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Rawn MD 03-23-2014 03:33 PM

Same as Before...
 
SnF

Find me a middle man...
I got young gunners who'd kill for a little bread to get ahead
A crooked ass criminal at his pinnacle, with past acquittals in the feds
Keep my eyes low, behind those rose prada nickel plated lens
and tread with more a low profile than the tires hulled in the v8 benz
My minds so Capone, or Geryon with a list of sick demands
with twice the Gaul n no flaws than diamonds ship direct from France
drinkin raw, single malt that burns with the strength of ants
study'n law by the clause, I'd take that charge just to catch a glance
A strategist, protagonist, that plans the best when damned
Hyperactive pistol grip, bullets Ritalin regrets through blood n sand
My head is, invested in measurements, sums, cuts and grams
Defense system, munitions, guns, business, drugs, trusts and grants
Saki sippin, double dippin', embezzlements just another scam
they watch mine, I watch the time on my rolex bezel colored crayon
Slangin raw, China paw and angel dust in stables from Japan
strong-armin the game with fatal gloved hands in case the gun jams

Rawn MD 03-23-2014 03:44 PM

http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=141
http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=60290
@Chyeahhh Guevara @Nigma

Chyeahhh!!! 03-24-2014 03:25 PM

Shit was proper like. The rust shows though as im sure mine would as well. Im gonna drop something this week

Rawn MD 03-26-2014 07:20 PM

climb

Fig 03-27-2014 11:15 PM

This was pretty nice. Personally, considering its a snf piece, I would liked to have seen closer attention to them syllables. I need flow nigga. This read kinda clunky to me.

BUT

You're strength really lies in the swagged out imagery. Those last two lines were especially nice. Keep doin you

Rawn MD 03-31-2014 06:02 PM

thnx 4 the feed fig

Geno 03-31-2014 09:40 PM

This was dope my G

Exis 04-08-2014 02:49 AM

Cool stuff...flow was a little anal at times but you know, do you.Imagery was nice in places...thought the second half was stronger than the first.

Enjoyed it, stay upwards.

King Ra. 04-08-2014 07:30 AM

Rawn MacGod. Sup homie? This started off slow, I believe the first two lines and I had thought that you either just chopped some shit up together or you're shaking off the rust. But then things really started picking up. Flow was pretty decent, but it was more of your content and imagery that shined here, which is your strong suit. So all in all, this definitely was a good lil swag flex. We should collab again soon.

Good stuff.


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