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DLB 06-02-2013 03:14 AM

Pinkslip: DLB v Serious - DEATH WINS
 
losers perm banned
12 lines

DLB 06-02-2013 03:15 AM

in

~RustyGunZ~ 06-02-2013 03:24 AM

lmaaaao

Spoken 06-02-2013 04:55 AM

in

Spoken 06-02-2013 05:04 AM

@Death


http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=7059

I can fucks with duke on how HE’S so DESPERATE for that DIKE!
I acknowledge his fight to be humane supporting that ANIMALS RIGHTS!
You’re an embarrassment, disgrace- a flamer.. what else is there to say,
would show you the shortest fairytale to date?... but your getting Perma banned TODAY!
This bitch’ll get murdered its time for this fag to GO
Say im under fire with BS but you should know..
… cuz every verse you spit is filled with those!
Meet ya maker… couldn’t even make a decent diss for the site,
I feel like Jay-z this instant…
.. cuz as soon as he gave me lip ima do him like JAY did CATHY WHITE! (Illuminati)
This bitch is done.. go chase JESSICA you fuckin WORM!!!!!
That’s the closest you’ll get to BE-ILL (Biel) and I mean that in both terms.
I aint the best.. but im the one whose signing this bitch as ILITERATE,
FACE PALM as the SIGNATURE... just signed DEATHS CERTIFICATE!

DLB 06-02-2013 02:55 PM

RIP

u aint new to txt, netcees or even the net,b
but ya style is the decayed remains of every textcee on Let's Beef
seriously...
dlb just flexing w/ heat, u already struggling as is
while ya lines & structure extend longer than the runway in Fast 6
ironic it's ya wife, but i'm the one she fiends for, kid
she loves to please me w/o asking, while u beg & say "please" for it
mentioning extramarital affairs..................
most ppl ain't Islamic or care about ya girl, it ain't a prob
we ain't in porn or prostitution but she dome'd up the NCGs like it was hijab
500 degreez,dlb SPIT HAWT FIYAH, summer came along too
but your lack of good hygiene is the only time that the blame is on you
Jessica my boo, while u lurk for girls like her in any instance
It's a Marvel most ppl hit the clubs to hookup & u login to Club Penguin

R!canTheoryz 06-02-2013 05:25 PM

I can fucks with duke on how HE’S so DESPERATE for that DIKE!
I acknowledge his fight to be humane supporting that ANIMALS RIGHTS!
Decent.
You’re an embarrassment, disgrace- a flamer.. what else is there to say,
would show you the shortest fairytale to date?... but your getting Perma banned TODAY!
Mehh.
This bitch’ll get murdered its time for this fag to GO
Say im under fire with BS but you should know..
… cuz every verse you spit is filled with those!
Not feeling this. its ight.
Meet ya maker… couldn’t even make a decent diss for the site,
I feel like Jay-z this instant…
.. cuz as soon as he gave me lip ima do him like JAY did CATHY WHITE! (Illuminati)
lol.
This bitch is done.. go chase JESSICA you fuckin WORM!!!!!
That’s the closest you’ll get to BE-ILL (Biel) and I mean that in both terms.
Nice, your best bar.
I aint the best.. but im the one whose signing this bitch as ILITERATE,
FACE PALM as the SIGNATURE... just signed DEATHS CERTIFICATE!
Nice.



VS


u aint new to txt, netcees or even the net,b
but ya style is the decayed remains of every textcee on Let's Beef
seriously...
nice lil personal here.
dlb just flexing w/ heat, u already struggling as is
while ya lines & structure extend longer than the runway in Fast 6
Decent.
ironic it's ya wife, but i'm the one she fiends for, kid
she loves to please me w/o asking, while u beg & say "please" for it
Meh, aint really feeling this its lacking more sting.
mentioning extramarital affairs..................
most ppl ain't Islamic or care about ya girl, it ain't a prob
we ain't in porn or prostitution but she dome'd up the NCGs like it was hijab
Ok.
500 degreez,dlb SPIT HAWT FIYAH, summer came along too
but your lack of good hygiene is the only time that the blame is on you
Too weak IMO, like wheres the sting?
Jessica my boo, while u lurk for girls like her in any instance
It's a Marvel most ppl hit the clubs to hookup & u login to Club Penguin
Nice.


Overall Vote- I Mean i made my choice calm and clear that serious got this he was more clear straight to the point and executed better punches then dlb who i felt was lacking sting in some area's other than that i got serious taking this for being slightly more witty.

Vote - Serious

trap. 06-02-2013 06:18 PM

serious' perma-ban

vs

death's opener / closer / fast 6 lines

serious has time to get better, too bad it didn't last that long

vote death

DLB 06-02-2013 10:23 PM

thx for votes guys 1-1

more votes appreciated

Spoken 06-03-2013 06:11 AM

props to @Death nice verse man...

thanks for the votes guys

DLB 06-03-2013 12:47 PM

links:
http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=6549&page=2
http://netcees.co/showthread.php?p=67830#post67830

Sharp 06-03-2013 10:08 PM

Beil was actually a decent idea, not worded too well tho

V

Hijab and club penguin got a chuckle outta me. Lil statementish but smooth read

V/death for stringer hits

But tbc I'm not banning anyone since serious just got here, has potential and isn't a bitch

DLB 06-04-2013 01:28 AM

nah u gon ban him if he loses mothafucka

Cakedout 06-04-2013 04:23 PM

New to the site but other than that.. I got Death with the W.. Serious: 1 syllabus count is weak..Try 3 or like your opponent do 2. Your ideas were ok but the wording could be structured better.. Death: Props on the opener but heading towards the middle I felt you started to slack.. Didn't like the fact that you talked about his girl for 2 reasons. Are you battling him or his girl? And the 2nd one is, does he even have a girl.. Overall decent battle.

Flow 06-04-2013 06:34 PM

Vote serious

SiK 06-04-2013 07:27 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Cakedout (Post 69095)
New to the site but other than that..




Seems legit

Allen Knight 06-04-2013 08:14 PM

i aint the best.. but im the one whose signing this bitch as ILITERATE,
FACE PALM as the SIGNATURE... just signed DEATHS CERTIFICATE!

Vs

u aint new to txt, netcees or even the net,b
but ya style is the decayed remains of every textcee on Let's Beef
seriously...
dlb just flexing w/ heat, u already struggling as is
while ya lines & structure extend longer than the runway in Fast 6

V/death, this was close serious work on fresher concepts & wording ur shit more
harsh, i thought dlb did enough to win this.

Spoken 06-05-2013 03:40 AM

4-2

uppin

The Bully 06-05-2013 03:58 AM

Serious definitely has some potential, like everyone's saying.
The second half of the verse was pretty cool...I liked the cathy white and closer.
The opener was aight, but the perma banned & BS just weren't good concepts.

Death had a couple nice ones, fast 6 and hijab were probably the best.
I don't know what lets beef is but the flow of that shit was tight.
And the please line was cool...
wasn't really into the penguin jawn, and the hygiene wasn't good.

Reasonably close, yea, but I thought Death took it for sure.

V/Death

V/Keep serious around anyway

Spoken 06-05-2013 04:02 AM

@Death whadda ya say partner?1.... still want me banned?


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