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Wise Wiggles 06-01-2014 03:36 PM

Next to nerve
 
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Where I bury newlyweds? I'm movie dead, sick of em
Ever seen a moving head? Animate.
I ration berry stems for my imaginary friends
Capillaries bend, dabs from hell- size of Cadbary eggs
Back carries rain. Mask. Carey. Banks..
Every open wing scrunched. This the dopamine dump
When the pokes & stings come, my ocean bleeds
Stuffed. Crumb of her'desire. Fuck your furnace fire
Save your books. LOOK & learn what's higher
Curtain Spirals merged w/sky falls
We're all dull boys, huh? I died in the office.
Live from the coffin, been writing the walls thin
Signing horizons to my tired and nauseas
Always hell bound. Insane? I can't tell now
Stay freaking myself out. iiiiiiiiiii've been dealt clouds
Know what crushed feels like? Wanna TOUCH real light
It sucks. Peel life & eat the inside. Speechless
Peach eyes. A treat to despise
I'm bending nevers. Jenny letters
Blood soaked with trendy jestures
Ever seen smoke connect in words?
Ears ringin'. Smoke detector curse
Paying attention in a receptive burst
Oh you deep? This is next to nerve
Press alert. Pebble blurghhhhhhhhssss
Do it, just know I let you first. You special nurse
You. Lieutenant Dan destinies. Meditate on sand settings
Breathe. Blues method trance recipe
Think the blatant lies help? No pussy
I just sit & play with myself. Interchange my mind's shelves
@ a rave w/dime elves. Completely uninhibited
Numb. Needy. Something ribbit'd
Mush dreams. Colors riveting
Dungeon images where trust meets wickedness
It's ugly, isn't it? Judge me,
My give a shits went the fuck out the window
I've long lost it. Bong omelettes,
Kissing this calm constant...

Geno 06-01-2014 07:44 PM

this seems really off wise. sup? iono. not feeling it for some reason, couldnt get past the first 5-6 lines without saying wtf is going on here... like your wording was all fucked or something

Wise Wiggles 06-01-2014 08:27 PM

like awesome bro

Wise Wiggles 06-08-2014 09:54 AM

Awesome feedback you faggot brains

dull boy 06-08-2014 12:07 PM

I love you, Wise. What's your Christian name?

Wise Wiggles 06-08-2014 01:14 PM

Benjamin. People call me Ben. Close friends call me by other names such as Bridge or Benny Boy or Bennihans...

Witty 06-08-2014 01:31 PM

I will call you Ben Dover...ahahahahaha

This was dope, idk what geno is talking about tbh.

big baby 06-08-2014 05:47 PM

Didn't like much, not because of what geno said, but because it seemed linear. Seems like you were too focused on sounding scatter brained

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Do it, just know I let you first. You special nurse
You. Lieutenant Dan destinies. Meditate on sand settings
Breathe. Blues method trance recipe
Think the blatant lies help? No pussy
I just sit & play with myself. Interchange my mind's shelves
@ a rave w/dime elves. Completely uninhibited
Probably the best and worst part.

Wise Wiggles 07-19-2014 10:19 AM

^ who is this dip?

ill nik-A 07-19-2014 10:22 AM

Lol

DexLabb 07-19-2014 11:00 AM

is this what u were talkin bout?

http://www.bongcookbook.com/2014/04/...d-eggs-in.html

Eŋg 08-05-2014 04:37 PM

wise you're dope but i hate when you castrate your wording to have the flow match, because you have talent which exceeds that necessity. but maybe that's your steez and i just fuck with you less since you honed in on your style. i used to fuck with you a lot, i can't remember when last i read a piece that made me think dammmmmmmn son. not to say you haven't, or it isn't in you. this wasn't it, obviously. oh well, who gives a fuck.

live life.

david stern razor burns 08-05-2014 05:19 PM

This was great you hater faggot brains. I quite enjoyed this as usual. You have the type of style that's so signature. You never try to be something you're not. Props for another nice drop

gitto138 08-05-2014 06:54 PM

I couldn't read this piece jus seemed like gibberish that rhymes tbh

PancakeBrah 08-05-2014 07:16 PM

s'cause you can't read faggit brain


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