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dull boy 05-26-2014 07:13 PM

Heyhihello
 
I know my anger's displaced. But that's what happens when pain is restrained. It doesn't fade, it evades and invades til the hate's in your veins and you can't seem to face where it came from. Confusion consumes him. Has clarity sparingly. Became used to illusion. Married to bury things he couldn't otherwise stuff inside. His families a lie, but his admittance is his real issues. His sanity's alright but he's still sick, too. He feels misused. Vanity and pride fills his views on how to handle things he finds in this fantasy called life. Self awareness apparent. He's a zombie with a conscience. A body in the audience of his own hell. Narrates and stars in his own narrative. It's hard being this transparent and involved with what carries us through harm. Sometimes he barely wants to start. Fucked up, 'cause he knows he could wear these lovely parts and tear these fucks apart, but the care just wasn't starved. Too aware. Too dumb. So smart.

Frank 05-26-2014 08:33 PM

Nah

Zen 05-27-2014 12:58 PM

I'm gonna guess the "he" you're referring to is you. Don't worry you're not dumb dull boy. Probably. I mean you could be since I don't know you. Wouldn't surprise me. Then again it would since you write masterpieces on occasion. Then again Einstein was pretty dumb too. Beethoven was deaf which pretty much makes him dumb if you don't think about it.

Maybe we should all try to be dumb. Dumb people seem pretty happy to be honest. Smart people are always miserable. Look at Christopher Hitchens. Dude was miserable. Had this constant straining to take a shit face all day every day. Maybe he was constipated. Nah, it was because he was smart and wished he was dumb.

Ignorance is bliss. If you're smart you wanna be dumb. I wish I was dumb. Sometimes I think I am but then I remember I'm not and get pissed. Certain says I'm sarcastically depressed. He's dumb though. What does that even mean?

Honestly I'm just bored and rambling. Dumb people are stupid. Don't be a dumbass, dull.

Mitch 05-27-2014 03:04 PM

overthinking is dumb, weird piece full boy
but i like it

DexLabb 05-28-2014 09:21 AM

u are 1 dimensional prove me wrong

dull boy 05-28-2014 10:03 AM

Naaa.

Greed 05-28-2014 11:10 AM

It was short cause you weren't feeling it either

dull boy 05-28-2014 11:25 AM

Agreed.

big baby 05-28-2014 03:47 PM

seemed like something you'd never let others read because of quality rendered through your own eyes. remember julies athiest/god thing? You're too dumb/so smart thing has surpassed that benchmark. stop it. or at least word it differently.

DexLabb 05-28-2014 08:05 PM

no dude, stop being a little wet spot in ur raps. express other emotions than sadness and defeat. ur like the emo guy from south park with the hair flip

dull boy 05-28-2014 10:51 PM

Then stop reading it?

big baby 05-28-2014 11:58 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by DexLabb (Post 341846)
no dude, stop being a little wet spot in ur raps. express other emotions than sadness and defeat. ur like the emo guy from south park with the hair flip

defeat isnt an emotion

DexLabb 05-29-2014 11:48 PM

thats ur answer to me eh? bein a little bitch. i got 5 plays on soundcloud today im a fucking god. dont talk like that in my presence

DexLabb 05-29-2014 11:49 PM

an emotion is a state of mind, and defeat is a state of mind bud. better study up ur english books if ur hoping to pass grade 11

PancakeBrah 05-30-2014 12:12 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by DexLabb (Post 342462)
an emotion is a state of mind, and defeat is a state of mind bud. better study up ur english books if ur hoping to pass grade 11

lol netcees broke this guy

you just hate to see it.

dull boy 05-30-2014 07:04 AM

I get 5 plays on sites I haven't logged into in half a decade.

DexLabb 05-30-2014 09:08 AM

lol @ netcees broke me. netcees is fundamentally broken, full of losers like this pancake kid and this cuts his wrist mcgee above me

Ghost1 05-30-2014 10:05 AM

Cuts his wrists mcgee, tho

Loooool


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