ill nik-A vs. Rap Maestro {ill nik-A wins}
 

@ill nik-A vs. @Rap Maestro


Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Friday,
  June 7th 2013 11:59 PM PST.
• Check Ins are due Monday, June 3rd 2013
• Voting ends Tuesday 11:59 PM PST.
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are normally 24 hours
  (unless requested otherwise, that is),
  can be no longer than 48 hours
  and have to be granted by your opponent.

Line Limit:

• Min. = 10 lines
• Max. = 16 lines
• The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both. If no line agreement is made you CANNOT go above 16 lines

General Rules:

• 1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts.
• 2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made.
• Feeding = DQ.
• Recycling = DQ.
• Biting = DQ.
• No freeposting, swaying or bitching.
• Unless a picture battle is agreed upon,
  linking to your opponent's picture or posting it
  means you will disqualified.
• A check in IS mandatory.
• Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in.
• If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post
  must match the 1st person's line amount.

Checks in.. 12lines

Welcome!

Get ready

Ready for what roflz

Today is tha deadline so expect my verse

Okay..
I'll put a 'lip-gloss' on dis fagg's head so i can make up' his mind./
Leave his blood stains on the wall as wallpaper.. after i break up his spine.//
Nobody respects your text, they all expecting ur death./
Voters already know you get 'pissed on', like a strip for pregnancy test.//
Depicting you are the shit, but yet to show any proof of this/
U make the MIC look like tampax, A p'ussy with its lips on it//
I use history to emphasize this prag is a phoney/
Watch ma knuckles 'french-kiss' his jaw in holy matrimony.//
U are getting wrecked with gore, i'm ready at any point to rap n brawl/
With lyrics so heavy-metal, i can take out words n crack your skull
ill nik's half to stall, i'm quick like a thief to grab ya spinal chord//
If you pull through the op, i'll be back with ma blue-steel pistol/
Leave a hole so huge in his head, Surgeons can't close up his tissue. . . . .//
. . .and i won't miss you.

Ahem...
 

u have no chance in the classic while my lines are ether
If u don’t understand Maestro… I’m bilingual & don’t know why he signed up either
I’m the leader, we laughin lookin at this lame struggle
u’re lookin to make a splash… u better off trying to cannon ball inside a rain puddle
u cant train trouble makers whose words clown kids
maestro means teacher… but the only thing I’ve learned is how easy the 1st round is
honestly u fall short of a thrill, who ordered the kill?
this is a money driven tourney & u trying to hitch a bus ride without a quarter of skill
my lines paint a winner’s picture with a flawless image
ur work of art involves picking up dirty brushes, stencils & canvases when the drawing’s finished

Bye bye!

Nobody respects your text, they all expecting ur death./
Voters already know you get 'pissed on', like a strip for pregnancy test.//
Depicting you are the shit, but yet to show any proof of this/
U make the MIC look like tampax, A p'ussy with its lips on it//

VS

u have no chance in the classic while my lines are ether
If u don’t understand Maestro… I’m bilingual & don’t know why he signed up either
I’m the leader, we laughin lookin at this lame struggle
u’re lookin to make a splash… u better off trying to cannon ball inside a rain puddle
u cant train trouble makers whose words clown kids
maestro means teacher… but the only thing I’ve learned is how easy the 1st round is
honestly u fall short of a thrill, who ordered the kill?
this is a money driven tourney & u trying to hitch a bus ride without a quarter of skill
my lines paint a winner’s picture with a flawless image
ur work of art involves picking up dirty brushes, stencils & canvases when the drawing’s finished

White washed

Vote Nik for a solid drop an some nice lols

I have to say that this your type of netceeing is boring.. OMG, feel like fainting, very boring.. Now lemme tell u sumfin..
Where i rep{won't tell u, if u ask}
the crit goes thus;
Metaphors
Multis & Rhymes
Flows
Punches
Opener
Closer
Personals
Nameplay
creativity
Wordplay..
And this crits goes down here like hell.. Invited my peepz here and they were like..
"wtf is this? Bro, get ur ass back here where u rule''

Lolzzzz

First of all your a faggot for this


Rap Maestro....

I got nothing....Your pregnancy test line(which was quoted above) was simple as fuck...really your shit is elementary , thats the best way i can say it



Ill Nik....Only line i wasnt feeling(maybe cause it was over my head) was the opener.....The rest was solid...that puddle line was nice...Teacher was my favorite...


V/Nika

the bus bar LOTB and that bar there just killed rap maestro's whole verse seriously.

V/ Nika with a oblitiration!

You see.. SMH. I'll just watch in silence.. There is nothing to learn from these though.. Before I joined here, I saw Alien, Lefty's verses and i was like..''mehn, dis is the deal''.. U peepz have started to make me feel otherwise.. Anyways, I'll continue to brawl till I get to know this your [s]boring[/s] way.. Lolz

How is what you wrote not boring tho?

Rap retard, your verse sucked.

V/ ill nik-A for a solid verse. Idk why he wasted a couple of those bars on an idiot though.

Dudes bitin lines from cassidys battle with freeway like 10years ago an expected to win?!?

Lol

V nik

Is nik indecisive and thats why you wanted to make his mind up for him?

Dumb.

V- nik

Wasn't blown away by the bus line but the mediocrity of pissed on and tampax were easily out jabbed.

V. ill-nik


As soon as I saw the make up your mind shit I knew what I was coming in for. Lines were lacking any real direction, just weak type of shots. ill-nik verse didn't pick up until about half-way and then it was pretty good from there. Solid flips, material, etc.

niks first 4 lines got it

cassidy just didn't have enough


v/nika