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Witty 02-22-2014 03:02 AM
You Were My Big Bang
 
This thread can be deleted.

PancakeBrah 02-22-2014 03:09 AM
I want to steal your first line and run with it. Well done on that.

Will feed this in-depth tomorrow.

Dove Dozer 02-22-2014 02:58 PM
Gay.

PancakeBrah 02-22-2014 06:54 PM
Why did you do this? Why delete?

Witty 02-22-2014 06:57 PM
It wasn't good enough.

Dove Dozer 02-22-2014 07:12 PM
I was gonna feed this. I quite enjoyed this piece. Damn

Hush 02-23-2014 09:40 AM
Quitter

Sick 02-23-2014 09:52 AM
I read the original before you deleted it


it was good but basic rhymes, kid's stuff


Up your game


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