Short and Sweet
 

.-/:(</3):\-.

And I've never been so close to death
This the list of Don'ts.. Regrets..
It's cool to love, just don't obsess
Go caress.. Poke the flesh.
Post reply for the too dope for text's
Hopes of you missing me. The goals I set
The gold is ex. I'm just so depressed
Alone. The yes. She moans to 'step
(O.o) I won't abject. Fuck it.
Open Ses' & point the poison lasers
Fuck taxes & fuck dying.. Is it all just coins & phrases?
Treat me like shit while I avoid my favorite
If I died for you, is it more courageous?
The void spreads. Doi, dead. Zoinked
Said them sweet nothings to keep the moist wet
Bad ones are all ya boy gets. Voice left shivers
Spinal tap keg. Eyes are mad grey
Short and sweet. Pile that yay for ya core belief
Smile sashays, still miles that way for the sheep
Aisle last days towards the whores that leave
Denial's a shallow grave. Still dive.
Kill vibes. You got potential. This a will thrive
Drill wives, milf's like pill lines.
Chem smart like bill nye. Dead <3 but a mill likes

Tldr####

"It's cool to love, just don't obsess"

"Open Ses' & point the poison lasers
Fuck taxes & fuck dying.. Is it all just coins & phrases?"

Stand outs to me.

This started off strong, a little different style than your normal drops. Shorter lines, still with the rapid fire multis and off-kilter content and rhyming words. I liked everything from the beginning to the 'Still Dive' rhyme scheme, which felt a little choppy and weaker content wise to me. So overall, a strong piece that lost a bit of steam at the end. Dope verse, enjoyed it.

Maybe you should call her

I agree with cake on the ending portion. More focus on rhyming than content, I think. But this was good overall. Short and sweet :) it was also relatable for anyone really and you expressed yourself well.

yeah that last part was garbage. my apologies.