Netcees - Allen Knight vs. Camp Bell

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Allen Knight vs. Camp Bell - {Allen Knight wins}

The Summer Classic V
The Premier Text Battling Tournament

@Allen Knight @Camp Bell

Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Wednesday,
June 19th 2013 11:59 PM PST.
Check Ins are due Sunday, June 16th 2013
Voting ends Monday 11:59 PM PST.
Battles that lack votes may close later.

One sided battles may get closed early.

Extensions are normally 24 hours
(unless requested otherwise, that is),
can be no longer than 48 hours
and have to be granted by your opponent.

Line Limit:

Min. = 10 lines
Max. = 16 lines
The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both. If no line agreement is made you CANNOT go above 16 lines

General Rules:

1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts.
2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made.
Feeding = DQ.
Recycling = DQ.
Biting = DQ.
No freeposting, swaying or bitching.
Unless a picture battle is agreed upon,
linking to your opponent's picture or posting it
means you will disqualified.
A check in IS mandatory.
Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in.
If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post
must match the 1st person's line amount.

fuck it go 14, im about to be done

lmaoo...fuck it. 14 it is.

i hope you show cuz...

its the 2nd battle, this aged faggot losing his heat
so ima just wade thru this play like ray, allen...shooting for 3
no way the dude is a beast, this seems so unusual
yea, you did old numbers...just keying some roman numerals
your post aint brutal bro, you lame for bringing beef
ya scripts childish, i rather watch the commercials for AT&T
stop playing games wit me G and just keep it simple
he raised the bars, now ya favorite star...knee deep in limbo
try to protect this house an end up a fucking martyr
all i see in my line of site is a dying knight, thats under armour
i keep the burner harbored for the fakers and goons
i knew you was soft man...but ya writtens way gayer than you
now go play with a noose until you slip an choke out
im the sickest this summer cuz sniffles and sunburn dont count

u wished i didnt show cuz

i'm kamikazing the board u came from, savagely beat u son
& murder all of camp site...then bury his fuckin body deep in one
girls dont call u late night, while they do me raw
bitches never ring bell..unless its at my door tryna get a late night booty call
swingin a machete at ur homies, they about to go to hell dude
then chop up bell boy & leave'em in some luggage decaying in a hotel room
got the AR-15 aimed at u, wack noobie i crush whores
u deserve to take tutor ur neck cuz u didnt take any advice when i was yours
fuck ur freedom of speech, im beatin u wita bat dumb an silly
u'll never see liberty bell but ur head'll be cracked deeper than the one in philly
ur girls down to fuck anytime any where, she gets served & i own it
that bitch is unpredictable cuz i Splitter pussy at any spur of the moment
u got money on ur mind?, well u told the wrong nigga brah
pistol whip ur memory bank till that shits more empty than 1 hit by john dillinger

Quote:

Originally Posted by Allen Knight (Post 79354)

u wished i didnt show cuz

i'm kamikazing the board u came from, savagely beat u son
& murder all of camp site...then bury his fuckin body deep in one
--cool--
girls dont call u late night, while they do me raw
bitches never ring bell..unless its at my door tryna get a late night booty call
--word, good--
swingin a machete at ur homies, they about to go to hell dude
then chop up bell boy & leave'em in some luggage decaying in a hotel room
--ehhhhhh, the bell boy works fine, but i just didnt like how u executed the flip, this could be well liked tho i just dont feel it--
got the AR-15 aimed at u, wack noobie i crush whores
u deserve to take tutor ur neck cuz u didnt take any advice when i was yours
--dope--
fuck ur freedom of speech, im beatin u wita bat dumb an silly
u'll never see liberty bell but ur head'll be cracked deeper than the one in philly
--starting to be too many NP's my dude-
ur girls down to fuck anytime any where, she gets served & i own it
that bitch is unpredictable cuz i Splitter pussy at any spur of the moment
--could have been worded better imo, but is still cool--
u got money on ur mind?, well u told the wrong nigga brah
pistol whip ur memory bank till that shits more empty than 1 hit by john dillinger
--okish--

Quote:

Originally Posted by Camp Bell (Post 79346)

i hope you show cuz...

its the 2nd battle, this aged knuck losing his heat
so ima just wade thru this play like ray, allen...shooting for 3
--good concept, way it was executed didnt hit hard and really wasnt a punch--
no way the dude is a beast, this seems so unusual
yea, you did old numbers...just keying some roman numerals
--dont even get this--
your post aint brutal bro, you lame for bringing beef
ya scripts childish, i rather watch the commercials for AT&T
--ok concept, but not really a punch--
stop playing games wit me G and just keep it simple
he raised the bars, now ya favorite star...knee deep in limbo
--nah--
try to protect this house an end up a fucking martyr
all i see in my line of site is a dying knight, thats under armour
--nah--
i keep the burner harbored for the fakers and goons
i knew you was soft man...but ya writtens way gayer than you
--...--
now go play with a noose until you slip an choke out
im the sickest this summer cuz sniffles and sunburn dont count
--blah--

camp has some concepts he couold really work into cool punches, but he didnt here.

Allen came cool, easily good enough to win

V/ AK

Quote:

Originally Posted by Camp Bell (Post 79346)

i hope you show cuz...

its the 2nd battle, this aged knuck losing his heat
so ima just wade thru this play like ray, allen...shooting for 3

try to protect this house an end up a fucking martyr
all i see in my line of site is a dying knight, thats under armour
np is really old on him

now go play with a noose until you slip an choke out
im the sickest this summer cuz sniffles and sunburn dont count
'sick' wp is really old... a little better cuz of the summer/sunburn connection but still..

other 3 weren't bad or good... just OK or fillerish

vs

Quote:

Originally Posted by Allen Knight (Post 79354)

u wished i didnt show cuz

i'm kamikazing the board u came from, savagely beat u son
& murder all of camp site...then bury his fuckin body deep in one
girls dont call u late night, while they do me raw
bitches never ring bell..unless its at my door tryna get a late night booty call
swingin a machete at ur homies, they about to go to hell dude
then chop up bell boy & leave'em in some luggage decaying in a hotel room
fuck ur freedom of speech, im beatin u wita bat dumb an silly
u'll never see liberty bell but ur head'll be cracked deeper than the one in philly

^ too many np's... I'm sure you know this. It's understandable though when you're against someone you know you can still win against with doing it... I liked them in reverse order to how I've quoted them - liberty bell best, camp site worst

got the AR-15 aimed at u, wack noobie i crush whores
u deserve to take tutor ur neck cuz u didnt take any advice when i was yours

^wp is done but punch is strong enough to compensate. Good bar

ur girls down to fuck anytime any where, she gets served & i own it
that bitch is unpredictable cuz i Splitter pussy at any spur of the moment
u got money on ur mind?, well u told the wrong nigga brah
pistol whip ur memory bank till that shits more empty than 1 hit by john dillinger

^both OK. Not misses but not hard hitters either

v/ Allen

Dillinger
Bell boy
tutor

Vs

Limbo .... didnt hit hard but the wording was slick to me
Ray allen....wording off

Allens verse was better worded an more punch/battle oriented....campbell needs to work on being more direct....concepts r almost there just need to reword them

V ak

tutor and campsite

vs

childish

childish had potential but lost sting, allen was more consistent

v/allen knight

Nothing

vs.

i'm kamikazing the board u came from, savagely beat u son
& murder all of camp site...then bury his fuckin body deep in one
girls dont call u late night, while they do me raw
bitches never ring bell..unless its at my door tryna get a late night booty call
got the AR-15 aimed at u, wack noobie i crush whores
u deserve to take tutor ur neck cuz u didnt take any advice when i was yours

Allen started off with some nice shit - camp site was tough, I liked ring bell, and tutor was dope. Fell off a little towards the end with weaker concepts and a few too many nameplays, but still pretty solid.

Camp Bell just didn't have any stand out punches. Wasn't completely wack, I just didn't think there was anything particularly good...sickest and Ray Allen were probably the best bars.

V/ Allen