Lumber.
 

Yo I told this cute runner to suck my huge lumber
while I banged her pussyhole with a poop covered cucumber
I'm in a band I play the nude drummer
I always chew cunt first and then swallow the spray
every whore dies inside from hollow decay
The Lord is your Shepard so just follow and pray
I'll never forget what Lindsey told me over that bottle of grey
didn't sleep Saturday via Molly and yay
life is a holiday so it's probably ok
Masai went to paprika Streakta caught Somalian aids
plastic is to cracker as water's a slave
forgive my geometry ayahuasca brain
actually fuck this I'm barely alive look
bic a paper airplane chuck it at some very dry woods
breastlings with hepher physics
matter fact this the best thing I've ever written

Absolute pile of shite. I loved the bit where you stopped, that was dope. But I've gotta admit, I lost interest at "Yo"

Keep on not writing.

For some reason when I read this I kept thinking of Action Bronson's verse in NaNa. Specifically the first few lines. Idk why. Either way this verse was strange, but the flow especially on the masaii lines was very good. Not much else to say but I liked it.

lol @wise
your an odd one

I thought this was good. Definitely not the best thing you've ever written. But it seemed a bit uninspired. I think you need to flush out a few topics where you arent fully comfortable, as is evident in here. The reason I say you do this is because, you'll feel a bit of discomfort. Which is also the best. You don't want to feel like youve got shit on lock when you're in your own house. Rob someone elses house and have their shit on lock too. Have your entire city block on lock. Not just your own home. Then take over counties. States, and regions. Then countries. Your own home is where you create the best. Leave, because although you may own it, it becomes boring. Not saying this is boring, cause I enjoyed it. But you may become bored.

haha! this shit was retard strength

Lol'd at the title. Random awesomeness imo. Keep dropping. I want to eventually have a rematch also, u turd nugget, you.

better than OP

The first half or so was strong. It seemed to stumble a bit after the holiday line, which was a highlight.

forgive my geometry ayahuasca brain

LOL this line is actually kind of dope and the paper airplane one was good visuals good little idgaf piece tbh

You got to pay me ho

Or pay me no


Attention

oh fuck yeah, bud
thats what im talkin boot
lolts of lols, lots of rhymes. dope, ha
this what i was lookin for