drag.. Just drags on to oblivion You're sexy. Swap saliva with tonic and vinegar yowzah. lold at missed me, hella. you never miss a beat. one of the few i'd read an entire notebook of random scribble for the scraps of gold. you gave me the idea in some thread weeks back to rent a boat with a decent-sized group and a more decent-sized pile of Christy. thanks. really hoping things turn around for you dude. madness is repetition and you sound like someone in circles. you're extracting good-to-great rhyme work from these neurotic tendencies but at what cost? this just in - I'm the worst fucking hypocrite be safe OG 1 |
Fucking your mom Tldr#
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Impressive Wise, you're really growing as a writer, i think that's very clear. Your pieces are so honest and you can always tell how you're feeling when you write them. Sounds like you broke up with the girlfriend to me, but I'm just guessing. You're a bit of an emo in disguise, maybe an emotional wreck, you seem to get very high (figuratively & literally) and very low. Maybe it's the drugs? You'll have to ask Veritas on that one.
The rhymes were very original as usual and the legitimacy of it all made it that much better. Very good work here, Wise. |
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