.:: By hating you I hate myself ::.
 

I've been roasted for eons, dreams descended in ash,
haunted by nature's parasites along with its predictable crash.
Humans; evolution's most intelligent trash festered in cash,
contested by rash decisions as destructive visions amassed.
I see tension build as parents whimper ''he's growing too fast...'',
not knowing the source comes from the force of ''how long will I last?''
And the equation of existence is confronted by scholars with math,
we fail to see that the answer to our lives is just a part of its path.
All while a butterfly escapes from this wrath with passion inside,
science made up a language to explain the passion that died.
If adding numbers to predict when asteroids hit isn't foreseeing the future,
then the wounds of humanity doesn't understand the nature of suture.
I bet that it suits you, and I'd lie if I didn't agree,
it's just that I hate to see so much of you within me.

humans didnt evolve, we were created by aliens to showcase their mastery of divine numerology. anyway cool piece, deep piece. Only thing that seems out of place is "I bet that it suits you, and I'd lie if I didn't agree," because you are agreeing with yourself? Doesn't make much sense. But other than that hiccup it was clean

The first few lines of this were brilliant imo. They were worded perfectly and had a smooth flow to it. Then once you got to the math/path bar the lines were too stretched for my taste. Mitch had a good point too about that lie line. Seemed a little awkward in the wording. I dig this though.

Who created the aliens?

the aliens probably evolved, if not created by other more advanced aliens, idk

does free will exist mitch?

does quantum entaglement mean jesus is real?

Stop this.

No more doing this in people threads.

okay mom ill be good

jk i dont really give a fuck

It was not a request.