Dominate vs. Ronic {Dominate wins}
 

@Dominate vs. @Ronic


Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Friday,
  June 7th 2013 11:59 PM PST.
• Check Ins are due Monday, June 3rd 2013
• Voting ends Tuesday 11:59 PM PST.
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are normally 24 hours
  (unless requested otherwise, that is),
  can be no longer than 48 hours
  and have to be granted by your opponent.

Line Limit:

• Min. = 10 lines
• Max. = 16 lines
• The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both. If no line agreement is made you CANNOT go above 16 lines

General Rules:

• 1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts.
• 2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made.
• Feeding = DQ.
• Recycling = DQ.
• Biting = DQ.
• No freeposting, swaying or bitching.
• Unless a picture battle is agreed upon,
  linking to your opponent's picture or posting it
  means you will disqualified.
• A check in IS mandatory.
• Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in.
• If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post
  must match the 1st person's line amount.

Check gl hombre

You too. Check

12hr ext? Timing would be more convenient for me to write

Yeah I'm busy make it 24hrs @Dominate @Seth Scheinberg

sent 10

@Dominate

Dom's got no concepts, he braindead, reanimated in a zombie state
He could have double his lines, and I'd still beat domin8
When dom get candy in the bedroom and make her scream oh jesus
Real men havin snickers coz his best moves are mole teasers
Ya know he be suckin the flavor out it if he got beef
Nate dog its easy to denture coz ya all bark and no teeth
This chicken burglar needs a new identity, lettuce know soon dago
Your raps get so many "nays" you should change ya name - to mayo
You'll never beat me I'll murder you boy aint nobody heard of you
You can dream like a King but dominate always livin in servitude

Dude’s hideous. That’s a fact. Girls are mocking em if they bat a lash
Any bitches that Eye Ronic are being exactly that
You’re horrid. Catch your mother givin me oral son
& u wouldn’t even go ApRon… u’d bake me cupcakes wearing a floral one
Different dudes got different moves to get women to give em some booty
Prince Charming found a glass slipper. U find a girl’s glass & slipper a roofie
I saw ur verse against Rayge. You should be embarrassed queer
I didn’t wanna see any MoreRon.. then Knuck put me vs the stupidest fagg0t here
Some get to round 2 easy, getting there wasn’t that hard
& I’m bout to be tarred w/ that brush since this round was a brush w/ a tard

Ronic: domin8 was worded ok, but the wordplay seems obvious IMO.. all bark/no teeth line was ok but, making "nate dog" out of donminate seems like a stretch.. the rest was not really quotable or mention worthy.. just.. there

Dom: Eye ronic was really good IMO lotb.. and your other bars weren't bad, I just wished you hadn't gone like 80% name flips. but it was good enough to get my vote


V/Dom

You'll never beat me I'll murder you boy aint nobody heard of you
You can dream like a King but dominate always livin in servitude

Vs

Dude’s hideous. That’s a fact. Girls are mocking em if they bat a lash
Any bitches that Eye Ronic are being exactly that
You’re horrid. Catch your mother givin me oral son
& u wouldn’t even go ApRon… u’d bake me cupcakes wearing a floral one
I saw ur verse against Rayge. You should be embarrassed queer
I didn’t wanna see any MoreRon.. then Knuck put me vs the stupidest fagg0t here

V/dom, onesided battle dom had a solid verse the moreron line was nice, ron work
on wording an concepts ur verse was lacking that.

Dom's got no concepts, he braindead, reanimated in a zombie state
He could have double his lines, and I'd still beat domin8
not bad, pretty nice actually
When dom get candy in the bedroom and make her scream oh jesus
Real men havin snickers coz his best moves are mole teasers
lol nah
Ya know he be suckin the flavor out it if he got beef
Nate dog its easy to denture coz ya all bark and no teeth
meh, forced
This chicken burglar needs a new identity, lettuce know soon dago
Your raps get so many "nays" you should change ya name - to mayo
meh, nah
You'll never beat me I'll murder you boy aint nobody heard of you
You can dream like a King but dominate always livin in servitude
not feeling it.

//

Dude’s hideous. That’s a fact. Girls are mocking em if they bat a lash
Any bitches that Eye Ronic are being exactly that
nice
You’re horrid. Catch your mother givin me oral son
& u wouldn’t even go ApRon… u’d bake me cupcakes wearing a floral one
dece.
Different dudes got different moves to get women to give em some booty
Prince Charming found a glass slipper. U find a girl’s glass & slipper a roofie
dope
I saw ur verse against Rayge. You should be embarrassed queer
I didn’t wanna see any MoreRon.. then Knuck put me vs the stupidest fagg0t here
haha, nice
Some get to round 2 easy, getting there wasn’t that hard
& I’m bout to be tarred w/ that brush since this round was a brush w/ a tard
dece.

//

ronic had a few decent bars, but dom came very correct. one of the best verses i've read in a minute actually, i liked every single one of his bars & a few were very dope.
one sided battle, but not for that reason that ronic was wack, mostly because dom was fucking sick. v/ Dom.

You’re horrid. Catch your mother givin me oral son
& u wouldn’t even go ApRon… u’d bake me cupcakes wearing a floral one
Different dudes got different moves to get women to give em some booty
Prince Charming found a glass slipper. U find a girl’s glass & slipper a roofie
I saw ur verse against Rayge. You should be embarrassed queer
I didn’t wanna see any MoreRon.. then Knuck put me vs the stupidest fagg0t here

vs

ehhh no solid quotables imo.. a lot of misses, wording n execution through off any sting of your concepts/punches

mvgt @Dominate

Domin8 vs eyeronic and apron... not as close as the quotes though...

vote dominate

Ronic- dominate line was an aight opener, didnt like the mole teaser line and i thought the denture line coulda been wayy better imo. Wasnt feeling the mayo line and ur closer was ok even though it was just a statement
Dominate- Eye ronic was dope as well as the apron line, glass slipper was lolz, moron was cool and ur closer was decent so overall ur verse was more well rounded and puts u on top of this easily
v/dom