Week 5: sacrifice (1-2) vs. Mr. J (0-2) \\ Mr. J wins via no-show
 

Season 3

The Basics | Read the full rules here.

Verses are due Friday at 11:59 p.m. PT. THERE ARE NO EXTENSIONS.

Votes are due Sunday at 11:59 p.m. PT.

Verses may not exceed 48 lines or 650 words unless agreed upon by the opponent.

Voting on three battles is required. If you win and don't vote, you will receive a loss instead. If you lose and don't vote, you will receive a one-week suspension. Please post links to your three votes in this thread.


Topic


"Tell Me What You See"


Good luck, @sacrifice and @Mr. J.

Check

@Mr. J and @sacrifice, I somehow copied the wrong topic into this thread. My bad. The mistake has been fixed.

I'm here! Been a very existential kind of week. Back in it.

From a beggar in the street to a fella with reach
a few things you learn where they never would teach
when pressured with heat you never sweating a beat..
just tryna shelter my needs..left em like elderly knees...
its Elvis & Me never caught below the hip..
Tell me if you notice it? I'm an impulsive dick
I get my nicks in with a few late night shreddings
because a few pages won't persuade my ending
I made my sentence but they changed my word
but do you see it? How do I explain the pace I curbed
the way I swerved and made it base like third
They made it safe...I turned..made it home. my first
Made it snow. my curse. Favored shone in my work
its April though my thirst made it so awkward
if she. May interject. then Julie is never a threat
but she calls herself Ju'ly cause you sweat her respect
Springing to action but always having to fall back...
tell me what do you see? Tell me if you caught that