from time, you know i got it
 

BEAT: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DmqG_35_m-k

check me,

i dont gotta' tell em' i don't gotta make a statement
its not the official type like the whistle type, yeah ur right
but only a little right, see the game needs change
and i got it, but its hard to race Bugattis on pedal bikes,

u know the feelin', Pac, can u picture me gleamin'?
shinin' like a wizzbang when an eclipse came or like, 2 Chainz
look i'm 3 times better, u can call me 6 chains, exchange
the love, maybe-we-can-let-the-misery-free-us, ahh,

sweet symphony i, seen the light illuminate a path,
but i'm in the back of the what-i-had-museum,
inbetween identities, mental mezzanine, drink heavily,
pressin' keys, n' just hoping for a press release,

i mean, i had 30 minuts or less like dominoes bitch,
n' this industry got a bounty like that domino bitch,
guess we're off topic a bit, ya'll know, young love, palo alto
we-can't-be-together, no-hip-hop-in-the-cosmos,

nah, ain't no Ray Charles glasses in those ashes,
they still live on, while he's up there chillin' with Atlas,
n' the world is on the shoulders of whoever can catch it
then spin it on a finger before sinkin' a basket,

yeah, and im back on my shit again, was sick for a week,
u know when u get a moment to revisit ur visions,
and u see the future on the line that ur johhny walkerin'
zig zaggin', sparkin' shit, not lookin' as far as this,

yeah,

and as far as this, man,
i just wanna be a part of it...

i just wanna be a part of it,
cant be apart from it,

yeah, part of it

lets get it

That was the worst fuckin rap I've ever read. You suck.

Bro go write bout ur battles along side bilbo baggins and gandalf and shit^

i know u like that gandalf hat from the new pharrell video

Maybe u should take more time on these instead of cranking out one a day......write one that takes u a week or 2

Take your time. Respect your craft with dedication and attention to detail.

maybe u should rap these instead of reading em'. i know what ur saying, but this shit goes hard. ppl don't want perfect, they don't want to hear what u guys write. its too perfect, with all the diction and shit... they want simple and hits home thats what i try to do

Do u think that i listen to text rhymes in my car?

This shit does not go hard

It needs work

and thats just it, since its not a mp3 u cant tell the inflection or where the snares are meant to be, but it goes hard in my mind. i know im better than mac miller, rick ross and that i love college guy. i can do this shit

Lol cmon

thats ur prob u think like 99% of ppl. u dont think somebody from here could make it big? what bout ghandi, mandella, wright bros, just a faded light in a sea of darkness. ur tellin me ghandi can free india and i cant write a bigger hit than i love college?

LOL WHAT BOUT GHANDI!!!

I LOVE THIS GUY.

for real^

In my opinion it need more creativity, flows, & complexity.
keep scribbling tho!

bro pipe down, we been over this complexity thing^

lol @ keep scribbling. fucking kunt

no offence u need to stop bickering at everyone and step your music up

fat kunt^

Somebody make me a mod again so I can close every one of this faggots threads.