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thewinnerallday 05-27-2014 02:17 PM

Sunny Days (leave a link ill rtf)
 
this rain keeps on pourin, but the day wont be borin
its alll about the good times
this rain keeps on pourin, but the day wont be borin
its all about the good times

this rain keeps on pourin, but all i see is sunny days
cuz i realize the truth that loves real and money aint
so dont dwell on the paper, fuck it dont bother with beef
fellow a stranger and try to be one hell of a neighbor
there aint no such thing as a perfect life, and watch
ur back cuz people turn snake so keep ur circle tight
and dodge all the hate keep ur head in positive state
hold strong to your faith n hope everything’ll fall into place
i think they call it fate, i just call it another day
take some kush and blaze work hard cant take no study breaks
love dont hate, trust and pray, and ur luckll change
take ur bumps and aches and turn em into somethin great
when u hit rockbottom its hard to move without gettin squished
but build a foundation and shape your life up brick by brick
just let your light shine and play it like mr brightside
where alll you see is sunny days and moon lit night times,

this rain keeps on pourin, but the day wont be borin
its alll about the good times
this rain keeps on pourin, but the day wont be borin
its all about the good times

this rain keeps on pourin, but all i see is sunny days
smilin at my girl cuz she keeps makin a funny face
did i mention in this shit im ventin that shes lights my fire
never try to hide her even when shes gone its like im by her
yup shes my happy thought, even when i dont have alot
i guess all i really need is my girl and a bag of pot
its all about the good times, makin memories that last
frozen momments in time like a snow globe and its glass
and the days that go on forever like theyll never end
spent with someone that you love yea ya special friend
iif misery likes company then so do loneliness too
so make sure you spend your life with those closest to you
watch the path you take, certain roads lead to mad mistakes
and accidents happen just like a car that has no breaks
but dont be afraid to speed, keep that drive alive
buckle up cuz lifes rough but trust youll survive the ride

Zen 05-27-2014 02:42 PM

This was honest it seems. Cool first post. The simplicity was refreshing but I think some changes should be made. For example all you need is your girl and some pot. I love weed, but I would never say all I need is my girl...and my pot. Lol kinda takes away from what were going for. Cool though. Keep dropping.


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