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7. Tic Tac vs 10. Greed - Greed WINS

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@Tic Tac @Greed

Greed AKA Pryde

Quote:

Originally Posted by Greed (Post 306593)

Obama black as me. Of course I voted for him.

Enough personals to leave all hope for dude smothered
We knew you were black, but quotes like this really show ya TRUE Color
You’re the biggest Bitch in ya fam, I Break your Mother’s Back & she takes it
She’s fully Recovered…While you still avoid each & every Crack in the Pavement
I have a few L’s so when I Spark Up it’s to get high and engage
While you have enough L’s to Spark Up debates on increasing Retirement age
Ya girl needs a diet, I’m talkin the NO calorie treatment
Cuz when I Spread that Mayo Nasal drip so bad you’d think it was Allergy season
NC is dead now & this kid is just trash
So anyone seen Pryin the Archives is just reliving the past

Your bitch banging on my door, swears you will die for the win
Im thinking how could this jerk off me? I probably should invite her in
She swears you never treat her right, and around you she dont sleep well
Your version of dick in a box involves a knife and switching to female
My old hoes hmu cause I give them dick thats mad long
For you to get in ur xbox, ur required to install the kinnect add on
Even before basic playability, bitch you visually you aint an 8th of me
Bitches been saying you need tic tacs so long you ended up taking it as a name to keep
Take caution, this nigga swear his lyrics are visions installed by super demonic demons
.... But im from a haunted house 2, so ima just pistol whip it till it weakens

Honestly I am kinda disappointed. I don't know what happened here, Tic, I wasn't really feeling any of your lines, maybe I just didn't get them but I thought most fell short with forced wordplay. Greed your verse wasn't a whole lot better but the dick in the box was halfway decent for me, I think Tic Tac fell short of his potential to drop a dope verse,meanwhile Greed's was slightly more consistent.

Vote- Greed

Quote:

Originally Posted by Tic Tac (Post 321483)

Enough personals to leave all hope for dude smothered
We knew you were black, but quotes like this really show ya TRUE Color

This was just okay. Not that hard hitting and the quote isn't that damning. Okay-ish.

You’re the biggest Bitch in ya fam, I Break your Mother’s Back & she takes it
She’s fully Recovered…While you still avoid each & every Crack in the Pavement

No.

I have a few L’s so when I Spark Up it’s to get high and engage
While you have enough L’s to Spark Up debates on increasing Retirement age

Played.

Ya girl needs a diet, I’m talkin the NO calorie treatment
Cuz when I Spread that Mayo Nasal drip so bad you’d think it was Allergy season

Nah.

NC is dead now & this kid is just trash
So anyone seen Pryin the Archives is just reliving the past

Wording was there but didn't really hit.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Greed (Post 322405)

Your bitch banging on my door, swears you will die for the win
Im thinking how could this jerk off me? I probably should invite her in

Okay-ish. Kind of weird wording.

She swears you never treat her right, and around you she dont sleep well
Your version of dick in a box involves a knife and switching to female

Don't know if this is played or not. Either way not that creative.

My old hoes hmu cause I give them dick thats mad long
For you to get in ur xbox, ur required to install the kinnect add on

Ex box wordplay? Really? The kinnect wordplay was nice, though. Saved this from being too played. That might be played too but I'm not familiar with it.

Even before basic playability, bitch you visually you aint an 8th of me
Bitches been saying you need tic tacs so long you ended up taking it as a name to keep

Nah.

Take caution, this nigga swear his lyrics are visions installed by super demonic demons
.... But im from a haunted house 2, so ima just pistol whip it till it weakens

Super demonic demons?

This was pretty weak. You guys just talked about each other's girlfriends a lot. Which was odd. I think Greed had a less-bad verse.

v/Greed

Not the greatest battle here, both of you have potential

Tic had a decent opener but the rest just missed, the ideas are there but the wording and the way you run w/ the direction just kills the punch

Greed was the same, started out w/ a decent opener but just fell flat
However the wording was a lil better and the misses weren't as bad so he gets
the W

v/greed

Weird battle, no lines were good, greed had more of an attack but this wasn't good

Vote greed

Hi...

Tic Tac disappointed me here cuz he usually drops better than this...
I really could find anything I liked in his verse...
Greed wasn't that great either but I liked the tic tac line...
Too many played/simple lines from both guys...

Vote- Greed...

Quote:

Originally Posted by Tic Tac (Post 321483)

Greed AKA Pryde

Enough personals to leave all hope for dude smothered
We knew you were black, but quotes like this really show ya TRUE Color
I meannn w/e
You’re the biggest Bitch in ya fam, I Break your Mother’s Back & she takes it
She’s fully Recovered…While you still avoid each & every Crack in the Pavement
nah
I have a few L’s so when I Spark Up it’s to get high and engage
While you have enough L’s to Spark Up debates on increasing Retirement age
nah
Ya girl needs a diet, I’m talkin the NO calorie treatment
Cuz when I Spread that Mayo Nasal drip so bad you’d think it was Allergy season
nah
NC is dead now & this kid is just trash
So anyone seen Pryin the Archives is just reliving the past
nah

Quote:

Originally Posted by Greed (Post 322405)

Your bitch banging on my door, swears you will die for the win
Im thinking how could this jerk off me? I probably should invite her in
no
She swears you never treat her right, and around you she dont sleep well
Your version of dick in a box involves a knife and switching to female
nooo
My old hoes hmu cause I give them dick thats mad long
For you to get in ur xbox, ur required to install the kinnect add on
im kinda sure ive seen u use sumthin like this b4 and its played
Even before basic playability, bitch you visually you aint an 8th of me
Bitches been saying you need tic tacs so long you ended up taking it as a name to keep
corny
Take caution, this nigga swear his lyrics are visions installed by super demonic demons
.... But im from a haunted house 2, so ima just pistol whip it till it weakens
no

V/Greed...Im kinda shocked I thought tic wud kill him easily but he didn't idk what this was here but I didn't enjoy it too much...greed was well w/e he won