Destroyer vs Bender - DESTROYER WINS
 

Due monday night
10 lines

http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=56010
http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=54069

@Destroyer

ok I will drop 10 for this tonight

You guys are just a bunch of stupid haters….Destro I just did u a favor
And complained about the voters now, so you don’t have to do it later
I see your 5-10 and that’s about average right?
Yea, if we’re referring to this middle aged Caucasian faggot’s height
You need a tutor when you write? maybe I could getcha some help
But you need more aids then the ones attached to Strikta’s blood cells
Couldn’t finish the NBL , your only mention in the mag…was that
You’ve been in and out of it so much your wife wishes it was her vag
You‘re a troll bro, I would love drive over you with my whip
Like you were actually a fucking troll….that lived underneath a bridge








@Destroyer

i'm on the come up, pretty soon you'll be watching me sellout
meanwhile your stock be continually dropping like strikta's T-cell count
des is a demon with hits, when I start to write, I go nuts
bout to leave Bender iced wit six holes in em like hush's box of donuts
you feel that pounding in your head while you try to retort?
that's not your heartbeat.. it's a knock on the door looking for back child support
yeah des is old as fuck, but that's no reason to be hatin' kid
that just means I'll probably die before u... find a loving relationship
u been gone for too long, now ur wack & no one cares faggot
take advice from strik: life is precious.. especially when ur girl looks just like that bitch


will get my links up tonight

http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=54069
http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=55562

Destro


Relationships, lol you used a precious line and dough nuts.


Vs

Bender

Opener was decent, wife's vag was decent



More consistent verse better misses better wording and better concepts Bender takes this ..

Bender
First line was ok. Decent clowning hit, and I'm assuming he moans about voters? I'm new here so will have to get up to scratch on where these personals come from. I liked the idea behind the next bar, although if 5-10 is an average score here, that's pretty shit. Actually, vet shit. Still though, tidy hit. Next bar was ok-ish. Felt like you coulda utilized the Strikta aids thing better, but having said that, I inly just caught the thread so dunno how much that play has been murdered (or not). Blood & Some rhymed weak for me. Yea it's a near rhyme and all that jazz, but it just didn't come off right for me. Last 2 bars were horrible. They looked extremely weak in contrast to your previous bars, and it was like you lost the will to finish strong.

Destroyer
Weak opener. Benders Strikta bar wasn't that good, but you just made it look much better. Wasn't keen on the multi whatsoever. Next bar was soft. And your set up made little sense, so just came off as filler. Next bar wasn't any better, and it wasn't until your NEXT bar that I knew you were tryna take a shot at his age. That ain't good, cuz it makes the previous bar look wasted. Next bar again, still no improvement. How is telling him to find a loving relationship gonna hurt him? It's not a hit, and it was another waste of 2 lines. Closer had a bit of relatable content, but again, not strong enough to act as the nail in his coffin.

Bender, verse was alright other than the closing 2 bars.
Destroyer, I was left after every line, hoping it'd pick up.. but it didn't.

MVGT Bender

2-0 up

benders verse was pretty funny but didn't really have any oh shit disses just made me laugh. Destroyer aka hypocritical homotextual ghost written for whining ass bitch had the lotb, was more creative with his bars and had less misses

Vote - Diastroyer

RTF Please: http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=57076

You guys are just a bunch of stupid haters….Destro I just did u a favor
And complained about the voters now, so you don’t have to do it later

Lol, think you could have did more with this, tho

You need a tutor when you write? maybe I could getcha some help
But you need more aids then the ones attached to Strikta’s blood cells

H I V, dude. If he did have AIDS, I'd say this was a pretty decent concept.

Couldn’t finish the NBL , your only mention in the mag…was that
You’ve been in and out of it so much your wife wishes it was her vag

This was funny, to me. Basic but funny. I liked it.

vs

i'm on the come up, pretty soon you'll be watching me sellout
meanwhile your stock be continually dropping like strikta's T-cell count

You hate simile's but used one here. Lol, smh. Decent thou.

des is a demon with hits, when I start to write, I go nuts
bout to leave Bender iced wit six holes in em like hush's box of donuts

I liked this. And what do you know, ANOTHER simile, lol. Co'monnnn.

you feel that pounding in your head while you try to retort?
that's not your heartbeat.. it's a knock on the door looking for back child support

Lol, I think this could have been executed a lot better, but still cool. Considering I just read in some thread he was just divorced an shit.

u been gone for too long, now ur wack & no one cares faggot
take advice from strik: life is precious.. especially when ur girl looks just like that bitch

Lol, played but still gave me a chuckle.

Overall. I got Des taking this. I think Bender's 1st half of his verse was weird and not effective. Like the comparing his record to his height. Being 5'10 really isn't an insult, tbh. So that was a complete miss. The crying about votes, was alright, I think you could have gotten a little more witty with it, just came off kind of blahhh'ish to me. Bars quoted are the bars I enjoyed or had potential to land effectively but fell short. With that being said, I got Des taking this barely.

v/Des

You guys are just a bunch of stupid haters….Destro I just did u a favor
And complained about the voters now, so you don’t have to do it later

vs

i'm on the come up, pretty soon you'll be watching me sellout
meanwhile your stock be continually dropping like strikta's T-cell count
des is a demon with hits, when I start to write, I go nuts
bout to leave Bender iced wit six holes in em like hush's box of donuts

bender had some decent concepts but the wording/punchline was awkward
des had a couple too (though they were superior concepts) and the ones that landed did better.

v/ des

3-2 Des up

You guys are just a bunch of stupid haters….Destro I just did u a favor
And complained about the voters now, so you don’t have to do it later
lmao funny
I see your 5-10 and that’s about average right?
Yea, if we’re referring to this middle aged Caucasian faggot’s height
meh weak too statementish
You need a tutor when you write? maybe I could getcha some help
But you need more aids then the ones attached to Strikta’s blood cells
forced cuz its 'aid' in the case of help, not 'aids' you dont say it liek that so its forced
Couldn’t finish the NBL , your only mention in the mag…was that
You’ve been in and out of it so much your wife wishes it was her vag
played but still lol
You‘re a troll bro, I would love drive over you with my whip
Like you were actually a fucking troll….that lived underneath a bridge
wtf weak

vs


i'm on the come up, pretty soon you'll be watching me sellout
meanwhile your stock be continually dropping like strikta's T-cell count
lold
des is a demon with hits, when I start to write, I go nuts
bout to leave Bender iced wit six holes in em like hush's box of donuts
cool
you feel that pounding in your head while you try to retort?
that's not your heartbeat.. it's a knock on the door looking for back child support
wack
yeah des is old as fuck, but that's no reason to be hatin' kid
that just means I'll probably die before u... find a loving relationship
lmaoo
u been gone for too long, now ur wack & no one cares faggot
take advice from strik: life is precious.. especially when ur girl looks just like that bitch
rofl ok closer


This was an okay battle Bender impressed me with his opener but had more misses than Des

Des had some funny shit and was more consistent



V Des

up

I'd like to edit my vote, please.

v/Bender.

Bender had the 5-10 line I guess. Verse was mostly jabs.

Des had die before you and precious, with a nod of approval for the donut line.

V destroyer

both verses was decent, Both had some nice concepts & funny bars.


Vote-Destroyer for a better concepts & wording, I thought his lines funnier.

I'd like to also edit my vote.

better concepts & wording, I thought his lines funnier.

Vote - Bender

I like how people call me out for swaying, but doing this type of shit in a battle thread is perfectly fine, huh?