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https://soundcloud.com/user273548746/bags

@Bags

let me know what you think

Lmao i didnt think u took me serious
But Bags is a faggot anyway

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Lol wtgay?

Ak looool. U giant faggit bahaha.

This wasn't bad, but it just sounded like one huge run-on sentence.

Who are you?

Wow.. Dude i dont wanna hate. But you reeeally gotta add some emotion and not just read your shit. Say that shit with some conviction. Like you mean it.

An example of how a person can say some ill shit and it sound wack. Delivery is paramount

Mad potential, just work on memorizing, rehearsing, and spit with energy

actually had a similar impression from the verse

not bad at all, just could use something more forceful behind it

loll dont make me tell this nigga to make a part2 on u fag boy

realized why this shit sounded so shit

none of the stuff most people battle rap about is true, and i think when it comes down to it if im not doing it then im not gonna have conviction

im out

90% of rappers don't do what they talk about in their songs hahah