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Darth Yoda 06-15-2013 02:23 AM

i don't really care
 
I’m the metaphorical bond, of the Torah, Qur’an.
Folded like origami, or pawned for a quarter, you’re gone
Kobe, LeBron. Obi & Wan Kinobe embalmed.
It’s over for all. Darth Yoda has forced his order on darkness.
On opiates. I’m…. Hoping to God it’s over when.
The Soviets launch appropriate bombs. The Holy War were in.
Magma blotched molteny wads, my sulfur breath.
Fingertip prick fills rosy drips of blood; it’s loneliness
Breathing in the Geysers steam,
My eyes decipher beaming codes in regions
Drowning a dude SO MUCH in the Fountain of youth..
He’s now a streaming flow of semen
you could even see the forming of his double helix
Or reading binary DNA unravel even before conceiving
Tech broker, meth smoking simpleton.
Still walking with ten holes inside me
Breast stroking in River Styx, to steer clear of the floating bodies
Ten-Fold.
Merge with a Terminator. Start terminating this genre
My veins circulating thin lava, with curvasive twin chakra
The Percocets percolating inside moi…while impersonating Obama
Coordinating fixed karma, with Morgan Le’faye
While I score and filet your organs with pasta. Gourmet!
It’s gorgeous how horny I get while engorging your momma.
Mourning is outta the, question. Just get on with the Saga.
Nourished.
Drink alphabet soup, and pee my name into the snow.
God said Adam & Eve not Atoms & cleave so they don’t recognize your face from your own

Wise Wiggles 06-15-2013 03:08 PM

they ain't ready

Greed 06-15-2013 05:12 PM

had its moments

Geno 06-15-2013 06:10 PM

This was pretty entertaining.
Had a lot of dope lines towards the end. Nice drop dy

Sharp 06-16-2013 06:57 PM

funky. interesting stuff, well worded and kind of journey-esque jumping around from things smoothly. enjoyable read


My veins circulating thin lava, with curvasive twin chakra
The Percocets percolating inside moi…while impersonating Obama

illy

Vulgar 06-16-2013 11:30 PM

He’s now a streaming flow of semen
you could even see the forming of his double helix
Or reading binary DNA unravel even before conceiving
Tech broker, meth smoking simpleton.
Still walking with ten holes inside me
Breast stroking in River Styx, to steer clear of the floating bodies
Ten-Fold.
^nice.

CopyPat 06-17-2013 01:30 PM

ha super dope. i love how it just feels like ur enjoying yourself when u do this, it always seems like ur just having fun and playing with different shit, its always fun to read

I’m the metaphorical bond, of the Torah, Qur’an.
Folded like origami, or pawned for a quarter, you’re gone
Kobe, LeBron. Obi & Wan Kinobe embalmed.
It’s over for all. Darth Yoda has forced his order on darkness.
On opiates. I’m…. Hoping to God it’s over when.
The Soviets launch appropriate bombs

Oh my...


Merge with a Terminator. Start terminating this genre
My veins circulating thin lava, with curvasive twin chakra
The Percocets percolating inside moi…while impersonating Obama
Coordinating fixed karma, with Morgan Le’faye
While I score and filet your organs with pasta. Gourmet!
It’s gorgeous how horny I get while engorging your momma.
Mourning is outta the, question. Just get on with the Saga.

OUCH!!!

as soon as you said inside moi i just had a huge huge smile

i really can't see anyone else using that word, that's what makes u dope. just really original and doin ur own thing.

obv the flow is retarded too. keep droppin, lovin em


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