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Next to nerve
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:::::....::::: ......:::::: ....:::::: Where I bury newlyweds? I'm movie dead, sick of em Ever seen a moving head? Animate. I ration berry stems for my imaginary friends Capillaries bend, dabs from hell- size of Cadbary eggs Back carries rain. Mask. Carey. Banks.. Every open wing scrunched. This the dopamine dump When the pokes & stings come, my ocean bleeds Stuffed. Crumb of her'desire. Fuck your furnace fire Save your books. LOOK & learn what's higher Curtain Spirals merged w/sky falls We're all dull boys, huh? I died in the office. Live from the coffin, been writing the walls thin Signing horizons to my tired and nauseas Always hell bound. Insane? I can't tell now Stay freaking myself out. iiiiiiiiiii've been dealt clouds Know what crushed feels like? Wanna TOUCH real light It sucks. Peel life & eat the inside. Speechless Peach eyes. A treat to despise I'm bending nevers. Jenny letters Blood soaked with trendy jestures Ever seen smoke connect in words? Ears ringin'. Smoke detector curse Paying attention in a receptive burst Oh you deep? This is next to nerve Press alert. Pebble blurghhhhhhhhssss Do it, just know I let you first. You special nurse You. Lieutenant Dan destinies. Meditate on sand settings Breathe. Blues method trance recipe Think the blatant lies help? No pussy I just sit & play with myself. Interchange my mind's shelves @ a rave w/dime elves. Completely uninhibited Numb. Needy. Something ribbit'd Mush dreams. Colors riveting Dungeon images where trust meets wickedness It's ugly, isn't it? Judge me, My give a shits went the fuck out the window I've long lost it. Bong omelettes, Kissing this calm constant... |
this seems really off wise. sup? iono. not feeling it for some reason, couldnt get past the first 5-6 lines without saying wtf is going on here... like your wording was all fucked or something
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like awesome bro
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Awesome feedback you faggot brains
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I love you, Wise. What's your Christian name?
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Benjamin. People call me Ben. Close friends call me by other names such as Bridge or Benny Boy or Bennihans...
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I will call you Ben Dover...ahahahahaha
This was dope, idk what geno is talking about tbh. |
Didn't like much, not because of what geno said, but because it seemed linear. Seems like you were too focused on sounding scatter brained
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^ who is this dip?
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Lol
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wise you're dope but i hate when you castrate your wording to have the flow match, because you have talent which exceeds that necessity. but maybe that's your steez and i just fuck with you less since you honed in on your style. i used to fuck with you a lot, i can't remember when last i read a piece that made me think dammmmmmmn son. not to say you haven't, or it isn't in you. this wasn't it, obviously. oh well, who gives a fuck.
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This was great you hater faggot brains. I quite enjoyed this as usual. You have the type of style that's so signature. You never try to be something you're not. Props for another nice drop
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I couldn't read this piece jus seemed like gibberish that rhymes tbh
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s'cause you can't read faggit brain
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