ill nik-A vs. Serious - {ill nik-A wins}
 

@ill nik-A @Serious

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Due Dates:

• Verses are due Wednesday,
  June 19th 2013 11:59 PM PST.
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10
Welcome!

U showing cool guy? @Serious

10 sent to meth @Serious

@Storyteller

Noobs are wack as hell & see that’s just the facts
I don’t need any emphasis… while u need to capitalize ur weak attempts at that
I’m trying my best cuz I could even get burned see
But how can I be serious… when u’re a joke to anyone decent in the tourney
I’m winning & no one believes any other outcome
U beating me has a weird sound to it but not enough to make the Yeezus album
I don’t do boring shit thats like denying myself
Variety is the spice of life… urs must be only cookin with onions crying for help
Admit u like being sonned or gettin slaughtered lately
Bad news travels fast… ur paternity test was in a Lamborghini drivin ur father crazy

Storyteller/Serious' Verse

you've been peakin' ur run.... but do damage mostly with pink slip waivers
it's just so nika<-- pussy that u never dipped or ones that slip and hit you with child support papers.
how u mean but you look like a yeast infection and fornicated with the priest,
got dick stuffed in you so many times they nicknamed you a thanksgiving feast.
ur strait clownin ya self .. only time we fear of something ill,
is a disease in which ur case you fill perfectly after the ST D's I've instilled.
ur time is up we all wish you'd hang it up fuck tryna brawl
we applaud you dancing on the edge of glory we just wish u'd fall
your a circle bum.. only surrounding your self with DR's thikin' we FOOLS,
but he literally followed the ROAD TO SUCK-CESS by being the best at too

Landslide

Nik won easy and he didnt come w/ his best at all

Story was corny and played

Nik was fresh, and executed well

V/ nik

i'd break it down, but i don't really feel it's worth it. nik had a few quotes/throughout was ok. while serious to me, didn't really form many hard hitting punches.

overall it wasn't a bad battle but nik clearly came harder.

v/ nik

ill nik-a

nothing

vs

serious

nothing

ill nika stayed in his lane while serious got a little too hypy with it

vote - lil nigga

Noobs are wack as hell & see that¡¯s just the facts
I don¡¯t need any emphasis¡ while u need to capitalize ur weak attempts at that
DOPE INTRO
I¡¯m trying my best cuz I could even get burned see
But how can I be serious¡ when u¡¯re a joke to anyone decent in the tourney
AIGHT
I¡¯m winning & no one believes any other outcome
U beating me has a weird sound to it but not enough to make the Yeezus album
OK
I don¡¯t do boring shit thats like denying myself
Variety is the spice of life¡ urs must be only cookin with onions crying for help
LMAO
Admit u like being sonned or gettin slaughtered lately
Bad news travels fast¡ ur paternity test was in a Lamborghini drivin ur father crazy
COOL SHIT
VS
you've been peakin' ur run.... but do damage mostly with pink slip waivers
it's just so nika<-- pussy that u never dipped or ones that slip and hit you with child support papers.
NAH THIS SHIT WAS SCATTERED
how u mean but you look like a yeast infection and fornicated with the priest,
got dick stuffed in you so many times they nicknamed you a thanksgiving feast.
NAH
ur strait clownin ya self .. only time we fear of something ill,
is a disease in which ur case you fill perfectlyafter the ST D's I've instilled.
NAH
ur time is up we all wish you'd hang it up fuck tryna brawl
we applaud you dancing on the edge of glory we just wish u'd fall
WEAK
your a circle bum.. only surrounding your self with DR's thikin' we FOOLS,
but he literally followed the ROAD TO SUCK-CESS by being the best at too
CORNY BRO
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Nik got this pretty well, he just did his thing as usual and took it, i thought the emphasis/capitalize personal hit really hard since story did it in his verse here. Dunno man, story ive seen u dropped better but ur attempts here were really ehh.

nikas first 4 bars got it, rest were cliches


serious didn't have enough and a few played lines which held him back


v/nika

Nika had the lambo joint. Rest was alright.

Serious didn't have anything. Concepts need a boost.

V/Nika

Spice, Lamborghini

Vs.

Wasn't really feeling anything. Sorry. There was some played stuff and done straight misses too.

Nik.

Yeezus bar was dope to me lambo line was cool rest was blah. Serious had nothing really creative or hitting.

Vote - Nika