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Thinkin about the situation at hand
A kid looking in the mirror yet facing a man.
Making a plan while debating demands
Weighing the outcomes of decisions that created this chance
Im just working for a future wit my fate in my hands!
Hate all around me, lovin from a distance
My heart got broke, the reciept was a misprint.
Ain't taking it back I'm amazed at the fact
That I can relax wit a blade in my back
Just blaze up a sack, its fading to black
The music dies out while I'm Layin a track.
Im playin it back I'm playing it back
But I ain't fuckin playing I'm just saying the facts!
I've done wat I can I'm a man, never done
Put my daughter on my back her loves forever #1

Short little drop here but nice nonetheless. The second line here was the best line here imo. A kid looking in the mirror and facing a man. I feel like that from time to time lol. It's a story of raising a daughter and the pressures it brings which was the strong point of this piece because I could feel the emotions behind this. Nice man.

Ain't taking it back I'm amazed at the fact
That I can relax wit a blade in my back

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dope piece man, feedin it cuz the title says so lmao jk.. nah hut for real i agree wih zen, second line was fire, flow was smooth as fuck. good shit brethren

Lol thanks for the feed guys much appreciated

Ain't taking it back I'm amazed at the fact
That I can relax wit a blade in my back
Just blaze up a sack, its fading to black
The music dies out while I'm Layin a track.

Nicely done, you have a great flow that would fit well with the
right kinds of beats, i suggest if you have not already done so
to begin laying dope lyrics on wax ASAP LOL on the real, its
great introspection, anyone with a kid can relate, where I find
alot of times i still feel like a kid but i gotta be responsible for that baby, ya feel?
Dope