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Orc 05-06-2013 04:05 PM

Orc vs Chyeaa - ORC WINS
 
due in 3 days

10 lines

Chyeahhh!!! 05-06-2013 04:08 PM

I'm going 16 fam, match the kid

Orc 05-06-2013 04:09 PM

no problem

Chyeahhh!!! 05-06-2013 11:22 PM

checked the BA, saw your lack of shows, and was met with disappointment
I'd say your days we're numbered, but you’re so bad with calendars
I’m surprised you kept, dis appointment
You backwards hall of famer, don’t be shocked that I showed up
If we traveled back before your concepts,son, you’d be in or on crO’s nuts
heard that coke habit got you broke captain, I’ll just make it brief
all that blow n your nose got you open wider than a hanger, chief
blammin’ for the title, I’m harder than seeing a person/age
and I'm keep'n it a hunned when I say your 1 in 99 for chances of survival
I’m John Rambo, you more like John Stamos, we can bar tango
Fluck what ever guard he in....
I’ll put my foot in your ass at odd and akward angles and arch my ankle
Say I’m not stable? congrats on win'n the "obv award" of the day
I named every one of my guns after a bad bitch….that'll blow every last one of yours away
I bêt when Lama contacted you about HOF and doing your highlights
You were mixing llama extract juice for your face mask and doing your highlights
I'm at you in less than 24, you know the god's bars come heavy
suttin like your period, not to mention we all know pretty boys take long to get ready

Orc 05-07-2013 01:27 PM

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this dude is a joke, false starts every month w/ news of a hoax
been screaming This Is The End for yrs. Seth Rogen prolly pays dude to Promote
congrats on dropping first but you just a bitch who uses lies
& if I dropped Mayan first you'd prolly order ya family to commit Group Suicide
This fake is a hack, basic n' trash.. plus ull never be dropping me
You just a Snake in the Grass. shits like the layout of Metal Gear Solid three
O's dicking ya Ma up while u on ya end of world steez, shit is bananas
u keep dropping those Pussy Threads while ya girl takes off her Hello Kitty Pajamas
ur likely a wacko Boss.. i'll fry C n' smash a broad
ya career ain't just Curtains. it's Tables, Chairs & the entire Ikea catalog
you a dumb heathen, dropping wack for some reason
plus ya lines ain't making the Cut. they like Pancakebrah during Bulk season
ima straight 10, you get locked up for grooming gay friends
we'll call that shit an Arrested Development... & ironically you Batemen
C's feeble & worthless, call me a faggot: u can even go First bitch
& ima call you One Second. cuz that's how long I spend peeping ya verses

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Vinny 05-07-2013 01:51 PM

no votes until links.

Sharp 05-07-2013 02:38 PM

Dis appointment was okay, cro line was funnyish

V

This is the end, Mayan, hello kitty and arrested development were dope


Orc had better hits all around, liked the battle but he got it pretty easily. Chyeah didn't have any real standout lines but wording was nice

V/ Orc

Flow 05-08-2013 10:04 AM

Lol Orc smashed this - nice drop son

Lotto Smirk 05-08-2013 03:06 PM

Vote orc nice verse man will break it down later

ive seen something like this somewere before tho

ur likely a wacko Boss.. i'll fry C n' smash a broad
ya career ain't just Curtains. it's Tables, Chairs & the entire Ikea catalog

Orc 05-08-2013 04:24 PM

i wrote a similar Curtains line a while back

GKillaZ 05-08-2013 10:40 PM

!!!! -
heard that coke habit got you broke captain, I’ll just make it brief
all that blow n your nose got you open wider than a hanger, chief
I’m John Rambo, you more like John Stamos, we can bar tango
Fluck what ever guard he in....
I’ll put my foot in your ass at odd and akward angles and arch my ankle
Say I’m not stable? congrats on win'n the "obv award" of the day
I named every one of my guns after a bad bitch….that'll blow every last one of yours away

vs

Orc:
this dude is a joke, false starts every month w/ news of a hoax
been screaming This Is The End for yrs. Seth Rogen prolly pays dude to Promote
congrats on dropping first but you just a bitch who uses lies
& if I dropped Mayan first you'd prolly order ya family to commit Group Suicide
This fake is a hack, basic n' trash.. plus ull never be dropping me
You just a Snake in the Grass. shits like the layout of Metal Gear Solid three
ur likely a wacko Boss.. i'll fry C n' smash a broad
ya career ain't just Curtains. it's Tables, Chairs & the entire Ikea catalog
C's feeble & worthless, call me a faggot: u can even go First bitch
& ima call you One Second. cuz that's how long I spend peeping ya verses

overall:
this was a really good battle. I really liked those bars from cyeah!!! that shit was real nicely put together, and after reading it I thought I was going to give my vote to him. But then I read Orcs its def more consistent, and although I prob enjoyed those 2 bars from cyeah!!! more, Orcs verse was just solid punch after punch, it flowed nice good use of multi's . so yeah props to both ... Vote - Orc

Chyeahhh!!! 05-08-2013 10:53 PM

he speaks....
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by GKillaZ (Post 56507)
!!!! -
heard that coke habit got you broke captain, I’ll just make it brief
all that blow n your nose got you open wider than a hanger, chief
I’m John Rambo, you more like John Stamos, we can bar tango
Fluck what ever guard he in....
I’ll put my foot in your ass at odd and akward angles and arch my ankle
Say I’m not stable? congrats on win'n the "obv award" of the day
I named every one of my guns after a bad bitch….that'll blow every last one of yours away

vs

Orc:
this dude is a joke, false starts every month w/ news of a hoax
been screaming This Is The End for yrs. Seth Rogen prolly pays dude to Promote
congrats on dropping first but you just a bitch who uses lies
& if I dropped Mayan first you'd prolly order ya family to commit Group Suicide
This fake is a hack, basic n' trash.. plus ull never be dropping me
You just a Snake in the Grass. shits like the layout of Metal Gear Solid three
ur likely a wacko Boss.. i'll fry C n' smash a broad
ya career ain't just Curtains. it's Tables, Chairs & the entire Ikea catalog
C's feeble & worthless, call me a faggot: u can even go First bitch
& ima call you One Second. cuz that's how long I spend peeping ya verses

overall:
this was a really good battle. I really liked those bars from cyeah!!! that shit was real nicely put together, and after reading it I thought I was going to give my vote to him. But then I read Orcs its def more consistent, and although I prob enjoyed those 2 bars from cyeah!!! more, Orcs verse was just solid punch after punch, it flowed nice good use of multi's . so yeah props to both ... Vote - Orc

now this is what I"m talking about. Son is brand new here and knows how to give feed. Props my dude

Nigma 05-10-2013 06:22 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Edgar AlPo (Post 55431)
checked the BA, saw your lack of shows, and was met with disappointment
I'd say your days we're numbered, but you’re so bad with calendars
I’m surprised you kept, dis appointment
Feel days numbered/calender is a bit played but the dis-appointment joint made the bar bearable. Coulda been better coulda been worse
You backwards hall of famer, don’t be shocked that I showed up
If we traveled back before your concepts,son, you’d be in or on crO’s nuts
lol was feelin the punch here
heard that coke habit got you broke captain, I’ll just make it brief
all that blow n your nose got you open wider than a hanger, chief
setup got my hopes up for a solid personal punch, and it was alright, but feel ya coulda done more with it
blammin’ for the title, I’m harder than seeing a person/age
and I'm keep'n it a hunned when I say your 1 in 99 for chances of survival
what is this i dont even
I’m John Rambo, you more like John Stamos, we can bar tango
Fluck what ever guard he in....
I’ll put my foot in your ass at odd and akward angles and arch my ankle
no punch really but a funny image with some decent flow
Say I’m not stable? congrats on win'n the "obv award" of the day
I named every one of my guns after a bad bitch….that'll blow every last one of yours away
s'all about the good girls, minty
I bêt when Lama contacted you about HOF and doing your highlights
You were mixing llama extract juice for your face mask and doing your highlights
giggled faggy like irl
I'm at you in less than 24, you know the god's bars come heavy
suttin like your period, not to mention we all know pretty boys take long to get ready
adequate closer, nothin jaw dropping but decent finish

Quote:

Originally Posted by Orc (Post 55573)
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this dude is a joke, false starts every month w/ news of a hoax
been screaming This Is The End for yrs. Seth Rogen prolly pays dude to Promote
lol! nice opener
congrats on dropping first but you just a bitch who uses lies
& if I dropped Mayan first you'd prolly order ya family to commit Group Suicide
pretty creative flip on mayan, another solid bar
This fake is a hack, basic n' trash.. plus ull never be dropping me
You just a Snake in the Grass. shits like the layout of Metal Gear Solid three
nice rhyme scheme, im sure the punch was dope but i never played the metal gear solid series so it fall on deaf ears
O's dicking ya Ma up while u on ya end of world steez, shit is bananas
u keep dropping those Pussy Threads while ya girl takes off her Hello Kitty Pajamas
fuuuck haha first bar to actually make me lol irl. nicely worded
ur likely a wacko Boss.. i'll fry C n' smash a broad
ya career ain't just Curtains. it's Tables, Chairs & the entire Ikea catalog
caught the career/curtains bit but might be missin something with the rest of the punch
you a dumb heathen, dropping wack for some reason
plus ya lines ain't making the Cut. they like Pancakebrah during Bulk season
pancakebrah shaves his armpits
ima straight 10, you get locked up for grooming gay friends
we'll call that shit an Arrested Development... & ironically you Batemen
p much same as the metal gear solid line, i havent gotten into arrested development but the setup/flow were both nice
C's feeble & worthless, call me a faggot: u can even go First bitch
& ima call you One Second. cuz that's how long I spend peeping ya verses
pretty decent closer, not much else to say

chyea came with some solid lines and overall wasnt bad at all but orc was polished throughout. no poor lines on orcs behalf, and his better lines were a caliber higher then chyea here imo. solid showing by both

+1 Orc


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