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~RustyGunZ~ 05-30-2013 01:27 AM

Arch. vs. Edgar AlPo {Arch wins}
 


The Summer Classic V
The Premier Text Battling Tournament

@Arch. vs. @Edgar AlPo


Rules

Due Dates:
  • Verses are due Friday,
    June 7th 2013 11:59 PM PST.
  • Check Ins are due Monday, June 3rd 2013
  • Voting ends Tuesday 11:59 PM PST.
  • Battles that lack votes may close later.
  • One sided battles may get closed early.
  • Extensions are normally 24 hours
    (unless requested otherwise, that is),
    can be no longer than 48 hours
    and have to be granted by your opponent.


Line Limit:
  • Min. = 10 lines
  • Max. = 16 lines
  • The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both. If no line agreement is made you CANNOT go above 16 lines

General Rules:
  • 1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts.
  • 2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made.
  • Feeding = DQ.
  • Recycling = DQ.
  • Biting = DQ.
  • No freeposting, swaying or bitching.
  • Unless a picture battle is agreed upon,
    linking to your opponent's picture or posting it
    means you will disqualified.
  • A check in IS mandatory.
  • Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in.
  • If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post
    must match the 1st person's line amount.

Arch. 05-30-2013 01:48 AM

I'll try and manage 12

Chyeahhh!!! 05-30-2013 09:40 AM

I'll try and micro manage those 12

Chyeahhh!!! 06-04-2013 04:02 PM

eh... we're endeavoring on an expansion, I went 16 :)

ya'll lookin like he's a hard problem to solve when I beat this fluke last year
come on folks, I'm Chyeahhh..............and he's a zombie... FUCKING DO THE MATH HERE!!!
you no showed our vid battle, dude was missing in action
then I remembered GT, your no-showing was a metaphor for the skill in your matches
I'll be Drect, I'm Mad Ill and you're lacking the feel when you're rapping
funny we're in the same thread,
and I'm showing how you couldn't transition to live battlin in similar fashion
Got god looking down on you like "you fucking waste of flesh "
you were the first dude rapping in front of cameras with a face....for text
you got a nose like you're always smelling something
it's a mix of a double barrel shotgun and KRS, hold your sneeze, and it's Self Destruction
you's a house nigga, that be in the house, nigga
you don't like Omar Epps cause he's black and...cause he's in House, NIGGA!
we don't believe shit in your lines, why even try and act hard
when Ar's 16's are as believable as a few of those in Masaii's backyard
your bars...no fly zone, mine catch con'air over them detroit skies
yours....disaster
mine....go out of there way to leave you twitching on the ground by that detour sign

Arch. 06-08-2013 12:03 AM

Well...

Bitches laugh when this fag's near. This broke fuck stays in bad gear
It's known that anything EA sports is just a rehash from last year
Quit claiming that you're blasting shit. I'll son you like a daddy kid
If you ever had the iron it's cuz your job is involving some caddy shit
Know your place bitch. Arch is a god in this text scene
So if you're feeling defiant... I'll smack you down like he did to you in the league
Chicks use you for head. No broad is touching your balls. You're lame son
You go downtown but you ain't hittin' like Bosh in game 1
Freaks won't hesitate to give me brains but chicks have no doubt that kid is strange
Any bitch making a trip to Alp's would rather be freezing on that mountain range
In a fight, I'd easily beat you. Repeatedly swing just to see where you bleed, dude
Shit... I'll have hands all over your face like a blind person meeting new people
Don't ask bitch. Blockbuster dick when I'm smashin' this fag's chick
In bed I'm iron, man... he's all about speed like Fast 6
The winner's carried on. It's funny Solomon's who you're trying to beat
So if you're Lifted... you're just like THAT fag, trying to model yourself after me


...blah...



mimic 06-08-2013 09:33 AM

we don't believe shit in your lines, why even try and act hard
when Ar's 16's are as believable as a few of those in Masaii's backyard
your bars...no fly zone, mine catch con'air over them detroit skies
yours....disaster
mine....go out of there way to leave you twitching on the ground by that detour sig

vs

Bitches laugh when this fag's near. This broke fuck stays in bad gear
It's known that anything EA sports is just a rehash from last year
Freaks won't hesitate to give me brains but chicks have no doubt that kid is strange
Any bitch making a trip to Alp's would rather be freezing on that mountain range

In a fight, I'd easily beat you. Repeatedly swing just to see where you bleed, dude
Shit... I'll have hands all over your face like a blind person meeting new people

V/Arch

He came consistent and he had LOTB with that mountain range line. I wasn't really feeling the caddy line because I've seen a similar flip before and it felt played a little... but the rest were good-dope. Chyeah your verse was 'okay' but MOST of it were just filler... The last two bars were pretty decent though and I LOL'd at the detour line..

but Arch got this one.

Sharp 06-08-2013 09:49 PM

Similar fashion, AR 16

Face for text and Omar epps were just lolz

Detour coulda been done better

V

EA sports, defiant, bosh, alps


Best verse I've seen from Edgar to date, but arch was pretty consistent throughout. Think he got it. Good battle

V/arch

Arch. 06-11-2013 10:53 PM

Up over the closed shit

Meth 06-11-2013 10:57 PM

I'm a nice guy, let me vote on this for you.

AR 16

vs

EA sports, alps

Not as close as the quotes show tbh. Chyeah was ok but ar 1 was only line i was feeling, altho house nigga was funny sort of.

Archetype had the 2 i highlighted and a lot of other stuff that was better than chyeahs other stuff

V/ Arch

The Bully 06-12-2013 02:36 AM

This was decent.

Alpo didn't have any real haymakers to me. Face for text was alright...couple other decent bars. Seemed like there were some cool concepts but your execution isn't good.

we don't believe shit in your lines, why even try and act hard
when Ar's 16's are as believable as a few of those in Masaii's backyard

Probably the best bar, but AR-16s wouldn't really be in anyone's backyard.
I think you're thinkin AR-15s.

vs.

Bitches laugh when this fag's near. This broke fuck stays in bad gear
It's known that anything EA sports is just a rehash from last year
Freaks won't hesitate to give me brains but chicks have no doubt that kid is strange
Any bitch making a trip to Alp's would rather be freezing on that mountain range
In a fight, I'd easily beat you. Repeatedly swing just to see where you bleed, dude
Shit... I'll have hands all over your face like a blind person meeting new people

The Bosh line wasn't bad either. A couple misses but overall a much more polished verse, definitely enough to take it.

v/ Archibald


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