Plastic Parts
 

Timing defines the grind I’m finding amongst the days
refining the climb that minds apply & carry beyond our ways
the strong will aid with pay & stay atop the business end
different men make decisions when mistakes become wisdom’s friend
my position stands to better myself in endeavors that help
putting me in a spot that plots with a shot to forever excel
I won’t surrender & fail with stale trails of failure behind me
walk the talk & place no fault while enjoying tailored reclined seats
paper reminds he who seeks shall find the answers to hard work
with a part worth more than whores, remorse & a heart hurt…
…by words, lies, cries designed to confuse amused takers
doing a huge favor to introduce later & force u to choose traitors
I won’t lose haters! I got a good sense for mistrust’s big lusts
I smell hell in detail & prevail when I stop the insult’s impulse
Putting a finish to these snakes influx to deter the image I made
Limit the vivid imagination to mimic infatuation while critics get laid
victims ashamed as the cat’s vision’s to blame… it’s the truth that hurts
only vampires approve those flirts so I don’t dispute their work
I abuse their worth when I value mine checkmating their mind games
Knowing pleasure isn’t a treasure chest blessed only to find pain
Enjoy your timeframe while age is engaged on the road took
Cold crooks sold looks then we turn the faded page on an old book

Sounds poetic more than anything, quite a dope piece though
I think your multi's help you shine, but it feels a bit outlandish after awhile
maybe it's just be and short syllable multi's weird me out in long lined verses
regardless the topic was dope, not quite what I expected from the title
nice drop regardless breh

this is a grown mans verse here

Flow was liquid, could be ripped to any beat for real
Content was very wise, like on some nas type shit with a longer winded flow to it
Had a rack of standouts bars and phrases in it that make a nigga stop and think like -ya, he's got a fucking point right there

Ggood to see you gracing the om nika, I hope you get busy in the write nights when they kick off this week, should be dope

Anything else?

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EDIT: closed until any other piece is fed.

flow and rhymes were niceeeee, smooth as hell.
loved the content as well. keep posting in here dude, shit was dope imo.