Crime business, no eye witness.. shots roar when I stretch the metal
 

Burner up in the briefcase, your whole top floor can get the memo

Yay!

Prime thick bitch, slow eye twitches... a raunch whore with the stench of devils
Murder stunk in her teeth case, this poor blond boar can get the mentos.

I liked this one

No tags?

tags.

Debated as the rawest on pages. God of the Matrix.
If your jaw droppers are sick... it's 'cause yawning's contagious.

Dope

U should battle, pussy

Take that as a compliment

you listen to death reborn yet

Funny, I'm listening to it now

Good "get shit done" music so far

You?

type of shit is wack to me but the battlers liked it. you just know them, dallie. Me and julie would say these garbage ass lines all day. No wonder he took up battling when he was here.

Shit's so unbelievably corny that I'm glad my writing sees more than netcees.co. Well at least the non rhythmical rap ones.

yea the production on it is crazy

celph apathy and paz murder everything

esoteric is wack

everyone else is aight

Yes. It's not the wordplay, necessarily, it's the way you have to word it to have that, 'ohhhhh' reaction. A lot of Eminem's newer wordplay is overlooked because it isn't worded out in as much of a dumbed down, easy to digest way. I hate battling.

I'll send a fucking axe at you if you insist on a fuckin accent

eminem plays around with really corny concepts now. I guess that's why they call it window Paine. Ugh

A,B? Lets C!

i reread that line. it was okay. I guess. Its just common dialogue/idiomatic language fused into one. Mildly simple. I think we talked about this before. Lets have more nerd writing talks. txt me

Eso been a basic bitch for awhile now.

Most wordplay is just happening upon it. Jaw droppers being a term used for a wow line, combined with calling it boring and yawning being contagious mixed with the slang of sick. It's a lot happening in one concept, in my opinion. Good wordplay is worded correctly is hard to come across, in my experience. I'd say 19 out of 20 'punches' are extremely corny and being forced just for the sake of putting out material. Filler, if you will lol I really don't wanna get going about how over done battling is. Battling leagues lol Battling is meant to be personalized. The scale with which battling is done is ridiculous. Especially in text where everyone wants a punchline for every bar. That's why battle verses are stale. There's no room for expression or personality because you're so busy trying to pack as much into a verse as possible. Shit is just corny, really.

Eminem's style has changed. The window pain line and plenty more are terrible. MMLP2 is a bit better. He builds on plays and carries them for multiple lines. Pitching a bitch. It's more subtly clever than some wowing type shit.

Stan'ing hard.

celph needs a full length, solo album already.

he speaks....
 

Like this one as well. Care to snf?