yo greed
 

five ppl within the last hour said my verse wasn't hot yo

its got nothing to do with no showing

ppl read the verse like "yea its ok"

when I THINK it was hot and not just ok

that's all it boils down to, real talk... It just boils down to me NOT wasting my time

I understand what you saying I joined the tourney blah blah

dog I joined the tourney expecting not to waste my time. I see now, that its gonna be a waste of time.

I just ain't got it in me to care when nobody thinks I'm coming hot. I don't show up for no reason

lets not act like this is the first time I've dropped out of something based on feedback from my verses. I in fact have NEVER wasted time writing somewhere where ppl aren't feeling me

just change ppl's opinions.

it's easy.

God does not sway.

yea my verse wasn't the greatest ever but imo it was the best of the week

I read all of them

you can break my verse down all you want, why don't you break everyone else's down too

I was gonna edit and say miss kare was cool but I thought against it.

Glad I did.

word

I said my piece. I ain't demanding adonis worship me or nothing but if the feedback and mag doesn't reflect how I feel things went then I am removing myself from the situation

I ain't mad or nothing, I just honestly am not gonna waste my time thinking and typing up 16 lines for no reason

the logic should be easy to understand

the only thing here is des wasting his time writing for no reason

yes he enjoys writing. yes he needs recognition

I think his verse was hot. So why would he continue to write somewhere were ppl don't think its hot?

but they quote stuff like "when your mom said the twin towers were falling, you ran to check your computer roflz"

no, I'm not wasting my time if im destroyer. simple as that.

you all can have it

I'm going to look at said verse and return with an opinion.

its the feedback I'm getting, like my verse wasn't hot

I get enjoyment out of writing hot verses. not showing up for the sake of a tournament for everybody to think my verse wasn't hot

I've always been this way

I no show champ matches for bad feedback

I can't write for a crowd who doesn't like me.

would you perform for a crowd, that ain't feeling you? I don't think you would in any position in life yo. you can say you would but why would a person with common sense waste they time?

Miss Kare line was hot everything else is debatable. Greed is remiss in saying you had no bars.

Ha vintage des

Have u been reading thru the thread or no?

Who's verse was better than mine last week? That's my point I'm making here

Idc if u think my verse was good or not I'm moreso concerned with my verse vs. The other ppl who particpated who imo were levels below me.

If that wasn't the case then idk what tf I'm talmbout, and I'm not wasting anymore of my time

You should probably stop wasting your time then and ours. You made a thread over that verse? The fuck.


Btw who's verse was better?
A: your opponent

Ur verse was cool. But not best of the week

What I'm saying is, I'm not wasting my time

What's going on here, is not that certain ppl like my shit and certain ppl don't, no that's not what's happeneing here

What's happening here, is everyone except warden, which who I respect his opinion but it honestly doesn't matter in this situation, is not feeling my shit

So u can twist my words around, but like previously stated, no nigga with cmmon sense is gonna waste time performing for a crowd that doesn't like him

Sidenote no one should ever look at a greed vote as holding any weight
nigga been wack since the start of nc.

... I didn't say every battler or even drop a name .. I just said I don't see how simple Shit liks a 9/11 bar can get quoted in 2013

My point was battling has dumbed itself down for the readers sake and unless your someone who is known or popular then your shit don't really get read or critiqued correctly, in most cases, not all .. I know their are some honest cats out their but still

You have to be simple that's the problem if you want to appeal to a panel of voters then you must conform unless your a cat who gets the benefit of the doubt which their are a few out their.... I got sick of dumbing my shit down and having people pm like yo how you ain't quote the homie yu gi oh line that shit was fire .. then I'd have to be like wtf is a yu gi oh

My style was rarely simple .. maybe in pic battles and Shit I keyed or lost motivation/ time constraints ... their was a period were I did short set-up/punch just cause it kept the voters short attention spans in tact but if you want to win battles then you must figure out what the voters want not what you

This is prolly the problem right here. Ppl don't know how to read my shit

Its happened to me soooo many times

I join a league, ppl say my wording is off. I lose and shit. Then weeks later I don't change a goddamn thing about my wording, and some 'text legend' comes around like "yo I'm feelin this" then magically my wording isn't a problem anymore

If I have wording problems, you probably honestly don't know how to catch my flow of my verses

Which is cool. Just further prves my point

Who is this?


Anyways Des that family plan line ruined you. Cool sway thread but no one would care if you stopped battling altogether.

That battle defined how someone could be outclassed.

Why is this a discussion.