Netcees - Aero vs. Dystopian {Aero wins}

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Aero vs. Dystopian {Aero wins}

The Summer Classic V
The Premier Text Battling Tournament

@Aero vs. @Dystopian

Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Friday,
June 7th 2013 11:59 PM PST.
Check Ins are due Monday, June 3rd 2013
Voting ends Tuesday 11:59 PM PST.
Battles that lack votes may close later.

One sided battles may get closed early.

Extensions are normally 24 hours
(unless requested otherwise, that is),
can be no longer than 48 hours
and have to be granted by your opponent.

Line Limit:

Min. = 10 lines
Max. = 16 lines
The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both. If no line agreement is made you CANNOT go above 16 lines

General Rules:

1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts.
2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made.
Feeding = DQ.
Recycling = DQ.
Biting = DQ.
No freeposting, swaying or bitching.
Unless a picture battle is agreed upon,
linking to your opponent's picture or posting it
means you will disqualified.
A check in IS mandatory.
Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in.
If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post
must match the 1st person's line amount.

First up, text battling this nerd is fucked!
Just tryin to hide his f@ggotry, and not behind the word Knuck.
Herb sucks, Aint worth a mention, hes a poofter no question..
Aer bed a chick? They’d bounce in a second.
Thinks hes dope but far from it, so full of shit..
If hes ever been swagger jacked, in front of a mirror whilst pullin dick.
…
Aero.. you were never Mr. Squeaky Clean! Check the hindsight!
If your style was ever spotless, its coz you’ve never seen the limelight.
Yur just a gene-pool contaminant, ya whole conceptions a fateful accident,
With luck you’ll post a sewer side-note, without referencing waste management.

Your mom? Whoo, I feed her pills & let others have at her nookie
after she takes some mollies she let's a group of them savage her pussy
then her and I go bouts, it was in the third I gave her the penile
tried to give detour that round worse than Diz did when he freestyled
But let's talk about you, & how I knew you had no chance for the win
I told him make every word count, he asked what's the max and the min
Homosexuality weakens our moral fiber, I just mention the facts
I think of what's wrong in society and Dystopian is the definition of that
So no homo but my dick hangs nine inches I got what girls truly love
Heard you barely hangover three &'re more disappointing than the movie was

mvgt @Aero

dyst was all over the place w/ no real hitters, to statementish

aero had detour and hangover 3 which was roflz, rest was kinda ehhh

Sewer side was extremely forced... rest was too statement like... no real punches... Aero had better attempts... hangover was ok

vote aero

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dystopian (Post 70401)

First up, text battling this nerd is fucked!
Just tryin to hide his f@ggotry, and not behind the word Knuck.
decent recent event concept, nerd's fucked would have flown smoother than nerd is fucked to match with 'word knuck' and 'herb sucks'
Herb sucks, Aint worth a mention, hes a poofter no question..
Aer bed a chick? They’d bounce in a second.
airbed/bounce good connection/flip... seen basically all the 'aer/air' flips there are on him over the years but this was flipped well
Thinks hes dope but far from it, so full of shit..
If hes ever been swagger jacked, in front of a mirror whilst pullin dick.
…
didn't dig this one so much
Aero.. you were never Mr. Squeaky Clean! Check the hindsight!
If your style was ever spotless, its coz you’ve never seen the limelight.
decent
Yur just a gene-pool contaminant, ya whole conceptions a fateful accident,
With luck you’ll post a sewer side-note, without referencing waste management.
that's an old wp unfortunately, been done to death.... you'll know what has/hasn't been done once you've been around a while

Got potential - concepts are good - work on setting them up in the first line instead of just rhyming something, and try rhyming a couple or a few words, it makes the punch come off stronger when you've got a good rhythm.

vs

Quote:

Originally Posted by Aero (Post 71666)

Your mom? Whoo, I feed her pills & let others have at her nookie
after she takes some mollies she let's a group of them savage her pussy
I had to look up both meanings of molly lmao. Obv it lost sting from that but it would have been cool otherwise
then her and I go bouts, it was in the third I gave her the penile
tried to give detour that round worse than Diz did when he freestyled
seen the d to her wp before, flipped with current event was cool
But let's talk about you, & how I knew you had no chance for the win
I told him make every word count, he asked what's the max and the min
cool wp... could've used a 'he's a nerd' set up or something
Homosexuality weakens our moral fiber, I just mention the facts
I think of what's wrong in society and Dystopian is the definition of that
decent
So no homo but my dick hangs nine inches I got what girls truly love
Heard you barely hangover three &'re more disappointing than the movie was
LoL cool

Not your best verse concept wise but the classic Aero swag was there. Still enjoyed.

Was kind of close on concepts, but I've got Aer taking this with a better/more polished delivery.

V/ Aero